Who the eff made this and stopped updating not even halfway through the story!!??? Urghhhh
Please. Stop posting something that's neither ongoing nor finished. I cannot bear to part with a story this beautiful but incomplete
Been a long time since I read something about witches, or anything about witches for that matter. The concept is so unique that I was so invested and read it in just an hour.
The art was spectacular. The character designs were so *muah!, like they're all SO HOT!
It irked me that the two couples were literally out to kill each other for no apparent and sane reason but I'm glad it all worked out in the end, because the main Uke is such a sweetheart! Bless him. He's too good for this cruel world! The Seme's one hell of a lucky guy to have him.
I want more of the second couple! They may have been enemies to our main couple, but they still deserved their own love story.
Anyways, I'm for sure gonna re-read this again in the foreseeable future. Worth the read!
What the heck is with this story?! It was so funny and sweet for a yakuza concept, and with the Uke as the boss too! They're both hot and they're both idiots but the Seme, especially, is one cowardly idiot.
I mean, it was so frustrating watching him agonize over his decision and putting himself down, talking as if he was doing this for the Uke's own good but in reality he was doing this for his own selfishness. He didn't even ask for the Uke's opinion and just assumed he's not meant to be for him at all.
Dude, just stop overthinking and get that omega arse! Doesn't matter if you think you're not right for him. Think about him and his child had he chosen a different man who only wanted him for his gang!
Such an idiot. Tsk, tsk. Wasted a lot of people's time and space. If I was there I would've hit his head and locked him up with the Uke in heat.
Well, it still ended well. I love them and I love the story, albeit a very short story, it felt like I was here for a long time.
I laughed, adored, and cried so many times with them. Gosh, this is so precious!!!!!
Another golden one. I cannot believe it took me THIS LONG to find this beautiful masterpiece! It was so fun, so heartfelt, and so beautiful I really want more! More please! MOREEEEEE
I, for real, thought it was a second-rate one shot ecchi story because I was in the middle of reading different stories at the same time, but I never expected this story to be okay in concept and plot.
Worth the read, I'm glad the violence only happened that one time and I know there would be similar instances in the future, only a few because the Uke is a badass who would fight back and set his man straight, but I'm still hoping for more happiness in their future.
Can relate a little with the Uke, currently a freeter myself and still looking for a full-time job, but I'm glad my parents are understanding enough to give me time.
They didn't share much on why the Uke kept getting troubles at his jobs, so there's that, and the side story is not even the same story! It's interesting by itself too so it should have their own manga instead of inserting itself here. Where's the side story!!!!!
MC's too chicken to admit how he's actually in love with the Seme. Seriously never read an MC this cowardly before. He just wasted years and years of torment for both him and Seme.
Still, to each their own. I understand he's having a hard time doing something so easy for other people, it's just so frustrating to watch tbh.
Ain't no way he didn't know he was a red flag to his girlfriend. It was rare for an MC to be this bad of a partner without him realizing it. It's realistic but still unusual for an MC.
A freeloader, a gigolo, it's funny how the Uke didn't get to taste the best sex from the MC until after they officially got together. Never underestimate a gigolo
I came here expecting to read something light and fun only to end up reading a beautiful dramatic story about cousins.
Yep. It's incest but the story's too beautiful that I barely noticed they were related to each other.
The story needs more polishing, but everything else is perfect!
3 YEARS I MARINATED THIS. 3 years of perseverance and enduring the tempting urge to throw it all away and just read this. And the meal was more spectacular than I expected.
This is a golden one. Another story that I loved when I read it before and fell more when I read it again. Words just cannot express what a good and beautiful masterpiece this was.
The action scenes weren't even the best out of all its qualities. The comedy and humor are to die for and the plot... The concept... The flow, the storyline... THE DELIVERY! Is just so masterful and perfect! I want more! I NEED MORE!!!!
Anyways, it was just about to get good! I had a feeling I was gonna meet a dead end by the time I reach the latest chapter, but I just couldn't stop myself from indulging into this!
So what? I'm gonna wait another year so I could save enough enough chapters to read all at once? Undeniably.
Will I kill myself during the process? Highly likely.
As long as I get to read more of the action scenes, the MC's adventures, the comedy bits and his trashy mouth.
Oh, what I wouldn't give to read another chapter from the future
The plot and concept is interesting, especially for me who likes these kinda things, but it just really pissed me off that the MC still ended up with the guy who imprisoned and used him as his baby mama.
The art was okay, the Seme's body looked really hot but sometimes the way they drew people looked a little awkward to me.
Especially the kid. Her head would either be too big or her arms were too short, scared the frick out of me when I found out she was only 3. Looked at least like a 5.
Also, I do not approve of the gentle parenting. She keeps throwing a tantrum when they say no and they enable her. I ain't letting it go just because it's a yaoi. It's also because she's not cute for me, at all.
Anyways, the story had a lot of plotholes for me. I know the idea was good, but the delivery was anything but. It's a little too unrealistic to let go of. Especially the part where the Uke ran off and went against some elite people good at fighting and handling things.
A grenade? Are you fricking kidding me? I don't think anyone was supposed to have access to buying that. Also, he bought those things with the Seme's card. Wasn't he supposed to get any notifications for buying stuff like that? Like, to confirm if his card wasn't stolen or anything.
Anyways, all of it sucks. There was a reason why I dropped this story before and I already had a guess while reading the first few chapters again.
Not gonna be reading this again, I'mma leave this comment as a private note to remind myself why I didn't like this story and why I shouldn't be re-reading it.
Kind of eh, innit?
It's average, the concept is very common, and the delivery was a little lacking, but I do love the art. The Seme was too hot!!
Anyways, could've had more fun had they married and had kids. You just can't make me happy, huh.
Huh??? Wait, he quit??? What's happening???
Nevermind, I don't care.
It was fine. Not my type but it's still fine.
The speech and love confessions at the end was cringey, like, I literally cringed and winced while reading. It's not as good as some idol themed stories I've read, but the concept is somewhat realistic.
I don't really read idol themed or actor themed stories, mostly because the stress from worrying about scandals and reputations turn me off, so don't take my word for it. It's just not my type of story.
So confused but okay. It was interesting and definitely unique. It's probably gonna live rent free in my mind now.
Umm... I'm genuinely confused. What happened? Everything went too fast for 3 chapters but at the same time nothing happened.
First time I ever read something like this and it ain't helping that there are no updates.