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Yari April 10, 2020 10:28 am

I'm not ashamed to be immersed in this story.... unlike from the other yaoi manhwas, this one just feels so real. I really love this.
The consequences of being in the gay porn industry, how people reacted and their emotions - just feels so real, im enthralled. Uwu

Responses
    BeepBopp April 10, 2020 10:36 am

    Enjoy it as much as you want. But this story is just as stupid as most stories.

    Just because the art style is different and the setting is different, it doesnt mean it’s more realistic. This one is full of clichés.

    nickdaddy April 10, 2020 4:50 pm

    IKR!! this manhwa is really good!!

    BabybluePam April 11, 2020 2:26 am
    Enjoy it as much as you want. But this story is just as stupid as most stories.Just because the art style is different and the setting is different, it doesnt mean it’s more realistic. This one is full of cli... BeepBopp

    Not really tho, I've seen cliché but I don't see them in this one. Can you enlighten me? Most are so predictable and unrealistic but this one isn't..

    Kiyotake April 11, 2020 3:59 am
    Enjoy it as much as you want. But this story is just as stupid as most stories.Just because the art style is different and the setting is different, it doesnt mean it’s more realistic. This one is full of cli... BeepBopp

    The writing is realistic. Feels like you can understand each character and what they're going through but to each their own

    BeepBopp April 11, 2020 6:17 am
    Not really tho, I've seen cliché but I don't see them in this one. Can you enlighten me? Most are so predictable and unrealistic but this one isn't.. BabybluePam

    Chang is a cliché antagonist. He likes our MC but due to his cliché brain his love turned into *lets give him a debt and treat him like shit*.

    Ed is the usual nonsense stupid/nonsense MC. All these years he has been indebted to Chang due to a tricky deal and he still don’t hate Chang, thats our usual *can’t hate people* MC.
    And now Ed blame McQueen as if McQueen ever forced anyone to do porn. + after blaming McQueen, Ed goes to become a prostitute.
    Basic Nonsense Cliché Uke.

    So many men are mesmerized by Ed. Ukes are always are a turn on for any men in cliché yaois.

    This whole story’s drama is based on Chang cliché *i’m doing bad stuff for no reason* and Ed cliché *i had a huge argument with McQueen because my brain died*.

    BeepBopp April 11, 2020 6:18 am
    The writing is realistic. Feels like you can understand each character and what they're going through but to each their own Kiyotake

    ok explain why Chang put a debt on Ed and explain how can Ed blame McQueen and then go prostitute himself.

    Reilaruki April 11, 2020 6:51 am
    Chang is a cliché antagonist. He likes our MC but due to his cliché brain his love turned into *lets give him a debt and treat him like shit*.Ed is the usual nonsense stupid/nonsense MC. All these years he ha... BeepBopp

    LoL ! Please summe-up every story like thiss. Your words are GOLD

    BeepBopp April 11, 2020 7:02 am
    LoL ! Please summe-up every story like thiss. Your words are GOLD Reilaruki

    Thanks. I put all my heart while reading yaois so when the authors betray my feelings with these bad clichés, it hits me hard xD.

    Reilaruki April 11, 2020 8:31 am
    Thanks. I put all my heart while reading yaois so when the authors betray my feelings with these bad clichés, it hits me hard xD. BeepBopp

    It is like they got a book: how to write a yaoi?

    Step 1- have a big misunderstanding that can be solved in one sentence

    Step 2- the uke should be the only one who does not understand what goes on, only making the simple misunderstanding bigger

    Step 3- create a desirebale Seme who will get sick of the uke or too needie

    Step 4- have a hot protogonist who isn't really bad. He love the uke but he diesn't know how to express his feeling so rape is the sulotion

    Step 5- the uke needs ti suffer

    Step 6- the Idiotic seme now realized the uke is the love of his life ( in happened somewhere betwwen to pages ... )


    Step 7- death or happy ebding. One of the both or dying together.



    And that's how you write a Yaoi my dear.


    But i actually like this one very much:))))

    BeepBopp April 11, 2020 9:09 am
    It is like they got a book: how to write a yaoi? Step 1- have a big misunderstanding that can be solved in one sentence Step 2- the uke should be the only one who does not understand what goes on, only makin... Reilaruki

    After reading the spoilers, i lost interest in this story. The art is good, the men are sexy but i was invested so i dont wanna continue because it’s just not to my taste.

    I don’t mind uke raped if i’m not invested. I’m just going through the pages *well this sucks....* and continues but this one i had hopes so it kinda depressed me knowing it will just get bad.

