peaches's manga / #poor uke(133)

04/16/22 ch 6 plot: 2.5-3 story: 3 art: 4 writing: 2-2.5 uke: 4.5 seme: 4.5 chemistry: 3.5-4 skinship: 2 overall: this one had a heavy topic in one part of the story. i didn’t like it lol anw shes supposed to be a 2 but im being generous here bc they do be cute together sometimes 3/5

04/22/22: ch 4 plot: 0 story: 0 art: 4 writing: 0 uke: 2 like im sorry cuz literally where is the emotion sis i had more emotion when i witnessed those shit done to u than u seme: 0 fuck this h0e to hell chemistry: 0 the fuck skinship: 0 jesus overall: fuck this lmfao also ion care if this is a 4-chapter short story imma rate this like a normal length story bc im petty n didnt like it at all

plot: 3 story: 3-3.5 art: 4.5-5 writing: 3-4 uke: 5 seme: 2.5 chemistry: 2 skinship: 1.5 overall: okay first of all i get it, i get the gist of the flow of the story the author was going for. they were aiming for something deeper and more complex but it just ended up being so rushed like there were a lot of things crammed into a tiny bit of space. writing had potential like it kicked me in the gut on some parts. it was good but wouldve been better had the story not have tons of things to unpack but very little chapters to talk about in. (/s:) the seggs scene on the first chapter was definitely out of line like seme couldve been a decent character if it wasnt for that like where tf did that scene even come from? no build up or anything just vibes and a dick for his brain yikes idc what yall think that definitely was NOT consensual lol this story couldve been more tho!! 3/5

04/29/22 ch 11 plot: 0 story: 0 art: 10 out of 5 holy fuck writing: 2-2.5 uke: 1.5 seme: oh hes a 5 alright. i wouldnt even do half the things he does for uke for the people i love like be serious chemistry: 3.5 skinship: 2 overall: jesus christ the way my coping mechanism kicked in- i panic laughed through some parts because i couldnt take it ahah ok first of all the art is GOD SENT literally this is a solid 2/5 for me at the moment but i had to make it a 2.5 because of the art. she wouldve been a 3 had i not been irked by the way uke was treated. literally wasnt his fault but my mother instincts just cant help but feel so horrible for him that it messed up my total score of this lol AGAIN IF AN UKE GETS TREATED RIGHT U GET A 5 STAR RATING IT'S JUST AS EASY AS THAT IT'S NOT FUCKING ROCKET SCIENCE edit 06/13/22: ch 13; 13 chapters in and im already giving up lol how am i gonna get through 50 more chapters or so god help me 09/02/22: ch 19 uke is now 2/5 . he was hella frustrating his stupid and selfish decisions rly pisses me off 09/13/22: ch 20-21 this shit is so fuckin heavy, like so fuckin heavy . took me HOURS to read two chapters bc i cant take it. it's too much. the only thing left for me to go on is rooting for seme. literally thats it. cuz plot n story n ALL characters except seme are SHIT . 09/26/22: ch 22 holy shit uke? i just wanna say , if ur so self destructive why bring seme into this mess? he was so peacefully ignorant of ur situation until u showed up and now you feel like shit that he feels like shit in your place????????? be fucking fr 12/05/22 ch 32: every update opens me up to a new level of depression like.. this book is so heavy it's dragging me down lmao 01/16/23 ch 35-37: this is fucking too much. plot and story is 0. dropping to 1 star. might also end up getting dropped altogether if the gore continues 02/28/23 ch 39: congratulations i finally put this on hold. i couldnt even get past the first few pages of this chapter. i just cant deal with this anymore. hope the author is seeking professional help rn bc i certainly need it after reading this book. every update fills me with dread instead of feeling eagerness to read it like how insane is that? i read to feel relaxed and transported to a different world but this book just makes me wanna kms. it's an acquired taste for sure. not mine. bye

plot: 2.5 story: 2.5 art: 5 writing: 2.5 uke: 4 seme: 5 chemistry: 3.5 skinship: 2 overall: fuck everyone in this story except uke and seme tbh

05/21/22 ch 106 plot: 5 story: 4.5-5 art: 5! writing: 3.5-4 uke: 1-4 mans a range seme: horus i think? hes a 4 chemistry: 3.5 skinship: 5!!!!! (total skinship of everyone lol) overall: there are so many things i wanna say first of all (/s:) i am truly disgusted with the amount of times uke was violated here. and it's especially funny bc it happened a lot of times but the f word was still censored like lmfao???? make up ur damn mind? story is great it made me really interested in the egyptian mythology which for starters i knew nothing about until i started reading this. plot is strong and character buildup were all great so far. but the characters of these characters? honestly? disgusting. the only person i will protect with all my being is anubis and anubis only. the rest can choke. anw great story so far 4.5/5 woulda been 5 if not for the insane amount of r*pe

05/27/22 ch29 2 stars shitty seme. poor uke. literally thats it - edit 09/09/24 ch 100 (end) 3 stars i forgive this book's sins a little bit. i have no deep attachment to this and its characters (or art) but i've been reading it for more than 2 years now so it's bound to grow on me a little for me to give this a pass lol pointers: omegaverse. gangster ml and debtor mc. triggers: suicide, sa, violence

06/03/22 ch 11 plot: 3.5 story: 3 art: 5!! writing: 2.5-3 uke: 3.5 seme: 0 chemistry: 0 skinship: 0.5 overall: the art is reallyyyy good like damn, uke is so pretty and story is pretty swell. fuck seme tho, would love to see him rot in hell

06/05/22 ch 15 plot: 2 story: 2 art: 3.5 writing: 2 uke: 3 seme: 1.5 chemistry: 0 skinship: 0 overall: i dont really like it. im trying to find something that i like about this but it's so hard lol shes pretty basic and there wasnt anything to look forward to aside from the art i think? lol

06/07/22 ch 7.5 plot: 1.5 story: 1.5 art: 4 writing: 1.5 uke: 3-3.5 seme: 1.5 chemistry: 1 skinship: 0 overall: props to the scanlation team thanks for yalls hardwork...but i cant deny that the translations were not good. either that or the writing of the story is really just bad lol i didnt enjoy reading this bc of it yikes um sorry ?