Ngl, I was like “real asf” until I saw the comments.Both of em fine asf and i feel like the threesome allowed us to have the best of both worlds. Definitely a questionable story. Definitely not for the faint of hearts.(however you say it) If this isn’t your cup of tea it’s just not your cup of tea.
I think the story ending was pretty good. I like the fact even tho the top(forgot his name) raped and did some other questionable things. It was never skipped over in the “redemption” arc. Most times the Mc just skips over everything that happened. You can tell he genuinely feels like he fucked up. I think I liked it more because of the portrayal of him figuring out his feelings. The yapping arc was ACTUALLY good in my eye at least. Brody was actually going through it
The side story is for the kinky bitches, ok?The last chapter is low key crazy tho. Like come onnn now. Honestly, I would’ve loved to see more of the threesome. Getting fucked by two hot dudes?? Let’s be fr..come on lmfaoooo.I’m scared to see what happens next. God I hope it’s just a prank or something.
IM PLAYING DEVILS ADVOCATE..did y’all genuinely expect the side story’s to be soft? DONT ATTACK ME but like…do y’all not see the top? Most of y’all, I’m assuming read all the way through, so y’all FR thought it was finna be soft? Not even tryin to shade anybody but like let’s be sooooo fr.
All jokes aside. I think it’s a good story but some of y’all don’t got the heart for it, or this just isn’t for you. Everybody is entitled to their own opinion. I just don’t think this is the worse story imaginable.
WeebofLevi, Gorl you are so right, I don’t understand when these damn 12 y/o start scratchin over themselves just cause the story presents something that is definitively inherently wrong, BUT LORD, ITS A FANTASY SITUATION AND A STORY. I’ve seen this too many times across too many yaois.
I’d just say go back to your cookie cutter of wholesome stories, cause you 12 y/o gotta stop bitchin and whinin over something that is different. You, CAN, not like it— just don’t ruin it for someone else. Bye Felicia, cant clap back when something is sealed, bullet proof, and shut. (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸
You bird brain, smooth brain ass bitches need to end it. “I feel kinda weird liking the 2nd male lead”. YOU SHOULD! That’s something you take to the grave. We didn’t need to know that.
Yes, Yul went through a lot of stuff; but that doesn’t excuse what he put the MC through. It’s like y’all not grasping the fact that he literally made her scared of men for YEARS! God forgive me, but sometimes when people say bird brain ass shit like this; I want them to experience the same thing. There’s not fucking way you’d actually stay with a guy like that.
Also, where tf in the story did the author romanticize their relationship? Nowhere throughout the story did I ever think shit was sweet. Literally 2nd chapter in you see how fucking wack she/he is. Y’all are fucking weirdos & that’s it. Y’all need therapy..He’s not quirky & a little crazy in the head. Bro traumatized her to the point where every time a man is near her she get’s scared.
Might I add; Yul never helped or saved her. Y'all smooth brained bitches talking about, “alL hE dID fOr HeR”, and “sHe TrEaTeD hIM lIkE tHiS”. His intentions was never to help her. Literally the last couple chapters tells you how he just wanted her to himself. Not once was his intentions good…
Whether or not you liked the blonde hair dude is up to you; however; saying she should’ve ended up with yul is insane. Personally I believe it was a perfect ending. He moved on and did his own thing..I do sympathize with him, but not to the point where I ignore what he did.
Call me psychotic, call me crazy, call me fucked in the head…but like…DAMN why the goddess had to do allat.Yk..I was thinkin she was going to betray the gods, which she did..and then sacrifice herself, which she did. Then, he’d realize this bitch is really down for me. I thought it would be one of those stories..It’s definitely a good plot twist but damn.. Why she had to rape him and do allat..?I was really hoping by the end he’d yk…have some type of love for her...
She’s a crazy bitch don’t get me wrong but like real asfff. Catch me meeting my fictional crush it’s wraps. Knees is done! All jokes aside I’m still sad asf…:/ I was thinking maybe she could redeem herself until the rape scene.
She saw pretty men as her tool to satisfy lust for thousands of years, corrupt them then discard them all, and she was the root of all Raoul's misery. There's no way he would half-assed his revenge on her, an eye for an eye he said it. Men don't want to love a woman who is unfaithful and a bitch, except the guy in Redo Healer though. That was hentai manga and he experienced sexual abuse much more than Raoul, so his mind got twisted into a sex maniac
I love me some kinky, crazy shit, but this wasn’t it.
