Okay.... so the rape thing was totally unrelated to the story, the uke could have simply kissed the seme and took the seme hand and placed it on his own dick, telling him to fuck him. The seme refuses and rushes out the place
The entire plot-line would remain the same, and we could add that the seme started to have sexual thoughts and wished that night could be done again so he would do it right.
Instead of having rape, which has 0 effect to the plot. This is why the romantic rape troupe doesn't work, because simply the story elements would be the same with and without it.
If something doesn't add effect to the story, it is rendered useless.
In my opinion the "rape scene" does add something to the story itself. Imagine if the scen would be like what you visualized, there will be no enough reason behind the drama. The main premise is that you don't know when you are going to die and that is why doing the things that you wanna do, no matter how immoral or bad it may be would become driven by the thought of dying. If the rape scene did not happen that won't justify the thought of his father dying, without the father dying there will be no moving and the rest.
Another thing that the "rape scene" showed is the love or how the MC recognized his feelings for the uke. The feeping or the thought of him forgiving and still loving the uke despite all his baggages and mistakes adds a little spice to the story.
Disclaimer: I am against rape or any other unconsensual intercourse in anyway, but sometimes even though it may look bad it adds more interest in the story. Again I am not in any way agreeing to rape. Just my opinion tho and everyone have their right to their own opinion. Thanks!
Yeah I agree. I think if it were simply putting hands on the dick it wont push Yuni to think hard about them together, it could be think of as a joke too perhaps.
Keep in mind that Natsuki was deeply traumatized. I think the shock of Yuni and him pushing Natsuki away after the incidient really gets me. Their expression and how mortified Yuni was. In the end though, Natsuki really regrets what happened and has mention it many times. Throught the story his father is always mentioned, in the end its about his regrets and how he gets over it.
Ofc irl it wont happened, natsuki would've been jailed by now and their friendship will be over for good. But yea, i think i like it as it is.
Dang, you explained it very well
How is this volume 2?? I swear I read this chapter before somewhere as an extra
Is there really a v2? Was I dreaming about reading it, and it became reality. I'm so confused!!!
I believe it was a canon doujinshi by the mangaka ^^
It hurts how realistic this story is, the ending is wholesome and beautiful. I'm sad the rapist, even though has no school or university degree, wasn't punished... it shows that reality is like this.
Rape should never be considered okay or romantic. I don't give a shit if it's fiction and this story showed how serious rape it.
But at least, there's always hope... being a rape victim doesn't define you nor your future.
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Cain is soooo freaking cute! Instead of giving Jooin more alcohol (since Jooin started to get drunk easily) he started pouring him water in the glass shots (he empties like 4-5 bottles XD) and was just watching Jooin like a good dog, awwwwwwwwwwww!!!! I can't he's just a good boyfriend material !!!!!!!!!!!!!! So freaking cute
and also Jooin finally manning up? But like he started to man up when yawhi started to act good? Like dude, your internal alarm switch is broken! At least you woke up to yourself, but like damn took you fucking long.
Like wtf the parents are now suddenly okay with their son after fucking abandoning him??
Also why is no one in the entire story has a problem with 1- brother lusting for his sibling for over 10 years and 2- trying to rape him TWICE?!!!
the plot development doesn't make any sense. And basically saying you can't have sex if you're not in heat means that all actual gay relationships are not valid since you need women parts to have sex.
This is one of the reasons most omegaverse stories suck (yeah there are some good ones out there like tidal waves). They authors just treat the ukes as males with female parts and if don't have the parts you can't have sex with a man. So in a way it's phobic.
Omg you're so dramatic!! It's not like he CAN'T have normal sex, it's just that the omega was a VIRGIN before he did it with the seme in chapter 1, so it's normal that he is reclutant in having sex when he's not in heat (when omegas are in heat their bodies are naturally more "open", I don't know how to say it), but that doesn' t mean that they don't do it when they are in a normal condition!! At the end of the story the uke even started to enjoy normal sex, as I thought, it's just a matter of practice cause he never did it with anyone before Renjaku!
About the brother thing it's fucked up but omegaverse are essentially based on animal instincts so...
The special story... Is hands down A LOT better than the original or is it only me thinking that XD maybe because of the comedy aspects??
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I feel so bad for the Uke by the latest draw. His expression went from joy to depression and he probably finally broke took a 180 turn from nice to being pissed at everything. The look he had on his face screamed of i know longer gonna care about anyone
Can I have the raw
Sorry i exited the web page without saving it. But you can find it in the comments
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These type of stories. God I wish yaoi had more of them. This is so healthy and normal and yet you still want to continue reading. No rape, no unnecessary drama, no overused tropes. Just pure writing talent! ヾ(☆▽☆)
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