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It's just... Meh. The second story MC was cute though, a pansexual.

There's a feast in front of my eyes and I need to protect them! Ch 1-4 is from the main story, ch 5 and 6 are one shots. Ch 7 is an extra for the main story. Tbh I like ch 5 more than the main story. The whole elopement to wedding was so wholesome. Also because abs. Ch 6 feels erm... too fast? But not because of the pace, but because nothing happened and it ended kinda way. Idk, I can't describe it, I just don't like the way the story went. Ch 1-4 is cute with some ups and downs. But I liked ch 7 better

If this was just ch 4 and 5, I would've given a higher rate (ch 4 and 5 are non-romance btw). But ch 1 and 2 are cliche and bland. Ch 3 is a bit good and unexpected. ch 1 is about time-travel. Too open-ended to judge ngl. You could guess what happened, but you aren't really given any hints about it. 2/10 ch 2 feels like a savior-syndrome ngl. Girl just gets close to guy because he's a loner (though also because he helped her realize her "boyfriend" is a playboy). 3/10 ch 3 is good...? I liked the "main" plot (the middle part ig?) and the plottwist was a bit unexpected, though it's good in its own way. shitty guy x shitty girl ig. 4/10 ch 4 is actually good. no romance. just two friends who parted because of differences in goals in life, except one of them didn't make it clear so they kinda had a bitter parting. 5/10 ch 5 is the one i like the best ngl. 4/5 *spoilers, though it's a one-shot anyway* Dude be crying because he should've helped, now both girls are dead. I mean, yes, she's your gf so you're gonna defend her. But you're all in the same class, you probably have heard rumors and all about your gf. Defending your gf is one thing, but making her realize her mistakes and stopping her from doing shit is part of your job (and her friends'! what the fuck are her friends doing?). Toot toot, too late, you should've helped. As for the gf, she's shitty af, and she's just misdirecting her family issues to the victim. She apologized too late. The victim was cornered too far and ended up, well... I like the ending where they apologized to each other and just let go of things since they're dead anyway. Their only choice is to move on.

Ch1-3 title story. Ch 4 different story. I like the plot twist ish.

Ch 1-3 is the main story, there's an extra at the end of ch 6. Grammar is kinda off compared to the other two? Though I still understood the story anyway, so it's fine. For a 3 ch story, the story still doesn't feel fleshed out well enough. You can mash all the 3 ch together to make one chapter (or 2), honestly. Then set 2 chapters (or 1) for fleshing out the relationship and the consequences. I mean, all their problems with each other involved the past, the present and the future. We saw them moving on with the past, getting on with the present, so what's next? The "big bro" still has an issue with his dad, then there's his friend who's trying to care for him and is against their relationship, and lastly, there's the "lil bro" trying to be equals with the "big bro" that we never got to see. Ch 4-5 is a separate story. Too fast too furious. The way the MC shifted his love from the sis to the bro is just... Eh. It's like he doesn't (or didn't) love either of them. Ch 6 is another story which feels like a 2nd chapter to a missing 1st chapter. Like whut (Also don't mind my grammar, it's midnight and I can't sleep because I'm sick)

The non-related extra stories (v1ch5, v2ch4-6) got more smut than the main couple who kept getting cockblocked --- All the stories felt rushed. For the first one-shot especially. Lol, love in one day, (semi-public; they're outside the house but inside the gates) sex at night that was fast. For the main story... Eh, it happened so fast too. Like okay, I'm happy everyone is saying "you've changed thanks to your lover" or "he changed because of you" blah blah. But we never really got to see who they were before they met. Sorry not sorry, but I think this only got a second volume because the author is Mio Junta

Didn't read the first story, sounds like some generic drunk sex story. The cover photo also looks like the seme is annoyingly pushy. (Would probably get a 1 from me if I read it lmao) I just read the second story (ch 4-5) thanks to the comments. Cute and funny. I actually like where it left off because it's funny that way. I love their friend. Gets a 4 from me. Didn't put a rating since I didn't read the first story.

... it's fine? I liked the first story and want to read more of it. The second story isn't bad, but it's just... Fine. They didn't make a fuss, but it's blackmailing dubcon tbh

Ch 1-5 and 6.5 are the main story and it's nice. They both had character development by learning to grow for each other. But man, I hate how bl mangas really have to have a bitch female character who's delulu Ch 6 is a one shot entirely separate from the story. It's fine. A bit funny because of the "mate" and other bri'ish way of speaking hahaha