snailtm3's manga / #mid plot developement(42)

fire concept but mid plot development and character writing the mc was fine but the ml sucked tbh. he was so obsessive to the point it was mad annoying to me. would’ve been better if the mc got w jihyuk or there was no romance at all tbh.

porn was decent but i hate how they started ANOTHER misunderstanding as soon as the other one resolved. so annoying. prob won’t be keeping up much now. update: caught up they’re actually rly cute. i lied; i will be keeping up w the updates fr update ch 54 read: WHY DID THEY ADD ANOTHER OBSTACLE TO THE STORY BRUH. can the author just end the story alr this is crazy. adding a weird ass pedo who liked hayato when he was a kid too… so sick bruh.

i didn’t gaf abt the story until the end tbh. i think a lot of the mystery elements could’ve been presented better but the author definitely clutched up at the end. i think kister and jonathan’s time together in the apartment could’ve been explored more, bc jonathan clearly held some affection towards kister bc of this time but we barely saw any of the moments where kister put down the act for bit. there was only like 2 moments. i’m not saying jonathan should’ve been completely comfortable w him but he was terrified of him from beginning to end. ig jonathan’s trust that kister wouldn’t kill him was a good example but i just wished there was more context that led up to this trust. i think robert’s character was probably the most irrelevant in this whole thing. he was built up by cicero to be this awful and crazy guy but he was just a guy with a few obsessive, over-protective tendencies. the non-usage of this built up element of his character felt so nothing-burger to me, like okay… the tracker in the watch was a good example of robert’s freakiness but this was the only actually crazy thing he did. like all this build up and the watch thing for nothing bc we don’t even know what happens to him at the end. robert could’ve been completely removed from the story and everything would’ve proceeded the same. i liked kister’s backstory and how the mc literally brought color to his dull world that was such fire art direction. the dichotomy between the way the mc’s interview w kister at the start of the series and where the interview at the start of it was also rly good. the ending of this series was pretty much perfect, i have no gripes about it. we don’t know what happened to the rest of the mc’s friends like jerome and robert but tbh they were just side characters anyways (also i did not gaf abt robert at all).

i don’t remember much of what happened in this but i remember hating the blonde sm. dude literally ruined the mc’s life and then was an asshole abt when they met again. fuck that bitch fr. update reread the first volume: FUCK THE BLONDE GUY SM WTF; he’s worse than i remember. not him literally blackmailing the mc after he was the one who gave him the scar that forever caused ppl to profile him as a delinquent now. it’s just so gross how the mc has to do sexual things w him bc the blonde threatens to post pics and vids of him. and then these mfs end up basically together like wtf (not like officially officially but you can tell they’re gonna get together in the second volume)?? i hate troupes like this so much. the blonde in theory could be likable bc he’s such a bitch that it’s kinda funny at times but bro is literally a rapist and sexual assaulter so i do not care!! only getting a 2 instead of a 1 bc i thought the mc was cute; bro deserves sm better

plot was ass. mc got isekai’d just to almost get raped by half the species in the new world bruh. in general so many of the concepts weren’t that fleshed out either. world building was ass too.

i absolutely detest how kawachi coerced shinozaki into oral sex at the beginning. ruined my opinion abt the rest of the story. could be so cute if that part wasn’t included.

this was high key so embarrassing to read. i fr only read this for the porn and even then the scenes weren't that good tbh.

potential in the concept but dont like how it was executed. why is the mc listening in on his big bro having sex w his bf? like bro ewww. also dont like that man who's 25 like bro why are you interested in literal minors who are 10 years younger than you at your big age? also damn seeing comments abt how the mc is gonna end up w hina instead of one of the suitors… natsuhi deserved to win that’s all i gotta say. no hate to hina bc i do fw the childhood friends troupe but damn natsuhi and akira were so cute. it’s the way natsuki already accepted akira as family anyways. lwky gotta adopt natsuhi and akira as ocs and imagine their story out myself bc damn… ALSO WHY DID MAKOTO JUST NOT CARE THAT TOUMA WAS TRYING TO RIZZ UP HIS LIL BRO??? bro practically helped raise him but he doesn’t care that a 25-year old man is actively tryna fuck his little bro???? dick fr changes mfs. update read chap 13: BRO IS HARUKI ACTUALLY STARTING TO HAVE FEELINGS FOR AKIRA??? YOURE DATING HIS OLDER BRO WHY IS THIS BITCH KEEPING IT IN THE FAMILY… also the way makoto (or shin now ig? name change happened) was acting when akira brought up haruki scares me bc it’s the way his face instantly becomes darker/angry like as if he’s jealous or sumn. author i am begging you to not put incest in this bitch we do not want or need it update: oh okay so makoto was just jealous and pissed off that his bf was being weird towards his brother (so understandable fr) but they made up and haruki was like “nah im all abt you baby fr!!” so now they’re good and not acting weird towards the mc. now the student council president is kinda taking interest in the mc in a weird way to fuck w his lil bro (natsuhi) tho and i do not like it… 1) he’s p much using akira as a replacement for makoto and 2) i was fw the big bro dynamic he had going on w akira and how akira was basically an honorary member of the aogiri fam… prob only going to read natsuhi’s end for this bc he was the one i was routing to be w akira the most

the random 4D chess plot line reveal that the omega guy did was kinda crazy but overall a decent read. i liked the main pairing’s workplace rivalry they had going on.

this could be fine if the baby tentacle monster didn’t always want to fuck his dad. like wtf…