ReviewRaptor's manga / #NOT INTERESTED(282)

Just another Omegaverse story that excuses the heat/rut dynamic to justify rape or make it more acceptable. Which is really laughable considering the author mentioned 'its against the law to bonk if one of the people does not consent' and then immediately proceeds to show just how little the Male Lead gives a shit. Both characters aren't really introduced in a way that make them emotionally connected to me. Especially the male lead is simply displayed as a 'cool dude' with a shitty personality. I guess there's plenty people who like that and I too do like those plots, but not with this constant, smut-dumbfvck logic of using heat/rut as an excuse to get away with what is nothing else than a mix of 'drugged up rape meets mind control'. It's just not enjoyable unless you have your dick out already and stuble upon the smut scenes maybe. As fap material this is surely fine for many, as a self-insert I can totally see that. But as a story in general? Really not. The art is ok but the artist has some issue they need to fix with their wonky anatomy at times. The writing is just as trashy as one can expect from smut-Omegaverse so I'll not bother saying anything more. This is really boring and predictable to me, we've seen this at least 10 times before in other comics. In EXACTLY the same way too. There's nothing new here and the personality of the ML is just a major ick factor (to put it nicely) that makes me loose all interest. Give it a go, but be warned that this is just nothing special in any way. Not my thing, so I'll look for something more original and pleasant to read instead.

Somewhat of a review, no spoilers tho. It's honestly sad that despite the detailed review of the male leads past, people still don't understand how heavily damaged he is and how normal his behavior actually is. :'D I can only say: Do not blame him. people do not magically grow out of their trauma (I mean ACTUAL trauma, not the self-diagnozed, social media kind btw). It takes AGES to fix these kinda issues, with help of a professional, which this man clearly never had. So his behavior is very realistic as these kinda people will learn to copy but do not comprehend. And if you haven't learned something, naturally you cannot just do it. Sadly the author doesn't put this all to use as well as it could be. After revealing his past there is barely any learning to be had, which is needed for these characters to work well in a story. Then again, the story has some big issues with random scene jumps and chapters feeling disconnected to the point of it feeling like there is a missing chapter inbetween each upload (which bothers me ALOT btw). I like the base plot but the results of this comic are a bit on the weak side for me. The immersion isn't quite there, the story is too rushed and feels like a rough draft being turned into a comic and the story is (for me) a tad bit too common and predictable. The translations are fine but sometimes I think there were things wrongly translated and do not make much sense the way they are written. But it's not too much of a problem really. It's an okay read I'd say, but if you've read a good hundred high quality comics it might be more in the average to low tiers in terms of writing and art alike (art isn't bad, but sometimes inconsistent with anatomy). Give it a try but I'm not interested enough to keep reading and I wouldn't recommend it either. Just not up to my standards, but maybe you can have a good time with it! Have fun~

I cannot think of the right word, it's similar to convoluted but not that. As in, the story is densely packed with info in a rough draft kinda way that was just mashed into a chapter as quick as possible to move the story along quick. There is too much going on too quickly but nothing is going at a good pace and explained well. Lacking detail and decent pacing in general we could say. Not sure what the word is but I'm pretty sure there was a fitting word in english. Does anyone know what word I'm looking for? It just doesn't come to mind. XD Anyway. My review-ish comment part is as follows: The story alltogether is a bit too predictable for me and does nothing new, the characters aren't exactly new either so I'm not really immersed in it with all the issues given. But I guess for people who haven't read much of these kinda plots and characters this could be an okay read if they are not overwhelmed by the rough drafty-ness of it all. I'm not really gonna read any more of it, i feel the novel would be a better read tbh but I cannot be bothered with that kinda task these days. XD Check it out for yourself but be warned about these few issues. Experienced readers might find them annoying but it's likely a case by case thing.

Really not into this due to the art and partially the story. The art is horribly inconsistent and the story has a slight hint of r/im14andthisisdeep, if you know what I mean. XD It's not bad and surely people who do NOT at all care about art will find this a good read, but the art itself already makes it not enjoyable to me and the story isn't really worth putting up with the visual annoyance tbh. Check it out for yourself, but I find nothing of interest here. IF this is based on a novel, I would suggest reading that instead.

Sadly, this isn't my thing, I prefer coherrent and well written stories instead of weird randomness. But I suppose whoever is looking for wanking material can probably like this. The story had potential at it's very rough core, but it got ruined by half-assing and rushing it just to draw dick sucking. The story is weird, jumps to the first 'intimacy' scene at a REALLY weird moment, literally out of nowhere (just like MC magically being in love) and there is likely much more to add to the list. So I'm dropping this after sadly only 5 chapters. The characters are bland and not well introduced or worked out, the brother is really dislikable, their emotions are not portrayed but just randomly told/reveal/acted upon and I see really nothing of interest to me that would overshadow those problems in the story. This feels like yet another author that wanted to draw bonking with minimal story to it and somehow, nilly-willy, tried to string it together so it can be made into a comic. This would have been better off with either ALOT of work put into the plot/writing OR simply leaving it at regular smut without a story.