snailtm3's manga / #mid plot developement(44)

interesting baseline plot but mid developments halfway through that don’t make much sense + make me cringe. also both MLs suck ass, need the mc to run.

the ml sucks so fucking bad bro i can’t. usaka deserves someone better than this. ml does nothing but blackmail him to get what he wants and it’s so disgusting. usaka call HR on his ass this is deadass sexual harassment. update ch 18: “it’s not ur fault miyoshi” in response to him owning up to how the way he was treating you was bad. I CANT DO IT. this shit is so ass bruh. waste of cute ass art.

i think this had so much potential to be peak. the designs were great, the world building was great, and the characters were rly interesting. genuinely it was just way too short. i think we needed at least 30-40 more chs to fully flesh out the ending. like what was up w the outsider alpha and h-02?? they were clearly alluding to the fact that the alpha likes h-02 (bro got bad taste in men ) but we got crumbs??? like they’ve known each other since childhood supposedly, and the alpha messed up h-02’s plan, NOT EVEN FOR THE WELL BEING OF THE OUTSIDERS but so h-02 would stop obsessing over helm. like bro gay ppl are crazy. genuinely we need side stories so bad. i liked this story a lot actually but i just wish there was more…