peaches's manga / #1 star yikes(111)

08/28/22 ch 64 plot: 1-1.5 story: 1-1.5 art: 3-5 writing: fucking garbage - 2 uke: 3-4.5 (lai), 3.5-4 (ellen) seme: 2-3.5 (hector), 1-1.5 (edwin) chemistry: 4.5 (hector lai), 2.5 (edwin ellen) skinship: 4.5 overall: holy shit. i contemplated giving this just 1 star cuz..holy shit thats some shitty ass story and writing like, this took me DAYS to read. those 64 chapters took me days to read because of how much it broke my brain wtf the writing is fucking garbage this is the first story that made me so mad abt the writing nothing ever made sense and when it did it was already ON THE 40+ CHAPTERS LIKE WTF??????? and even then im still struggling!!!! plot should be pretty much straightened out early on like tell us something about this damn book ! this is literally the definition of "JUST VIBES" cuz it's giving me nothing. story was sooooo all over the place. things are just happening without any context and the art wasnt helping at all!!!!!! bland as shit wouldnt show the appropriate expression to what is needed (depending on the actions and dialogues) it was just FLAT. individual character profiles are pretty good like theyre all gorgeous but jesus their expressions and dialogues just dont match most of the time. and the writing. those fucking stupid nonsensical dialogues. scanlators could easily be blamed for this but i doubt it cuz 64 chapters in and it's still confusing as fuck given that the scanlation teams already changed halfway through. maybe the author was high when they wrote this? cuz they literally just went in and did some scenes, story and plot be damned . transitions were shit lemme tell you that rn. flashbacks dont have black background to differentiate present to past. literally just vibes fr. i have so many issues with this story. SO MANY. yet im still hooked!!!!!! i wanna push through this shitty story and see what happens. or maybe im just bored and wanna see if it will get shittier . i dont know edit 10/14/22: ch 72 yayyy he remembers now<3 im happy for the gays 10/27/22: ch 74 lai looks so soft oh my ..... he looks so lovable 12/01/22 ch 79: art looks good here omg and kinda wanna rate their chemistry and give them a 4. hope this continues 12/08/22 ch 80: i cant stop and i wont stop talking about how adorable the twins are when they were young the art really popped off on this one lol and lately the writing and story are getting better? took this book 70+ chapters lmfao also !! finally decided to score the chemistry cuz hector n lai are really something when theyre together omg 01/20/23 ch 86: theres no way. theres literally NO. WAY this is tHe EnD like be ffr ????????????? she went up to a 2.5 but at what cost u may ask,?my sanity. thats the cost cuz it do be feeling like that. writing atp went from garbage to a 2. but overall i feel used bc , they drained me and made me wait for over 70 chapters to *actually* look forward to it only for it to end after ten more chapters like R U FUCKIN KIDDING ME? anyway thats that. they can add more side chapters and id still eat it up but main story is just shit yall

plot: 1.5 story: 1.5 art: 2.5 writing: 1.5 uke: 1 seme: 0 chemistry: 0 skinship: 0.5 overall: fuck seme jesus edit 06/20/22: ch 40 like, ew lol the sex was cringey asfuUUUCKKK idk the chemistry really wasnt there luv just pure unadulterated lust lmao and sure thats fine but if i dont feel the chemistry the sex will come out as cringey to me. also, i didnt even notice the long absence of this book's updates ahahah shes that unremarkable ur honor. thank god the art makes up for it. also jesus uke STAND TF UP 09/05/22: ch 50 art is dead. shes bland. uke annoyed tf outta me . seme.. seme can fucking choke. literally bad writing with these characters and the story is slowly going down the drain. nothing to look forward to this anymore 09/15/22: ch 51 the art really is dead. ever since he was put in that room the art died like the proportion of the bed was off, colors were literally nothing aside from their hair, and movements? who even is she amiright. characters have completely gone to shit to the point that uke fucking annoyed me to no end hes just so push and pull like STAND TF UP. one min ur like 'i fucken hate u seme' the next min ur like 'omg whens he coming back' like what the Fuck? he also provokes seme and looks like a shocked pikachu face when seme actually gets provoked jfc . hes so fuckinh .. i dont even wanna say anything anymore hes more annoying than seme at this point. dropping this

plot: 2 story: 1.5 art: 3 writing: 1.5 uke: 2.5-3 seme: 2 chemistry: 2 skinship: 2-2.5 overall: i already read the fan translation of this up to ch 64. it was super meh but tolerable i guess. if it wasn't for the translator's excessive unnecessary side comments it wouldve been better but i dont exactly have the right to complain amirite but thank god this might have the chance of getting justice because of the official translations. idk tho if i will still want to reread this bc the plot story and characters are all not good. this was said to be a novel adaptation so idk why even the writing here is not good. overall she was a recipient of 1 star anw shes currently a 1.5/5

um.. no? this is just a no. uke did something terrible (and multiple times might i add) and the supernatural thing of the plot here was just not it for me 1.5/5

an upsetting age thing between uke n seme, uke being SA'ed with his ex as the brains behind it, and also that creepy stalker seme motherfucker outted uke. so many wrong things about this book and not a single thing worth redeeming for. bye

