Okay so i really like the premise and the art is so beautiful! I think that will be an interesting story so I’ll probably keep reading it. I like Kyle. Adrian not so much tbh. He behaves selfish, childish, I also already see the very unnecessary and disliked possessiveness. Like chill Gwen and him just talked bro. I absolutely did not like how he forced himself on the uke, even with saying that as long as he wants to work there he needs to accept that. What is that called? Coercion, also sexual assault. Gosh it annoys the hell out of me when a premise is good and then the sexual relationship directly starts with at least dubcon. Why do u do this to me!? Regardless I hope we’ll see an improvement regarding these points, bc I do actually like the main plot and that’s why I don’t want this destroyed by Adrian forcing things
I like other mangas from the mangaka and I also liked the premise of this one. They both are kinda cute but I’m in chapter 3 and till now the uke /blondie was way to pushy and kinda overstepping (I’m not finished with the story yet) but it’s like he has no tactfulness and he also pressures the seme. I’m not happy yet how this has been written till now. It’s kinda too fastpaced and i think the mangaka wanted to make a point that both are not ready for this relationship whatever it is. So I hope that this fast pace is intentional. I’m afraid that at least momentarily some kind of dependence will develop. I mean it’s already apparent with the uke just cancelling his apartment like that, as if it’s self explanatory. And the seme I think also thinks he needs to help and stay be the side of the uke. I hope they’ll have a serious talk about all of that in the later chapters bc as of now I think the manga wants to show that if nothing changes they will develop into a not healthy relationship. But the mangaka probably shows that change in the later chapters (I hope).
that’s another perfect example of how smut should be…. two incredibly horny people fucking happily, enthusiastically and with consent. And this one even has fluff, emotions and feelings in them! Yes this is the kind yaoi in the smut genre I want to see see!
They can’t just tease teru and big bro at the end and not go through with it. Haha but not me thinking to myself at the beginning of the manga if no one wants teru or big bro I’ll take them for myself. Them together though is something I’d much rather see!
For the main story, I liked the premise. I still don’t get how the game and reality was connected? Like how was the uke a character in the game? If anyone could explain to me I’d be delighted. Apart from that I’ve to say I’m so disappointed at how the seme was written. He had potential and was alright at the end but why the need for this over possessive, not communicating, non consensual scene and behavior. Just no. Could have been so much better but again they had to add that shit. But at least it was addressed and not glossed over
im actually confuse when it is reality or when it is ingame theyre 2 similar
About the "how was the uke a character in the game" question. Based on my understandings, the president got an idea to make an ero game and used uke also other workers for reference. But there's also a possibility that it's just his(company pres.) desire to make an ero game with uke in it. (￣∇￣")
Can’t they just be happy. My heart is breaking.
I’m not here for director to either be annoying or cause misunderstandings. Give him a story but please I don’t need another meddling person (like the ex girlfriend)
Honestly that could have been a lot better! I liked the premise but the execution was not good. And I don’t even think that not being able to see his face till the end is that much of a minus point/ problem. But rather after chapter 3 the story didn’t make any sense to me anymore? I don’t even know what it was bc I genuinely did not understand what they were saying in these chapters? Like it was good English i got every word individually and everything but as a whole, it felt like I wasn’t understanding it. I also hated the whole chapter in the bar!! Again what happened there? Who was the past lover? And of whom? Why was he so unnecessarily jealous? And I hate possessive guys like “you can’t show your face”, “you can’t go to the bar alone” etc. Like honestly what will happen? He’s just talking to your mutual friends! Oh btw I don’t mean the scene were he was jealous bc mask guy revealed his face to the glass guy, I think in that situation it was at least understandable why he was upset since he as the most important person to the mask guy should have seen the face as the first at least from this group of ppl but the other scenes. I liked the crossdress chapter and the first two chapters I guess but apart from that it just wasn’t nearly as good as it could have been.
I love the story so far it’s so wholesome!! (▰˘◡˘▰)but that can’t be the ending and the order of some pages in the later chapters are messed up that’s why it kinda takes away a bit of the fun of reading the story :/
Not me thinking that it’s vermouth at the beginning and after she introduced herself I thought maybe we get a new character! I’m really hyped to see more of her, she looks pretty cool and seems badass! I want to know though whether the “little boy” thing was just a coincidence since vermouth always said it (that’s why I believed it was her in the first place). After I read a comment that talked about hagiwara and I checked it with the wikia I use, she actually seems to be his sister!! I’m excited!!!
Whose sister? (Also, if you don’t mind me asking, what wiki do you use?)
I use conanwiki.org bc it’s actually very well organized and up to date. Compared to the other Conan Wikias it’s the best. I’d recommend you check it out, I also love the episode guide bc they always have symbols to indicate important things. Like if Heiji appears there’s a little Heiji symbol, if someone from the organization is there then there’s a black hat, the Heart Symbol shows that theres some romance plot for the characters in the episode etc. It’s pretty awesome. However it’s a german Site and idk whether you can let it translate into English. Anyways it’s possible that the woman we saw in this new chapter, is the sister of one of the dead police officers from zeros squad. He was matsudas best friend and and they both died in that bomb explosion if I’m correct.
Thanks for letting me know I’ll check it out. Also needed that reminder, it’s definitely about time I reread DC at this point again to refresh my memory.
That was precious! Would have loved to have a few more chapters to round things up but I liked that story a lot, the art was so well drawn as well, very interesting concept that’s for sure!
Hmm I don’t know. I don’t mind the biting and licking, I actually like that personally (def not to that degree but still this part is not that bad). But what makes it weird and kinda creepy to me is that this biting/licking fetish is connected to actual eating/being eaten. It’s just too much for me. And especially thinking of eiji being in high school this makes me highly uncomfortable. If he was 18 then it’s okay (at least in the manga) but we don’t even know that. I generally just don’t see the sense in making this an age gap story if it isn’t important for the trope. If the two people would be same age the fetish would still be too much for me but I wouldn’t be that uncomfortable with it. Bc I don’t know it really gives off this grooming vibe to me. It’s like eiji developed that fetish by engaging with the uke, I’d have preferred if two guys roughly in the same age would have met like they did but that both of them already had their respective fetishes and would have seen that they actually fit together perfectly
The age of sexual consent in Japan is 16. I bet he's probably 17/18 y/o. It's weird to the rest of the world but probably normal for them.