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Well it was good read. The plot in the first half was better than the second half. it was depressing true but it was so interesting that it actually made me want to read the next chapter then the second half was kinda slow and also i really got annoyed with the seme in the second half i was so happy with uke's personality he was really a interesting and fun character but in the second half of the story that interesting independent and cool character of him got changed and became boring ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ i don't like the fact that he began to depends on seme so much and the seme was clearly very selfish and way too pushy so i felt like their relationship is not healthy i donna but it really bugs me ( i was already annoyed and kinda a pissed off with the seme in the first half of the story too coz after they had sex for the first time the seme forced himself again on uke even tho uke was clearly exhausted and refused it many times but without considering his feelings seme had his way with him!? he didn't even care like WHAT THE FUCK BRO? that was actually the problem with the seme he dosen't care about uke's feelings emotions he just wanna have uke for his selfish reasons Σ(っ°Д °;)っ ) the second couple was kinda of interesting but their sex scean was kinda forced if they had some more time to develop and surtout their feelings for each other without forcing some sex scean it would have been better.. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍

Droping this... seme is pissing me off. He dosen't care about uke's feelings and he is just wanna fuck him even tho uke clearly hates it! well FUCK YOU YOU SELFISH BITCH ! (╬￣皿￣)凸

So damn adorable (づ￣ ³￣)づ

So.... this not yoai after all ╥﹏╥

Dogin or whatever get the fuck out here you bitch ugh he is too much now that was harassment you know taker better do something aboue this Σ(っ°Д °;)っ

Its cute (づ￣ ³￣)づ

Aaa...we got what we needed the mostヾ(☆▽☆) wow that sex seen was so fluffy innocent sweet and adorable but hot and sexy at the same time too so good! (づ￣ ³￣)づ and the last panel was tooooo cuteee ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

Damn...it so adorable really the seme is the one who carried the story he is so honest with his feelings and brave enough to communicate his feelings properly! Who wouldn't fall for a guy like him?! He is so persistent but not forceful in a weird sort of a way. He just love uke whole heartedly (≧∀≦) d the uke is so cool and handsome too (づ￣ ³￣)づbut i want to see more of them so badly tho this is absolutely not enough ╥﹏╥ and i have to say the art is so good that if this ever become a anime i'm sure it will be so beautiful ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

This is a short story like a one shot but its extremely cute funny and sexy too the art is the main reason that droves me to this story and even tho we got a short glimpse of the characters i can say they are so lovable and fun! And both of the seme and uke are so fucking hot and manly it just dosen't matter that fact that this story dosen't how much of a plot or development

A Good story based on the main characters feelings , struggles and despite that how they become happy through their love seriously i wished it has more because when they finaly get together its over i wish to see more about how their love heals their wounds but it was a fine read...and the art style is the best thing of this manga so beautiful detailed and NEAT so i love it