
The writing is juvenile. The MLs hatred for aristocrats is random considering there was no setup or proper introduction to him so I don't feel like his push back against them is justified. The MC is dumb, not sure why she fell in love with him when he never gave her any sort of special kindness. The beginning was so rushed was genuinely shocked when I saw that there was a time jump of 3yrs. It happened so randomly too. We got no lead up to the MC becoming a governess. None of her struggles are bankruptcy just a time jump and she's working. Not worth finishing imo

I get his plight but it's not like he NEEDED to say all those hurtful things to her. Kinda happy she made an attempt twice, I never understood why in these toxic webtoons the character don't just die to end their misery its so simple.
I feel like I'd believe his unwavering love if the story started with the courting period then turned dark with the uprising. But because we got the toxic first then glimpses of the cute moments I can't say I cared much for the rekindling
When I saw "The end" I thought to myself "thank god" for such a short story it felt so long winded. It wasn't bad or anything but I also don't see myself recommending it to oomf