
First of all, I cringed so much in the first chapter. I dunno, it's kinda awkward.
Second, the pace of the story is... the first part is shallow and the second chapter is... the information is just suddenly slammed to the face. Inconsistent pacing as I might say.
Also, i hope this won't be another love triangle.
Other than that, I'll still read it since it's not really all that bad. It may not be perfect but it still holds some mystery that interests me.

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CUTEST BUNNY I'VE EVEr SEEN IN MY LIFE!!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAHHH!!! I love the prequel of this! but...
AAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!! I WANNA READ THIS STORY BUT NOT YET! I don't want to end up with a sad cliffhanger when I read. Maybe I'll wait until the last chapter before I read this? maybe. It looks(I took a wee look at the pages) like it has lots of angst at the moment at the end of chapter 4.
oh my goodness!!! UPDATE! FINALLY! YES!