ReviewRaptor's manga / #wtf just happened?(326)

Okay, the issues just don't stop. I am not sure if the translation is just pure horseshit or if the writing is really THAT horrible. From the start there are a few issues with characters saying they KNOW what happened and some time later the monologue/dialogue implies that they do NOT know. WTF is going on??? And it only gets worse after Jooin's mother is being revealed, there is 2 speech bubbles RIGHT AFTER ANOTHER in which the guy contradicts himself: first he says he does NOT know the truth, next sentence he DOES know and what's the uke to go ahead and tell him. I don't know if this was written THAT badly, without any planning and ending up a mess or if the translators are just absolutely abyssmal here. Which would be odd in a way, since the grammar IS GOOD, as opposed to 99% of the other translations with exactly this issue. Please get your collective shits together and make this make sense. Or just...don't translate it if you cannot make sense of the story.

Ok, no. Unless the author just didn't want to continue this story and just went "fuck it~", this ending should be misflagged, right? You cannot honestly expect THIS (chapter 33) to be an ACTUAL ending, IF you wanna dare call yourself a good writer, that is. Given who and what the characters and the story are, this is only an option as an ending for a season to the webtoon. But if by any chance the author is serious about THIS being the ending and them just going on to write useless side stories then...sorry but you just ruined the whole entire story. THAT was by no means a satisfying nor logical point to end the story. Even newbie writers write better endings than that. If this honestly is all we get, I'm not gonna recommend this or rate this high, because it's more than lackluster writing right there at the end and the art and smut scenes wouldn't be able to turn the score. WTF is wrong with people these days? You have a good story only every so often and half of those are either butchered by lazy execution in art, writing or just the scanlation/translation. Can we please stop those trends? I'd be very happy about that...

Great, it seems that glorifying and fetishizing murder/murderers is becoming a thing now. At least this one has more logic than the last one and he does NOT let the body rot in his home for days or weeks (which didn't make sense for a public figure in that other trash work). He only lets them lie around for a day or two, even if that also makes no sense. The logic is horseshit, the fetishizing of a killer/psycho is downright sickening and the chapters are jumbled up as fuck early on. DO NOT READ if you have any decent humanoid features, mentally speaking. If this was a story that portrayed a psycho killing for good reasons, wanting to stop and needing to get help with the help of their newfound love, then I'd read it. But this is just subhuman trash for people that think fetishizing, let alone jacking off to murderers (just because they look nice in the artworks) is A-OK. Fuck this. Even the trashiest Omegaverse crap is better than this kinda shit. And THAT's saying alot if you know my feelings about that rape glorification genre...

Why would you bother making a doujinshi with characters if you end up just using their appearance, not the CHARACTER in it's entirety?? Just make your own character instead of basically falsely advertizing and clickbaiting. (Because that's what it boils down to if you do this kinda stuff...) As long as you don't look for the MHA characters but just read it as smut, sure, it's okay like any other boy-tiddie-styled henta-artist-gone-yaoi works out there. They did bother using a closely resembling style for Midoriya and his AllMight moments, but they turned Todoroki into the most feminine twink you can imagine (and gave him a thirsty hentai girl type of personality...wtf). So it's basically a rondo bitch with the looks of Todoroki, just very feminine (they even draw him some twink tiddies, URGH). Waste of time in general, there is better out there but also worse. You do you, but I would recommend NOT reading it.

How do i say this...both the art AND writing feel like a teenager HEARD what manga/webtoons are like, tried to copy the style of someone popular and then just went at it with a lackluster written plot. The art is WAY over the top in many cases. The expressions are way too exaggerated in 'funny' panels, average art is too...'toothy' if you catch my drift (it feels like you look at monkeys baring their teeth, not humans smiling or talking) or they look like they are too extreme for the situation (often looking like something from a psycho horror situation, WTF? - the artist has clearly not much grasp when it comes to understanding how to portray human emotions) and you can tell that the artist has not much skill for some angles since they look wonky af and there is visibly little effort put into them even on the very first pages. If this was re-worked, I think it could be great (IF the damn translation isn't halfassed as it was done here right from the start... I cannot recommend it, for anything really. Not even the plot is unique enough to make it worth reading or just skipping pages. And the sex scenes themselves aren't worth skipping through for either, since the first one literally goes from 'NO don't do this :v' over 'but I'm gonna~' to 'OH FEELS SO GOOOOOD~'. There is literally NO coherency, sense, emotion or justification for such a sudden change. AT ALL. It's a good attempt for a first work I guess, but that's it: an attempt. The execution leaves much to be desired on all possible fronts. 1/10