peaches's manga / #poor uke(133)

plot: 2.5 story: 2.5 art: 4 writing: 3 uke: 4-4.5 seme: 1-1.5 chemistry: 4 skinship: 2.5-3 overall: this story does come around close to the end cuz trust me when i say i personally wanted to commit first degree murder on the seme around the first few chapters (and probably up until now i still do) cuz he really do be a dickhead. i wanted to make this at least 2.5/5 but is she deserving tho

plot: 3 story: 2 art: 4 writing: 4 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 2 overall: the writing was good on some parts especially their inner dialogues but the story....i guess some can be opted out and some are ok. got confused at first which is which on the first scene cuz the art be hella misleading cuz other than amaru and shin everyone has distinct faces but did it really have to be those two to have similar attributes lol took me a while to register that (/s:) shin is not the seme. that's the only thing that frustrated me the most. other than that i liked amaru and yashum's storyline. they suit each other i like how genuine their relationship is edit (same day, only minutes after reading the prequel of this): dang i hate it when i read a sequel first THIS STORY DIDNT HAVE A MEMO HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO REALIZE IT WITH MY 3 BRAIN CELLS JESUZ but anw i call this a semi sequel to the prequel bc it doesnt really correlate much with the prequel's story WHICH IS 5 STARS BTW and had i read that one first i wouldnt have to complain abt being confused with the two main characters here fine fine it's my bad i apologize smh also i think it's better i read this first? cuz if this followed An Unmapped Country, Somewhere In This World im gonna be hella disappointed with how underwhelming it is she might just be a 2 so i guess it's a blessing in disguise ahah

plot: 5 story: 5 art: 5 writing: 5 uke: 5 seme: 4.5-5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 3 overall: BITCH I WANT MORE!!!!! especially after reading Sonoyo no Dokoka, Tokoyo no Rakuen before this (which is technically wrong because that story is a semi sequel to this i legit just realized it after reading the first chapter of this sue me) man did that technical semi sequel set the bar so low cuz i be having a ball in this bitch I WANT MORE AND I MEAN IT !!!! i rarely give out those 5 stars because for me if i rate a strory 5 stars it has to be something i would want to reread and not be repulsed by it lol and this certainly has everything: THE STORY THE ART THE CHARACTERS THE PLOT im about to piss myself here with all that enthusiasm leave me alone anyway there was a questionable part here but im willing to set that aside given the circumstances of the parties involved BUT!!! other than that i love her shes perfect i love noné i honestly think i'd do anything for him in a heartbeat. they belong to each other, noné and musutia, but i wouldnt mind if it's me noné decides to be with YES the delusions are at peak rn i said leave me alone overall i just really liked this story it's way waaaaayyyyy (light years ahead) better than the supposed semi sequel of this book im not even sorry

plot: 1 story: 2 art: 4 writing: 4 uke: 3-4 seme: -300 chemistry: 0 skinship: 0 overall: shes a 1 star material too but anw uke is giving 2 stars but i had to keep in mind that the poor thing was traumatized and also manipulated and groomed by the mf seme so,, edit 04/11/22: ch 5 i changed my mind. she is now a 1.5/5 stars story and seme went from 0 to -300 in score. good luck changing that to a higher one motherfucker

plot: 3.5 story: 3.5 art: 5!! writing: 3.5 uke: 5! seme: 4.5-5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 3.5 overall: i cant believe ive been putting this off but in a way im glad i didnt read it as soon as i discovered it and waited for more chapters but then now theres a slight regret of why i read it with only 26 chapters to date and not more anyway she's good! confusing on many parts maybe due to inaccurate translations but so far i still get the gist so it's not a huge problem. and the ART oh my god the uke?!! prettiest little thing to exist i would easily kiII for that babie i live and breathe for him. seme is nice too. im looking forward to this

03/17/23 ch 19 2 stars she wasnt a delight to read even up to the end and it didnt help that seme was unbearable at first and only turned mid to the end. plot holes here and there and story was meh. 2 stars from start to finish. a contender for 1 if im being honest but i decided to cut it some slack pointers: uke who escaped from slavery found his way to a ship and pretended to be an "adult content" worker lmao with seme as the captain of the said ship

plot: 2 story: 2 art: 4 writing: 3 uke: 3 seme: 4 chemistry: 3.5 skinship: 1 overall: the uke was traumatized as hell so i dont blame him if his defense mechanism was to just run away with no explanation at all. seme was so sweet for sticking around tho i adore him and also FUCK THAT PREDATOR ASS MF TEACHER I NEED HIS ASS IN JAIL

plot: 2 story: 2 art: 4 writing: 2 uke: 3 seme: 1 chemistry: 2 skinship: 0 overall: i dont like this mf seme he's a bully he pulled that stunt that uke has to pay with his body when he done set him up like that for one negative comment instead of just confronting him about it nah he a bitch fr watch author pull a sad back story to justify his actions lmfao 1.5/5

plot: 2.5-3 story: 2.5-3 art: 4 writing: 3 uke: 2.5 seme: 0 chemistry: 2 skinship: 2 overall: idk what to say um she alright she delivered what was needed to deliver i wouldnt reread her again tho but she good…just not my cup of tea i guess

fuck no