
The writing skill of this manhwa did not match the quality of the art imo. The pacing wasn't consistent, backstories were introduced without indication, and the story progression was hard to follow. I enjoyed it overall, but I think the storyboard could've been flushed out better before publishing.

I understand. There is a few things they could had flushed out. Though some problems are from Tapas translations . The Korean story is MUCH better. Tapas they changed many things. The fan translations group is working on getting up all the their chapters up soon. It is a different story in ways. They have four up in the raws section.
Yes I was the backstories need more indications but I guess they thought the tan backgrounds indicated it.

No problem. I just seen this. My bad. I don’t know Korean. My friend Mi Amore is self-stuffing korean as well. She used to get really upset when they changed a part. But the French and Japanese still close to the Korean. Why they English reimagined parts we don’t know.
That would be a good test on your comprehension of your Korean. Mi Amore said she learned a lot translating. You can talk to her if you want to know more or compare things in Korean or the story.

I'm six chapters in and it feels like a chore to continue any further. None of the characters presented thus far are interesting in any way. The MC is the most irritating presence of them all, which is an issue because...well... the MC is here to stay. Praying that he develops some character that's befitting of the age and aptitude of the new body. The arrogance and violence is rather uncalled for.

The proper terminology for "rape play" is "consensual non-consent," if any of you ever find yourselves wanting to explore that as a kink.

I'm just saying where I live, most people in the kink community are more familiar with rape-play than CNC. Everyone knows what you mean when you say rape-play and not everyone in the BDSM community will if you say CNC so if you hear CNC it's usually followed up by 'rape play'.
We're pretty blunt culturally though. If it's too traumatizing to even use the word it would be difficult to find a healthy dom to take you on. Too much potential for permanent harm. I don't envy the hunt if that's what you're after. Don't do it myself, and wasn't after it when I was a sub, so I don't have to worry about it.

I understand what you mean. I just wanted to introduce CNC since I think there are a lot of impressionable, young people visiting this website. I want them to have a safe and proper introduction into kink, since otherwise they might fall prey into the wrong hands. Thank you for sharing your perspective!
I get so excited every time I see a notification for this manga. I've stuck with it for so long, it's not too far off to say I grew up with this story.