The concept is funny, the stories suck and the art is reaaaaaaaally bad.
As much as I despise censorship
-if you wanna do porn, just do porn -
I'm still on the team "don't try to improvise drawing things you've never seen".
And this is 21St century ffs, the references aren't exactly lacking or hard to find...
So... This is not for me.
If this kind of concept gets a not porn version, it could be fun.
I think that it is the first time ever I'm regretting the absence of censorship so it's kind of a feat somehow, congratulations for this.
So true about the non-censorship! The dicks all look like ground meat tubes, no dimension, no detail, just gross flesh
Right??? It kinda felt like what kids draw behind their books on self study... It always makes me uneasy to see porn drawn kid-style
I was honestly expecting something longer as it was an interesting concept and plot, like the curse being cast on the knight to seclude him in the forest because he was a menace to their country,and him going all out and burning it to ashes once the red curse would have been lifted...
... Nope.
It was just an excuse for smut and a little happy ending with no context, no background, nothing.
Too bad.
I have just too many questions to rate it higher..
It was funny and interesting between the sex scen- the sex chapt-
The sex series of chapters.
Toooooooo much there were too many, too long and too often, honestly it almost brought my rating to 2/5. Then pizza spawned and it got 2 more * lol
Consequences are once again an urban legend in their world.
But literally a love grenade with shrapnel flying in every direction.
Honestly, it was very interesting though full of holes, just like any Isekai actually.
The BL part of the story failed. The only relationship that worked and felt natural was between the girls, but the boys...
At least Kael, it felt like bullshit and it also felt like the author was conscious of it seeing how they justified it being the game's mechanics.
Objectively: the boy fell on his butt and in love lol.
No reason, no development, no credibility, he just fell on his butt then in love.
The beastman felt somewhat more realistic but a bit rushed, there was a reason for the gratitude, respect and devotion, but there was not enough time nor interactions to fall in love.
Carsen on the other hand had a history with the MC and a fair load of reasons to be obsessed with him. Does it justify the sexual assault though? Nope. There was literally no reason for it to be here aside from satisfying a small part of the audience.
The MC reactions are hilarious and felt way more realistic than most, I liked that.
My autocorrect just refuses their names lol I'm having a hard time writing all this.
Anyway, the plot was good, it was interesting and a lot happened, there was no time to get bored.
But the whole Isekai thing... How MC dreamt of the game (because in the end it was just a dream since his sister had no memories at all) and how the game characters kind of escaped the game and the dream to go in the real world was... Nnnngh, forced to randomly draw a happy ending. It was teased since the beginning and somehow explained with the fate stone but my suspension of disbelief couldn't take any more.
Oh and the bad guy was really forgettable.
The art improved A LOT!
In conclusion , it wasn't fabulous but it wasn't bad a all.
Man A gets to see a glimpse of his coworker B's huge invisible dick, B gets flustered and mentions how he got sexually assaulted because of it; so of course A does what we all want:
blackmails him,
sexually assaults him several times,
gets jealous when old hot friend C appears and TADAAA!
They're magically so in love and fuck and end.
I fucking hate these lazy formats and half-sticky-note-long plots with no morals.
NOOOOOOOO I MEANT TO UPVOTE NOT DOWN im sorrryyyyyyy
Don't worry down votes are part of my public image xD
So this is a 14 chapters story about two guys getting together in 1.5chapter, 11 chapters of putting blinding shiny dick in an un-drawn hole and blank part of panel ejaculating everywhere with 1.5 chapter of something happening.
The art was nice (when it was here, huh censorship? Yes I'm looking at you) but it's not enough to make the 10 minutes spent reading this worthy (yes this includes the slow loading of the pages with my limping internet connection).
I think the only way to make it more pointless would be to translate the rare dialogues in hieroglyphs.
That pussy was nightmarish is2g
Too bad it's just plain porn, it seemed funny.
It was a cool and sweet story with a unique plot, context and characters.
To think that I almost dropped it because the immersion was ruined at every little commentary from the translator! It would have been a waste.
The story was very okay, the sides were ... Well half of the sides are sex chapters so .. depends on the reader I guess.
I'd still like to thank the author and artist for not drawing the kids having sex though .
Dimitri was a very pitiful and endearing character, the story didn't go the easy way to make him a little love arc that would have minimized the impact of the plot and I loved it, and I hope the technology in their era worked hard on washing machines because his sheets certainly had it hard with his rejection lol.
I had to deal with my parents fucking for my entire childhood, from before I knew what was going on and when I learned it, it didn't even shock me, I just found it unpleasant and still do at +40.
I wonder if my approach of sex would have been different if my parents had the courtesy to not fuck loudly in the same room I was supposed to be sleeping in before I could even understand what they were doing ...
The 2nd couple makes me very uncomfortable and made me remember things I'd rather not.
I completely understand ! This is « fiction » and is only supposed to be funny ig but this type of comportment is truly unacceptable, this is wrong in so many places even more that their kids r only 14-15… it is not taken seriously which is wrong, it gives kids so much trauma
I ain't no psychiatrist so I can't just stick the "trauma" tag on it, but this being a situation I experienced, I can at least (for me) say that it left a mark, and not a beautiful one if you know what I mean.
And this being turned into some kind of caricature feels gross to me. I skimmed through the comment section and it seems that for once, I'm not the weird one (which somewhat comforts me lol)
When I was kid... Let's start with the appropriate dinosaur's tone:
HAEEEM HAEM.
"Once upon a time, in a kingdom far far away, and another century (literally) existed books, comics, cartoons and shit, also written and drawn by authors to make a living.
BUT!
How blessed were they that their works couldn't be shared for free worldwide on the internet, as such a demonic system didn't exist!!!!
They'd make shit tons of money selling their books because it was the only way to read them and live happily rich ever after!!!
Just kidding, one bought a book and everybody borrowed it, as for the not-so-poor-but-not-rich-either, they'd buy a very expensive free pass for local libraries and read shit there.
The only difference between then and now is that authors' work rarely crossed any borders and no one ever even thought of " supporting the authors" lol.
No offense huh but this generation is a little dramatic in my old ass's opinion.