
hmm, this is getting better, in many aspects (I can't really tell where it is tho, the story? the plot? ). still cliche, but this is getting interesting

It might have a lot of tropes but it's not cliched, not least because the author DELIBERATELY uses those devices, which is actually not that hard to figure out.
Of course. Aphrodisiac effect, yeah yeah.. we been knew ( ° ʖ °)
yep, called it...
well all knew something like that will happen hahaha ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