It's like the reader is just thrown in the middle with it with the bare minimum context and a lot of details are missing. What sort of world is this, does it have magic? Why is her survival tied to Cassis? What is she planning to do exactly? These things you have no choice but to keep reading cluelessly until you find the answer.
I'm gonna get hated for this but Radelk needs serious character development. I guess to say it shortly, he's a yandere, he keeps thinking about getting rid of this and that rival without even considering how Chitra would feel about it.
In terms of character development, Tornian is by far my favorite, he turned into this sociopath genius into someone who earnestly and sincerely has affection for Chitra. Tyrex is also a close second. And then, the twins.
Looking forward to the next husbando to be drawn! I hope she draws someone who can help poor Vilka in construction.
BUT ngl this one seems well-executed so far. The FL has realistic feelings for someone who went through what she did. And the ML is still cute as a kid, a bit conflicted and a tsundere, given his upbringing, but still, I wholeheartedly support the ship. Although, somehow, Tory is sus, she's either lesbo for Larriet or another crossdresser.









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