ReviewRaptor's manga / #wtf just happened?(324)

This' some 12 year old wanking material right here, for people who really, REALLY ain't into realistic women. I can't stop laughing. X'D The angles are ridiculous the more you look at them. And the anatomy is quite weird too, which is not doing this comic a favor, really. ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Holy FUCK are there some logic issues in this one. It's super confusing and some thing are hardly explained. It's an ok read, but really nothing I'd recommend. There's too much mental fuck-up happening too...

Okay, can we just once, for the love of anything ever holy, have THIS scenario and have the two cheated people team up and collectively kick the asses of the cheaters? Is that really too much realism for Bl to ask for?? I mean, sure, the fuckwit who defended his apparently constantly cheating boyfriend is already a lost cause, but I would still love to have some characters at least have some type of realistic emotion. Like "He said he would only cheat if i left for 5 days or longer, so I came back early so he WOULDN'T cheat, but he still did...time to beat the bitch!". I know realistic reactions or emotions are rare in BL stories but come the fuck on... Still amazingly lovely art tho, so there was at least something nice about this. Also, having a surgeon character like him is rare. Doctors are usually always introduced differently and have a different air about them. So that was kinda nice.

I know what the author meant to go for, but it just doesn't work. Anyone else except the MC is a douchebag I wanna see get beaten to a pulp, but the author is trying to make the reader feel sympathy or like for all of them in their own way. Which doesn't work with this execution. No feelings come across except for those of the MC, even if you're supposed to feel sympathy for the ex (which would ONLY have worked if his introduction was different...) it just won't arise even the slightest bit after how shitty he behaved. I'm not gonna like a character that was introduced like THAT, so there is really no need trying. It's more obnoxious than anything else and none of the things the author is trying later on make it work and magically let you forget how much of a shitbag he was when he met his supposed 'lover he so desperately searched for for ages'. Just quit it and let him be the antagonist along with his new bitch-boyfriend. That would have made this more enjoyable. As it is now: It's not. The new love interest of the MC isn't any better either tbh since he could have gone with any reason except for "Ah well, I only pity-fucked you, so don't go catching any feelings, 'kay? :)". I DO get the apeal of an aloof seme that doesn't have any feelings for the uke yet, but goddamn is this intro for him trashy. All in all, the MC should fuck off away from all these people, start anew somewhere else and get a regular, average and decent person to fall in love with. That, at least, would be better than wasting time with any of these shitheads tbh... It's just not enjoyable to read, nor can I really say I have any interest in the story given how bad the logic and execution is. Hard pass from me on this one.

Yeet thyself away from this shit if you aren't into sick shit like rape and general gay-biased tropes (condescending behavior towards gay guys, mentality of 'they like getting fucked by any dick'/'they wanna fuck because they are gay', etc.).