I’m confused about what the uke wanted. I don’t know if he’s giving I want to be fucked like a slut, or I don’t want to be fucked like a slut, or I want to be fucked like a slut but don’t wanna show it…like pick one pls. I need to know if I’m going to drop it or not.
I’m going to ignore the shitty storyline…Because I would be kissing his feet for killing my dad. Whatever you want I got. Like, I thought it was one of those stories where he secretly enjoys it…Yk wht. Story was just shitty.
Best believe they’d get their ass beat.
Don’t get me wrong what he did was wrong, but they definitely should’ve talked to him before hand. It could’ve been if you don’t tell him I will type of situation. It did erk me that he didn’t want to tell ol dude about lying. Like he deserves to know. But they could’ve went a different way about it. Honestly, I’m happy his ass cryin. Cause nah you not finna lie in my face and then not want to tell me.
First and foremost, whoever made the story ATE that shit up! I love that there’s an actual story, and a good one at that.
To continue on to what I previously said, I love the fact that there’s twist and turns. In simpler terms, the plot is so fucking good. Makes me wanna shake ass.(Im sorry) I love the fact that the action isn’t overshadowed by romance. 6 chapters in I basically stated I wish there was more action. Instead of the story being 99.9% romance and 1% action.(generally speaking) Also love the fact the female “villain” isn’t a stupid and a generic villain. 30 or so chapters in im like “she ate that up ngl”..Normally, I’m always team female lead. AND STILL IS! But Aneta is such a good character! I love that she’s the mastermind behind everything. Instead of her being the generic side chick. She adds so much value to the story.
On that note let’s talk about Aneta..I kinda feel for her..It’s so fucked up what the royale family did. It’s so hard not sympathizing with her. Honestly, I hope they don’t just kill her off. I want both of them to be happy but that’s going to be hard. This just goes back into saying how good the story is. She has a good backstory and good reason to do what she does. Can y’all tell I love the story?Me sympathizing with the villain is crazy. She definitely gagged me! She did her big one. She’s not useless, or dumb, or annoying. She standing on big business. When she gagged Regina, she gagged me too. You don’t see a lot of cunning and smart villains.
In conclusion, love the brother, fuck the dad, and love everybody else.Love that everybody is included and actually plays an important role in the story. Everybody is actually used if you know what I mean. (The way I made a whole essay is crazy. Wouldn’t even do this for school)
If he plays with his nipples one more time..I’m actually going to lose it. At first, you know, I was rocking with it, but then it just got repetitive. I like that kinky shit, ok, so I’m not tripping too bad about all the sex scenes. In fact, I wish there was better sex scenes..The nipple play is killing me. Like, when is it going to stop?
The mc is ok…he’s ok. Nothing really too special about him. He’s relatable as hell tho!











Whew, when I tell you I came home, sat on the toilet to take the nicest dump known to mankind; then proceeded to unlock my IPhone 13 Pro, click on google; look in my tabs, and finish “Father I don’t want this marriage”, proceeded to cry my eyeballs out. Like OMG!When I thought legis died I cried my eyes balls out. I was on the toilet screaming and crying. I kid you not. I decided to close my phone because it was on 4%; I went to my mother to wrap my silk press hair, it felt like a family member got killed. I felt so empty and cold on the inside…I decided to go on Ow because the new season came out. I lost majority of my games…Someone decided to tell me to heal more when I was literally getting targeted….I could’ve argued but I didn’t…I simply left the match, texted my friends I want to off my self; and then proceed to go to sleep. That didn’t happen, thank god. Something was telling me to open my IPhone 13 Pro and finish the story, so I did…. (●'◡'●)ノ I cried again watching the same scene just to see that it was legis little “jokey joke”. Trifflin asl!!THEN BOOM!!!
A SEX SCENE!!!!!!!! I felt like i was watching my kids have sex.When it was legis scene I felt like it was two adults. Idk, I was like “let the adults handle it ლ(´ڡ`ლ) if yk what I mean.
Moral of the story, legis needs slut me out fr. Every position till my kidneys fall out.Till my legs give out. Till the whole world know what we doin.
GIRLLL WHAT THE FUQ
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