peaches's manga / #1 star yikes(111)

dropped lol first of all- plot? cringey. and chapter 5? jesus christ ahah EWW unsanitary as shit lol i sound harsh but the writing really is not good for me. i dont think i have it in me to put up with this for a few more chapters just to give it a chance

05/28/22 ch 31 plot: 0 story: 0 art: 3.5 writing: 0 uke: 3 seme: 2.5 chemistry: 0 skinship: 2 overall: HUGE WASTE OF TIME yikes. dropped. waited 31 chapters for a fucking answer that meant NOTHING. writing is terrible, story is going nowhere, plot is shit. the only thing going for this is its art. thats literally it. in some chapters there were panels that are mixed up and sure i could blame the uploader, maybe they made a mix up. but a wholeass scanlation team works on this and im pretty sure there are people in said team that works to check the quality and arrangement of such so basically it's neither the team nor the uploader's fault. the storyline AND telling are just that bad. rip to me for wasting my time. super not worth it. if you cant get your plot and story straight in 31 chapters even after the start of its lore then i got some news for u buddy, this aint worth the time and effort. i sound harsh lol sorry ig bye

dropped at ch 16 basic ass plot with terrible writing sorry lol i tried giving it a chance but she really aint it ur honor

plot: 1/5 story: 1/5 art: 2/5 writing: 1/5 uke: 1/5 seme: 1/5 chemistry: 0/5 skinship: 1/5 overall: waste of time

fuck seme to hell

bookmarked at ch 13. probably will eventually drop. shes unbearable ur honor. author tried to make a charismatic dangerous seme trope yet all i see is a dangerous temperamental seme with a shitty personality and charisma of a wet cement that is only appealing to people who are into red flags (and quite possibly wet cement). uke on the other hand has a strong personality and sure it can be appealing sometimes, but mans is fragile as shit to fall for seme's "charm" (if u can even call it that cuz it sure as hell isn't charming) despite his terrible actions e.g. pointing a gun at him and not apologizing AND ALMOST SHOOTING A KID AND NOT FEELING ANY REMORSE WHATSOEVER. listen even the most menacing villain won't do that insane fuckery. seme is A PSYCHOPATH. uke is a lawyer so he SHOULD KNOW what tf injustice and mistreatment are the fuck??????? what im trying to say is both characters are too trying hard to be what they were supposed to be. art is aight. story is not that interesting. cant find anything i like abt this tbh edit right after i scrolled and saw this is made by the same author as kiss me liar and i fucking SCREECHED LMFAOOOOOOOOO no wonder this story was shit ahahahahaha im not even sorry that book is SHIT and anyone who like that should be instantly checked by the nearest therapist. anw gonna wait for this author's redemption arc

08/18/22 ch 5 plot: 1.5 story: 1.5 art: 3.5 writing: 1.5 uke: 4 seme: 3 chemistry: 2 skinship: 0 overall: she was boring as hell <3 not even cute or what, literally just a snooze fest. i liked uke's relationship with his grandma tho that was nice 1.5/5

i dont think shes worth the time and effort ur honor shes not very giving 1.5/5

plot: 2 story: 1.5-2 art: 4 writing: 0 uke: 1.5-2????? seme: fucking 0 chemistry: 1 skinship: 2.5 overall: emphasis on the shitty seme tag cuz mf a psycho jesus christ 1.5/5 edit 02/28/23 ch 41: tf is this bullshit? their dirty talk is more like shit talking 04/13/23 ch44: what in the cringe hell is this????????????? writing is now a 0

i dropped this early around chapter 5 and tried giving it another chance before completely dropping it until i couldnt take it anymore lol because it's so fucking annoying what they did with the fl. this was pretty hyped up bc it was apparently a "good novel" so my expectations were pretty high. turns out it's just the typical trope korean heterosexual manhwas have and almost 0 thing to look forward to. sure i was just 5 chapters in but u cant tell me to give it more chance to know the whole plot, it's the first chapter's job to captivate the reader, no? also wtf thats not how a person stutters???? she looks stupid? i extra hate it when they make female leads look weak and stupid and dependent on a man. but since shes abused i'll give her a pass but that doesnt change the fact that i still dont like her character. the stupid attempt at stuttering really was the last straw for me lmfao sincerely, someone who actually fucking stutters