your art may be fine, but your storytelling leaves a lot to be desired. I'm just put off by this story for a number of reasons. As her first Omegaverse story, it was a flop to me. I felt that it started ok, like the typical bl romance story, but I think it started to fall apart when she introduced the brother too early. I had to reread this whole series all over again in order to make sense of where the poor storytelling started. I can see that the author didn't really give Hana and Renjaku a chance to get to know each other before putting an obstacle in their way. Because of that, we didn't really get a feel for how both characters really are and why they are the way they are; Hana, though a virgin character, acts like he has no common sense the moment he's off the job; Renjaku, though raised a rich boy and is a celebrated floral artist, speaks like he's been in a gang as he grew up. These two, as the MCs of the manga, are giving me such oddly disconnected vibes in terms of character build. It's very confusing and I can't back this as a good manga.
translated the last chapter. The following day, I was able to see the HeroScans version on a different site and the quality is night and day.
There really is a certain pride to take when doing your own cleaning, translating, proofreading, and typesetting. And that's on top of purchasing the raws and adding in your credit page.
I know there are people here to don't care who is doing the translation, so long as they get a translated chapter, but a lot of people do. I especially like it when quality scans are accepted and stolen ones are not. I find that it takes away from the original groups effort in bringing it to fans when you have translators like this one stealing from a group's site and thinking this is her accomplishment.
My advice for that person, find a translation group and be part of the process so you can actually take pride in not stealing scans that aren't yours.
I'll check the site I go to tomorrow to see if this Extra has been uploaded there by HeroScans. Again, that quality is like night and day.










that twist got me.
Good show, author. Good show!