before some annoying person says "why are you here go back to cute romance or your doing too much blah blah motherucking blah"
I low-key was invested until they started having her raped every single updation. Like what the hell happened to the plot of her past self obviously leaving the duke for someone she loved more (idk who) and her comming back to repeat that same cycle with possible no escape.
this is my own fucking critique and I hate people who think others can't complain about something they are genuinely upset about. You people are corny as hell.
IM A STARVING JUST LIKE OLIVER TWIST. "Please sir I want some more" I SCREAM TO MY IMAGINARY AUDIENCE AS I CLUTCH MY PRARL AND SLAM MYSELF AGSIN THE WALL TO EXPERIENCE THE HIGH THIS CHPATER JUST GSVE MR. FUCKING HELL.
Joshua ill be your mistress my legs are spread wide open ready to recieve you. if you dont like that I got the dragon strap just for YOU GAWDDD.
I'm normal now
PLEASE FOR YHE LOVE OF GOD, YOU ARR INFRONT OF YOUR EX WIFE DO NOT EMBARRASS YOURSELF MORE.
she didn't do anything wrong. she was scared because an anonymous person kept contacting her damn husband and he did nothing about it cause his fuck ass self still loved a guy from his past. thr MC is downright pathetic and I love that about his character but let's not act like the wife's anger is misplaced. While SHE STANDS INFRONT OF HIM HE SEES SOMEONE ELSE HE SCTUSLLY LOVES???? that's fucking ridiculous
I'm on like chapter 14 and I don't know how the ML hasn't punched the dude straight in his dumbass face. You catfish a mf then expect everything to be normal. Are you mentally ill??? THE STRAIGHT AUDACITY OF THE MC ID BEYOND ME????
and the MC's friend can choke on my nans hairy balls. I hope he coughs up pubic hair balls every single day for the rest of his life.
I don't blame him for thinking Josh and his sister are dating. We gotta remember guys, chase has never been in a monogamous romantic relationship that's lasted longer then I would on American borders.Plus people like to date those who look like them ( I don't know why but its bloody weird). He's insecure and I don't blame him if I was anywhere near Joshua I was pounce on him like a starving wolf. Anywhoo Joshua my legs are spread open for you.
at some point you start understanding why superheros don't take revenge on villains "because they'll turn out just like them or worse" and this is a prime example of that.
I know the MC raped him in the past and ML wanted to dish out what' he received but this is just unnecessary... How about you put him in mother fucking jail?? Hes actively getting enjoyment for this and I don't know whether he's already gone off the deep end or if he's edging there every single second his with MC. This ain't fucking revenge anymore (I hate this stupid bitch ass creator. suck my balls) it's an excuse to portray the creators concerning rape kink that's in both of her most popular works.
Gots to see it through, my boy. ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ
Though, I’ve heard rumors of the MC doing horrendous things in the past. (Not sure if they’re true or not)
The authors writing really reels you in, and the suspense makes you come back. I just really can’t wait for the backstory to drop to further explain things. (Not saying the ML is completely justified in his actions, I can say this is more of a “morally grey” story or something darker than that.)
Dude Jiwook did get caught and reported to the police when he raped Juyeon. And what did they do? Gave him community service. Which pissed him off so bad that he posted Juyeon’s CSEM everywhere. Go get your lick back little twunk. (Also, this story was not written by the same person who wrote Sadistic Beauty. They only share an illustrator)
I'm guilty i read the novel, and as you said it seems it was a way for the autor to show all his/her dark kinks and fantasies.
But what i rescue from the story that infuriantes me( leaving aside all the explicit scenes), is that i do feel bad and pity the seme but the child he was, and the serie of events that led him to become that, for he wasn't going to take revenge. I got mad at the mother that left his son alone with his trauma. I pity the uke but he was trash, we don't really know much about him(he's just there as an object for the autor's desires,
I'm guilty i read the novel, and as you said it seems it was a way for the autor to show all his/her dark kinks and fantasies.
But what i rescue from the story that infuriantes me( leaving aside all the explicit scenes), is that i do feel bad and pity the seme for the child he was, and the serie of events that led him to become that, for he wasn't going to take revenge. I got mad at the mother that left his son alone with his trauma. I pity the uke but he was trash, we don't really know much about him(he's just there as an object for the autor's desires) he did torment the seme for moths and was awful to others but that dosen't justifies the violence.
And everything started because seme fell in love with uke, and uke liked him to but was to proud/ narcissistic to admit it so he choose violence.
In the end they both are trapped, they did it themselves, they choke and tie each other. Seme never went to theraphy, uke goes but not much improvement.
Not excusing anything and I haven't read the novel only spoilers and I agree that this is kink but IIRC from other webtoons that I read but also irl cases in Korea, when minors commit rape they end up with a slap in the hand. Also many victim blame the poor victims including police like they brought tgis to themselves/wanted it...bleugh. A very common example is Miryang middle school girl gang rape case. And in general even with adults, in Korea rape and violence against women is treated very lightly because its a very misogynistic society and they even pamper pedophiles ending with very light sentences. You better be a pedophile in Korea than a feminist bc they really hate feminists and blame them for the low birth ratings instead of their actions and high domestic violence, pedophilia or rape statics.
Also the Burning sun scandal. Fr in Korea if you steal gum from a store you end up with bigger sentence than what you get for raping a f child or rape in general. Its really fucked up their legal system.
Back to topic, same sex gay violence/rape treated as a joke and homophobia many were ashamed to confess or police made fun of them so maybe that's why seme didn't go to police and take law in his hands bc legal system fails and end up with a slap in the hand and then made fun by society. Really fucking fucked up.
