Agathe's manga / #excellent plot(34)

46 - Excellent plot, interesting characters with depth and development, solid background that makes believable the actions of the two MC, it could really go high road

96 - everything you’ve read before in that register - only very well done ˋnot dark, not too evil, not too OP or too egomaniac Characters are interesting, character development is good - pace is good, very entertaining without being original, it’s very clean - it would probably be flawless if more was developed about side characters - maybe simply if they were less « side » It also has a strong harem vibe, with tons of girls working for him being all head over heels for his cute face too The war of conquest is actually an hindrance to the story, as there’s already so much (too much ?) going on As the story add more and more side kicks, the too much « on the side «  feel seems to be growing too

4.5 - Time travel, chaos theory, little care and love, human nature good and bad Packed with action, lots of strange, beautiful characters and amazing growth

78 - 4.5 - i have no care and no understanding of the super weird stan thing But i like the MC,(except for the super weird useless gimmick of the fan) , i love. The dad and son and can’t help towish for their long lasting happiness The magical power and reincarnation are becoming - interesting - but how crazy and dark : seriously why ? The child abuse arc is evil, but it said a few interesting things, at least it’s not gratuitous background

135 - 4,5 - Interesting art (original !!) , So far good plot, the characters are great, there’s good pace and a good balance between humor and tension I like the very round MC with spunk and determination and I’m glad they never make a bag of bone out of her It’s really nice she has only has good reasons to slim down too, and of course she has a cool personality, full of imperfections and flaws, but with big courage, wits and hardwork and lots of things to learn - there’s a lot of growth but she’s never flawless, she tumbles, makes mistakes, sometimes dangerous one , there’s no op power to save her ever I also like the realistic relationship with her family : there’s no real psycho, no easy love, nothing cute, but they feel like real people, with the good ( strong ties), the bad and the ugly (bad rivalry), There are the petty feelings and evil mischiefs but also a sense of belonging : it’s a « damn family « , like many out there, one you love to hate, but one you fight to save too, so this it’s easy to relate to It’s also a grieving family, that lost a good son/ brother living fragilised relationships behind : this is just a background, yet it feels so true - there’s just enough to relate again, not so much it would become angsty It feels like the same as many stories, yet not entirely, probably because the « real » part of the characters is not too common, that includes showing a lot of unexpected characters (the dad, the dark society lord, etc) but also because there’s a true good balance in storytelling, it’s never boring, some part makes you laugh so hard, and others will just scratch a bit at your heart, in the middle of a growing story Let’s hope it manages as much in the long run but so far it does Maybe some will deem the plot too light, but it’s always enough to be entertained and keep the reader surprised with a lot of diversity (struggles at different scale : personal, familial, between two spies job, affair of business and of the states - plenty !) ( **check 27)

31 - time travel twist. Super original. Great pace, albeit a bit hysterical in places - absolutely brilliant so far

30 - remarkable, it has great vibes of « the lake house «  movie with the exchanged letters and the time laps To that you add a different world of fantasy The letters are very entertaining and brings lots of depth to very nice characters The story unfolds many past tragedies, shed light to an uncertain « future «  and twist with several mysteries Highly entertaining and beautifuly written ( it also causes painful translation in places, but it’s still worth it)

50 - 4.5 - everything you’ve read before in that register - only very well done ˋnot dark, not too evil, not too OP or too egomaniac Characters are interesting, character development is good - pace is good, very entertaining without being original, it’s very clean - it would probably be flawless if more was developed about side characters - maybe simply if they were less « side »

67 - like « real man », but in show business Real values, big heart, and interesting entertainment background It’s the second time i read a story about someone « accomplished «  in modern society criteria, turning time to be a better person, protect the good guys and bring a bit of fairness to the world, instead of making poor human choices, that’s leads to one’s « success « at the cost of others suffering and ruin. This seams like a « soft version » of the more business oriented « real man », there’s a lot of cute and humorous characters, which in a way makes for an easier read albeit probably not as deep (both are great) How refreshing in anycase : i want more !

94 - 4,5 : Very interesting so far ! Don’t be repelled by the harem teaser, it’s a world hopping thriller with very little romance so far (if at all !) It’s a world hopping storie (real word, game words, fake real wolrd(s?)) , As you could expect from this type of scenario there are many plots at different levels, the ones from short storylines (about 30/40+ c ?) and a red thread tying it all up There’s a good balance of game, and investigations, the stories are brilliantly intertwined and some clues make sense for the reader, while others leave us with more questions (just like the MC btw) : in that way, we are kept entertained (pieceing up what makes sense), yet not knowing enough to get bored The MC is a fun independent woman, nicely free spirited, with good values and a strong mindset, she has a few bearable flaws that never breached the caricature level so far (how nice !) There are many male characters, but it never feels like a harem - the game stories only have one target at a time, the romance thing is very second : she is on a mission to save her brother ( and probably many others) The chapters are dense and it’s highly entertaining Of course this is typically the type of scenario that could collapse on a bad or with a poor ending,but it’s also true that the sub scenario in each instance will keep their worth :) It’s nice to read a Chinese story whith respect for the female protagonist, without the irking tendencies of selfish / op / vilainess etc extremes