
Tbh i want her to end up w the white wolf

Sometimes it's just a feeling you know? The vibes? "I don't like this" "because I like smth else" is good enough reason for a story. It's not that deep to get that worked up over lmao. You can not like a character but still read because they're too deep into the plot already and it's better to just see how it ends

It was good but it has a lot of flaws. First the titls says that the mc is a pushover but we didnt see that at all almost??? Like maybe in the first chapter it was hinted that he was a pushover but didnt expand on that topic at all. I wouldn't be saying anything about this if it wasnt in the title bc it seems kinda unnecessary to put pushover in the title. Second i just cant feel the chemistry between them. When they first met and starting hanging out, we didnt get any scenes that you could say "awwwww thats so cute" expect the kiss scene. My favourite part in any bl is just the little cute moments they have like holding hands, blushing when their shoulders touch and just those moments when they get all shy and stuff. In the whole story there was maybe like 2 which is very disappointing. I get that theur relationship isnt the best but still. Third i cant really tell if they really love eachother. The lack of chapters is probably the maind reason for this. 15 mire chapters would have done the job. And also they always fight for no reason? There us so many misunderstandings that just seem forced. I get that no relationship is perfect and stuff but when the two of these fight its just do dumb. And its even dumber when they make up bc i cant feel the sincerity at all. Like when i rwsd these side stories it was so disappointing. Like they are now officially datinf and boom the ither day they fought. We didnt get to see their relationship at all. Which is also why i just cant feel the chemistry. Its such a shame tho i loveeeee the artstyle, its detailed bit not tok detailed for it to be realism. Overall, i dont know. The story and art had potential but it was executed very badly. It feels rushed at this point i bet the author was tired. The sex scenes were also lame, they tried to spice them up with rhe roleplay but it just didnt work. ANYWAY it was okay nothing too special but also nothing boring for me to say that u didn't enjoy readinf this and that i skipped to the end and stuff.
(also im kinda confused abiut the side stories cuz in the side stories we see the mls pov but i think that should be in the main story???)
doc Dan get behind me ill protect you