Also some say that uke in both here and sadistic beauty is based on writers ex bf, who was really abusive to her smth, so all this violence in her stories is a way of her to vent her frustrations on him because she couldn't get justice in real life.
Idk everything is really fucked up. In my opinion BL are more than that just rape/venting your frustrations, but if that gives the author a little consolation, sure freedom of writing exists and can write whatever tf she wants and people are free to read it or drop it she isn't committing any crime or forcing anyone to read it at the end of the day.
I read Ouroboros webtoom where MC is a victim of rape by another man and shows how he is treated by his surroundings, society and police/legal system. Really great psychological work! But really shows how f up Koreans legal system is.
Exactly like you said, if they treat rape of women and children so lightly they won't even give a single f about same sex ones too....
In many webtoons that I read abused characters often hide it out of shame, not to be called gay, victim blamed it's really heartbreaking thinking that perpetrators go on with their lives while victims suffer in silence and even blamed for what has been done to them.
Not a great example but in this works case, seme is angry at first meeting uke bc he sees that uke hasn't changed at all, he is still violent and treats people lightly. Also probably got angry bc he approached him so casually to flirt with him, when in the past he got abused so violently by him just because he confessed his feelings to him and that hurt ukes pride (and was living in gay denial liked him too iirc). And ofc angry bc he forgot what he did to him and just goes on with his life while seme suffered all those years.
Mayn this sum bullshit. Anywho this story had potential can the MC just take his dick out and start tickling it and realising it's her husband please for the love of God. She might be stupider then me because as soon as I realised he was giving me favouritism while screaming I should abandon my husband I would have known immediately.anyways he's sexy as hell I'll be so honest LIKE GOD HES SEXY im going to sidetrack about how I wanna fuck that man if I keep speaking.








I DONT FUCKING CARE WHAT THE BOTTOM DID IN THE PAST IM FUCKING TIRED OF YALL SPOILING THAT SHIT. the top is batshit insane in the head and needs fucking help. this is actually ludicrous and I don't need one of you fucking to reply to my comment saying.
"wHy ArE yOu HeRe" because I'm mentally ill like the rest of ysll???
"JuSt LeAvE" mf I have free will and can decided to read pure bullshit and complain about it being pure bullshit.
"AnD yOu ChOsE tO rEaD aLl Of It" yes I did because I'm actually concerned with the creators mental health and why they keep choosing to express the trauma from their abuse by abusing other fucking men in their stories. The creator is actually mentally ill and needs therapy because I genuinely worry for any person who gets in a relationship with them in the future. Woman or man
At the end of the day - it's fiction, no one got hurt, they're fictional characters. Take a step back if reading things like this traumatize you. That's valid of course, not everybody can read stuff like this without issues.
Having said that; writing, reading or even enjoying stories like this isn't necessarily a moral failing. You're evidently reading this for some reason, you get SOME enjoyment out of it even though you express anger.
Not to ruin your point, the author and illustrator are two different people so yes the illustrator chose to adapt this manhwa it’s just not completely them working on it also reading it would not help if they really were mentally ill like yourself idk
right so you missed my point. I know reading it isn't helping anyone that's why I'm saying it's a bullshit story. like what....
I get a strong emotion that I feel like I know I'll experience again if I read this. not enjoyment. I'm concerned that someone could make this and I want to know how it ends. I'm dropping it after today tho because the emotion of disgust that I felt was too strong for me to come back. and also I've realised I have free will.
I did not, you clearly stated:
"AnD yOu ChOsE tO rEaD aLl Of It" yes I did because I'm actually concerned with the creators mental health
You literally invalidated your own argument. Trying to justify your complaints when you know it’s useless
right so like I don't really care if I invalidated my argument. Im a human being who felt a oversurge of anger of course ill make mistakes. I don't know what you were trying to prove there
and also I'm going to stop reading this story because I've realised I actually still hold something called a moral compass and I've realised that people who go out of their way to read because they enjoy it are insane.
You’re funny, you’re the one that responded to me saying “right so you missed my point” like what?? Contradicting yourself 24/7 I get you’re angry yet there’s no need to be sassy about something YOU said
right so like as I said I'm angry and you chose responded to someone who was obviously expressing their rage in writing and expected a calm and collected conversation. Stop responding because I'm genuinely still pissed I wasted my time reading this story. Aight? Aight.
Sigh, the children are fighting in the comments again.
Yeah ok I didn’t have any expectations alright character development!! Just remember you would’ve considered yourself insane once too since you went out of your way to read it acting like you’re quitting mangago entirely lol
right. okay your first points right.
Holy, your post reeks of mental illness. People that out themselves as a hate reader will always be so funny cause they says stupid shit like "Im reading this to do the creators a favor, reading this will help with their therapy and well being" lmaooooooooo thanks for the laughs
Hii, saw this comment and wanted to comment, it is 100% understandable to initially read one of the pieces here because of the genre, tags, author, etc, and it is completely fair to drop the piece if it disappoints you, that is how safe media consumption usually goes!! ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
However, it is not so adequate to have such rage, strong responses to fiction's quality, neither is to keep pushing your limits to what you are enjoying or not, both hate and obsession can be dangerous, even more for fiction that is unrealistic but not "fantasy", try to take a step back, breath some air, and be mindful of your own enjoyment!! Do not push yourself reading stuff for the curiosity of it "getting better", you WILL eventually find other pieces that fits your taste better without having to waste your time reading something that is not targeted to you!! (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
Reading rape porn but out of concern for the author is a whole new meta I never thought possible.
Wow you sound really retarded and mentally disabled, where’s your caretaker? I’m concerned about you
LMAOO RIGHT like are we fr right now