ReviewRaptor's manga / #wtf just happened?(326)

This reads like someone told their friend about a really cool sex scene they thought of and then said: "I wanna make this into a comic!". Then the friend replies: "But a comic needs to have plot and such, right?". And the creators reply was simply: "Well, we'll cross that bridge when we get to it....". This seriously has SUCH heavy raw draft vibes, I can't even. Like the only planned out thing was 'sex scene' and the rest was just thrown together nilly willy. I think this might turn out to be yet another one of those smut comics that would have been better off as a 'silent' art reel. Because so far the writing is confusing, lacking and very amateurish in nature. And I don't think it'll get better, unless this was a 2-part promo upload. Which I doubt....

I seriously TRIED, but the friend is so utterly obnoxious. The entire arc with her feels shoehorned in there and it doesn't feel well written in many ways. It's like the friend's drama got shoehorned in and became a distraction the author focused on instead of the actual plot. It's really not enjoyable to read. The MC is nice and all and so is the love interest, but there's too many other issues for me to keep reading. It feels rushed and at the same time like it drags, which is just unpleasant. I'm also really not a fan of these mixed timeline stories (which doesn't even make sense since all the modern aspects are just rails, ipads and megaphones....was a modern theme implementation REALLY needed just to add those background aspects?). It's just weird. To each their own. I wish anyone who likes it happy reading, but I'm gonna drop this at chapter 16 since it became a chore to read instead of being interesting.

Yeah no thanks. If I want to see rape I'll just go to the old classics. The art is very nice but the plot is horseshit. Enjoy to whoever likes this fvcked up stuff but I'm out. Gotta cleanse my eyes with something after this. :D