I kind of like how each chapter seems to stand alone(?) kinda
Just how each one introduced a new conflict and resolved it by the end, it feels very cleanly done
Tho it definitely did have the first chapter feeling kind of rushed and I was a little bothered by the fact that they were willing and desperate to suddenly fuck each other when it felt like they had only just barely figured out that they even liked each other like that in the first place
But either way it was a really good read and I like the characters and how they get into fights that feel realistic on a level and then work through it
Lmao the fact that Deacon just walks around without any pants on more often than not is hilarious to me
AAAA!!
LOOK AT HER CUTE LITTLE WINGSSS (ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Omg she's a dragon now (≧∀≦)
Okay but right off the bat, a bottom who actually communicates their needs and desires in sexual situations??? Who doesn't just go with the flow or do whatever the top wants but actually communicates during sex a nd has a partner who listens ( . . . Usually)
This is so amazing and they are one of my favorite couples<33
I swear there is such a lack of bedroom communication in yaoi and romance stories in general that this almost made me happy cry
I miss the original art style, it was super cute, expressive, and unique and I felt like it really set this comic apart from a lot of others
I definitely prefer this new art style tho when compared to the previous one, because the other art style made the FL look suddenly way older and more mature and didn't fit the vibe as well
Or at least didn't fit my personal preference as well since that's what this is really about lol
(This isn't to say any of them looked bad, just explaining which ones I prefer)
I definitely miss when the comic was more focused on cooking tho :<
No because it's the fact that they are both just taking turns raping her. She says no, she means no. She has had consensual sex with both of them at different points (I'm pretty sure, didn't bother actually reading most of the sex scenes cuz they were pretty boring cut and paste) but there have been way too many times where the act was started and she clearly said no (it doesn't matter her reason for saying no or if part of her "actually wanted it" by the end, because the other part clearly didn't).
Initially, she didn't have an "affair" with his brother, she was raped by him multiple times and then he acted like it was an equal act.
Honestly she's really just treated like an object for these two guys to fight over.
Anyway, you can't convince me this isn't a story about an emotionally and sexually abused woman.
Oh! And the emotional incest between her husband and his mother-
It's giving "toxic boy mom".
Especially how she inserts herself into their marriage and tells her son how his wife should act
All I'm saying is that there are real underlying problems that lead to this whole situation
(And ik it's just porn and I'm reading too much into it, but this kind of analysis is how I enjoy stories like this lol)
This isn't a story at all girrrll... IT'S PORN. Chill.
I did mention that I know this is just porn and not really meant to have a distinct, logical, or enjoyable plot
But what I enjoy about reading these kinds of comics is analyzing the plot because I find it interesting and entertaining
Alsoooo saying that just because it's porn it can't have a message (and a potentially harmful one at that) is quite ignorant.
Again, I DO enjoy reading these comics and did enjoy reading this one in particular, but it's important to recognize that it's okay to be critical of something that you enjoy and it doesn't have to hinder your enjoyment of that thing
But if you don't enjoy making or reading commentary on these things feel free to scroll past when you see these kind of comments in the future
I do apologize tho since I didn't make it entirely clear, I'm not rebuking this story and definitely not rebuking those who read it because that would be unkind and could warrant a negative response
I also apologize that this reply was so long and that I probably took your comment way too seriously TuT
I just had somethings I wanted to say is all and I really don't have any serious or hard feelings towards this comic or you for your reply
Cuz yeah, it is just porn lol
I ain't reading all that... :'D
Realistically, if Riftan wants to protect Maxi "from herself" kinda and how she rushes into situations that she doesn't actually know how to handle, he needs to give her an actual position and job in these scenarios so she can feel of use and busy while being out of danger. Because as she has shown, when left to her own devices, she has a tendency to get in over her head due to her lack of experience. So logically, she needs to gain experience from a safe distance to avoid these situations.
I won't lie, this is still controlling behavior but when it comes to violent and dangerous situations, he is the commander guy so it's appropriate.
But he also has to drop that control when it comes back to their everyday lives and allow his wife to leave the house. Riftan has wayyy too much anxiety in this regard for his relationship to be healthy so those trying to fully justify his actions seem real silly to me. Some of his control IS justified (like I mentioned before with the dangerous battle-y situations) but the rest is not and just categorizing one or the other as "completely in the right" is totally missing the fact that they both need to grow in this situation and that Riftan's actions could make it harder for Maxi to grow how she needs to
Lmao, at first I thought the overturned pile of dirt was a bunch of cow shit that he was excited to use as fertilizer and was like
Ew why are you putting your hands in that shit lol