
this story has a really unique plot but i dont think it was executed properly? strangely, i feel detached to the characters for some reason. it’s not boring, per se, but each scene (esp the transitions from one to another) is too abrupt. i sincerely feel like the author didnt do a good job in establishing the characters’ emotions which kept me from feeling for them. almost like there’s this barrier between the characters and the reader lol.
the art style is nice tho and im still gonna keep reading to see if the execution of the story is going to improve
gai is annoying she doesnt need a man to protect her shes already strong enough to protect herself. men are useless
damn it’s okay. they’re childhood friends, it’s normal to want to protect someone younger.
Oh come on he's a kid and obviously like the MC so he wanna protect her.
They're childhood friends obviously he wants to protect her
it’s been months since this comment but... i still dgaf lol