04/29/22 ch 11 plot: 0 story: 0 art: 10 out of 5 holy fuck writing: 2-2.5 uke: 1.5 seme: oh hes a 5 alright. i wouldnt even do half the things he does for uke for the people i love like be serious chemistry: 3.5 skinship: 2 overall: jesus christ the way my coping mechanism kicked in- i panic laughed through some parts because i couldnt take it ahah ok first of all the art is GOD SENT literally this is a solid 2/5 for me at the moment but i had to make it a 2.5 because of the art. she wouldve been a 3 had i not been irked by the way uke was treated. literally wasnt his fault but my mother instincts just cant help but feel so horrible for him that it messed up my total score of this lol AGAIN IF AN UKE GETS TREATED RIGHT U GET A 5 STAR RATING IT'S JUST AS EASY AS THAT IT'S NOT FUCKING ROCKET SCIENCE edit 06/13/22: ch 13; 13 chapters in and im already giving up lol how am i gonna get through 50 more chapters or so god help me 09/02/22: ch 19 uke is now 2/5 . he was hella frustrating his stupid and selfish decisions rly pisses me off 09/13/22: ch 20-21 this shit is so fuckin heavy, like so fuckin heavy . took me HOURS to read two chapters bc i cant take it. it's too much. the only thing left for me to go on is rooting for seme. literally thats it. cuz plot n story n ALL characters except seme are SHIT . 09/26/22: ch 22 holy shit uke? i just wanna say , if ur so self destructive why bring seme into this mess? he was so peacefully ignorant of ur situation until u showed up and now you feel like shit that he feels like shit in your place????????? be fucking fr 12/05/22 ch 32: every update opens me up to a new level of depression like.. this book is so heavy it's dragging me down lmao 01/16/23 ch 35-37: this is fucking too much. plot and story is 0. dropping to 1 star. might also end up getting dropped altogether if the gore continues 02/28/23 ch 39: congratulations i finally put this on hold. i couldnt even get past the first few pages of this chapter. i just cant deal with this anymore. hope the author is seeking professional help rn bc i certainly need it after reading this book. every update fills me with dread instead of feeling eagerness to read it like how insane is that? i read to feel relaxed and transported to a different world but this book just makes me wanna kms. it's an acquired taste for sure. not mine. bye

12/03/22 ch 30 plot: 2 story: 2 art: 2... .5. 2.5, sure writing: 2.5 uke: 2.5-3 seme: 0 chemistry: 0 skinship: 1 overall: not a single thing i liked about this but i kept going in hopes of finding something i might like and lo and behold i found nothing. absolutely nothing is redeemable. uke is the *most* i can like here and with his score of 2.5 amping up a bit to a 3 bc i felt sorry, that says a LOT lmfao. and tell me why was this separated from its continuation!!! absolutely no reason to do it! coulda just have both books in one book bc the first book absolutely canNOT stand on its own?!!! anw shes close to a 1 but since it made me read the continuation she deserves an additional .5. bye pointers: EXTREMELY frustrating alpha idiot seme!!!! mf rly made me wanna pull my hair out MULTIPLE TIMES and secretly omega uke with a...character. school setting. alpha omega bs. god this was a waste of time

12/03/22 ch 7 plot: 1.5 story: 1 art: 2.5 writing: 1 uke: 1.5 seme: - chemistry: - skinship: - overall: wtf is up with this unbelievable series of events right on the first few chapters????????? so many questions that i highly doubt will get answered. this author has a habit of making stories out of vibes and vibes alone and plots full of holes it makes the swiss cheese jealous. and tell me why i still eat it up like a fuckin idiot. the pisces in me is working overtime with the insane amount of chances i give out to these books i surely know is a waste of time. currently a 1/5 "sequel" (with air quotations bc why tf is this a separate book from freezing point) of freezing point jesus

unsatisfying. she literally gave me nothing. 1.5/5 pointers: model uke slept around to have gigs. college kid cosmetics major seme is an avid fan of model uke

it's shit. seme is shit