    Kiyotake April 11, 2020 9:10 am
    ok explain why Chang put a debt on Ed and explain how can Ed blame McQueen and then go prostitute himself. BeepBopp

    Because humans are flawed and all have different personalities and ways of thinking shaped by a multitude of things. Also didn't Ed just explain his thought process in the latest chapter? Also the writing is literally the best writing in yaoi name another with the same eloquence

    Chang's reasoning is yet to be explained but he's clearly been punishing Ed for his self hatred over lusting over him and having feelings for him

    Kiyotake April 11, 2020 9:11 am
    Enjoy it as much as you want. But this story is just as stupid as most stories.Just because the art style is different and the setting is different, it doesnt mean it’s more realistic. This one is full of cli... BeepBopp

    Also ps. OG comment never said it wasn't cliche so idk why you're ranting in this thread lol should have just started your own

    BeepBopp April 11, 2020 9:30 am
    Also ps. OG comment never said it wasn't cliche so idk why you're ranting in this thread lol should have just started your own Kiyotake

    Because the comment said *unlike other yaoi/manwhas this one feels so real* which i disagree, because it’s full of unrealistic clichés

    BeepBopp April 11, 2020 9:35 am
    Because humans are flawed and all have different personalities and ways of thinking shaped by a multitude of things. Also didn't Ed just explain his thought process in the latest chapter? Also the writing is li... Kiyotake

    Lol if that is an explanation for what chang did. Then you can just use that for everything that happens in all stories.

    Now all stories are super realistic and the authors are just so good at making characters.
    It’s just that their characters are flawed but thats how humans are... GG

    Feel free to like his character, remains the fact he is the cliché bad guy *i love the MC so ill just fuck up his life* because authors wants drama.

    Oh and i didn’t read last chapter but I honestly don’t think his reasoning will even make sense. He either realized he was wrong or he will bring some kind of weird and vague reasons.

    BeepBopp April 11, 2020 9:50 am
    Because humans are flawed and all have different personalities and ways of thinking shaped by a multitude of things. Also didn't Ed just explain his thought process in the latest chapter? Also the writing is li... Kiyotake

    Ok i just read the latest chapter to see Ed’s thoughts. But that’s still crap dude.

    He pretty much still thinks McQueen is responsible (LOL) but he still wants McQueen. Thats some bullshit logic. He doesn’t even want to apologize. He is just like Chang, full of contradictions.

    Reilaruki April 11, 2020 10:01 am
    After reading the spoilers, i lost interest in this story. The art is good, the men are sexy but i was invested so i dont wanna continue because it’s just not to my taste. I don’t mind uke raped if i’m no... BeepBopp

    Read Painter of the night? Gotta good feeling about that one....

    BabybluePam April 11, 2020 10:04 am
    Ok i just read the latest chapter to see Ed’s thoughts. But that’s still crap dude.He pretty much still thinks McQueen is responsible (LOL) but he still wants McQueen. Thats some bullshit logic. He doesn’... BeepBopp

    Of course he feels that way, his life is pretty much ruined but that doesn't mean his feelings for McQueen are over... how is that so hard to understand. Life is not black and white

    Yari April 11, 2020 2:55 pm

    hmmm i mean everyone has their own opinion on things, its not like we have the same exact tastes on stories, plots or whatnots. Beepbopp has a point of it being cliche and all, but isn't it what makes it feels real ? Our life IS full of cliches, since our actions has been repeated several times from past times making it overused, we just don't or we have realize this thought but left it as that since thats how our life is.

    oml im rambling wtf.
    but really.. its nice that everyone has their own opinion and not afraid to say it. if you love reading this manhwa then pls continue doing so and if you dont enjoy reading this manhwa, there are tons of manhwas out there waiting to be read by you ;)). You might find ur real husbands out there. uwu

    Ciaooo~

    Yari April 11, 2020 2:57 pm
    Of course he feels that way, his life is pretty much ruined but that doesn't mean his feelings for McQueen are over... how is that so hard to understand. Life is not black and white BabybluePam

    I actually agree to this one, of course a part of him blames McQueen for it but partly je feel guilty for blaming him becuase he genuinely love McQueen thats why he still wants to

    Yari April 11, 2020 2:59 pm
    I actually agree to this one, of course a part of him blames McQueen for it but partly je feel guilty for blaming him becuase he genuinely love McQueen thats why he still wants to Yari

    thats why he still wants to be with him.