
I can tell the plot is good but the execution. Oh dear I can't follow the pacing and 90% of the time I cannot understand why some of these characters operate on the reasonings as they do and have to use my previous knowledge of having read the same genre but even then it comes off as bleak. I'll probably read the novel for this if a better completed translation comes out

At first it looked promising. The fact that Leslie acts and gets treated as someone much much younger than her age cringes me the fuck out but what can you say she was malnourished and abused that's how I justified it but even after the timeskip she acts like a fucking child. Yeah no there is no storytelling here everyone just magically likes her or hates her. Yeah need more than that. A buildup, character development, angst and flaws. Fucking overrated shit
This is getting so good. I love the pace. Only problem I have is, I wish Yoohan was a little bit expressive. Just a tiny bit more.