The plot and concept is interesting, especially for me who likes these kinda things, but it just really pissed me off that the MC still ended up with the guy who imprisoned and used him as his baby mama.
The art was okay, the Seme's body looked really hot but sometimes the way they drew people looked a little awkward to me.
Especially the kid. Her head would either be too big or her arms were too short, scared the frick out of me when I found out she was only 3. Looked at least like a 5.
Also, I do not approve of the gentle parenting. She keeps throwing a tantrum when they say no and they enable her. I ain't letting it go just because it's a yaoi. It's also because she's not cute for me, at all.
Anyways, the story had a lot of plotholes for me. I know the idea was good, but the delivery was anything but. It's a little too unrealistic to let go of. Especially the part where the Uke ran off and went against some elite people good at fighting and handling things.
A grenade? Are you fricking kidding me? I don't think anyone was supposed to have access to buying that. Also, he bought those things with the Seme's card. Wasn't he supposed to get any notifications for buying stuff like that? Like, to confirm if his card wasn't stolen or anything.
Anyways, all of it sucks. There was a reason why I dropped this story before and I already had a guess while reading the first few chapters again.
Not gonna be reading this again, I'mma leave this comment as a private note to remind myself why I didn't like this story and why I shouldn't be re-reading it.
Kind of eh, innit?
It's average, the concept is very common, and the delivery was a little lacking, but I do love the art. The Seme was too hot!!
Anyways, could've had more fun had they married and had kids. You just can't make me happy, huh.
Huh??? Wait, he quit??? What's happening???
Nevermind, I don't care.
It was fine. Not my type but it's still fine.
The speech and love confessions at the end was cringey, like, I literally cringed and winced while reading. It's not as good as some idol themed stories I've read, but the concept is somewhat realistic.
I don't really read idol themed or actor themed stories, mostly because the stress from worrying about scandals and reputations turn me off, so don't take my word for it. It's just not my type of story.
So confused but okay. It was interesting and definitely unique. It's probably gonna live rent free in my mind now.
Umm... I'm genuinely confused. What happened? Everything went too fast for 3 chapters but at the same time nothing happened.
First time I ever read something like this and it ain't helping that there are no updates.
It's been a while since I read a story of this kind. It's a unique story, kinda creepy, strange and oldy type, but it was beautiful.
It was so unique that it genuinely caught my interest. The unexpected MPreg too. I thought it was just gonna be an idea and they won't actually show their life having a kid, but hell. I want more!!
The only thing the story lacked was that it was too rushed. This kind of plot will be more interesting had they extended it to up to 10 chapters or 6 chapter at the very least and 1 extra.
Like, it was too short and rushed to actually enjoy
It might be awhile until I find a story as unique and as interesting as this one but I do hope I'll find another hidden gold.
By the way, it's funny how the kid got her father's eyes. It was creepy that I couldn't understand what they're feeling and thinking, but the way Uke loves them for it is so wholesome!
Oohh
I knew from the start that it would be Dodome's victory. It's guys like him that do unexpected things and you can't tell what they're thinking.
When we thought it'd be just the Hakugin manipulating everything behind the scenes, it was actually Dodome controlling the stage.
So unexpected and I love the twist!
I do hope for more but the comments are crushing my hopes when they said this had been going on for years now but it's still far from finished.
Still... I'll be here waiting.
Oh dear, I almost felt bad for him. But he should let Dan go, give it time and then try to get him back later.
He gotta let him go to get him, y'know.
Anyway, if there's anything this mf is good for besides his kickboxing, is that handsome mug of his. He better win this, his staff actually made me laugh
It's an experience but it's kinda tame compared to what I expected. Blame it on the traumatic things I've read.
I did think it was disturbing that the Uke gets turned on by being called a mom. I believe he has already fallen for the Seme as a child, because otherwise, he would've been turned on by being called "Honey" or "Wife" instead of "Mom".
He was just blinded by his past feelings for the dad that he believed he was still in love with him instead of the kid. Well, even if he did realize it early on it's still disturbing to fall for a kid you basically raised from birth.
It's in a league of its own. The concept is interesting, though not that unique, it still got my attention. And the way the author delivered it is just enough for me to want more.
I can't believe they made this foursome work. They made sure only one of them is fertile so that the kids have one biological father, but blessed with 4 dads.
It's funny how the Semes are not as strong as the Uke, both physically and sexually. And he has to have 3 men to barely keep him satisfied. I was really scared he'd find a fourth one. They already have a stable and perfect relationship, they don't need another one to disrupt that. And I think the author understands that.
Anyway, this isn't bad. I don't know what's with the warnings on every chapter, but I suppose some people are just more faint hearted than others.
I enjoyed reading this. Looking forward for more light but smutty material!
Mental scarring???? This beautiful piece of work???
Honey, you don't know half of what I've seen and this beautiful piece of work, by far, did not mentally scar me.
In fact, it emotionally scarred me instead with them cutting every story short.
It's adorable and unique. I wanted more from the side couple though... But the main couple is just as interesting!
It's not as cute as I expected, but it's definitely one of a kind.
The story is light, fast, and so good that the amount of times I've re-read this is almost unhealthy.
Hope to read more!!!
After over 200 chapters, something significant has finally happened! Been reading this between other works now because I'm getting too bored to stay on this story alone.
Well, they better make it worth it. The hype up is too big that the result can easily disappoint us.
Anyways, I just took a picture of Ma Kwangho looking all pathetic just now. I cackled so hard looking at that panel.
It looks so satisfyingly funny
It was so funny and so good! A masterpiece in its own craft I LOVE IT!!!!
I want moreeeeee
Anyway, comments on the latest chapter and the side couple, I honestly do not feel bad for the French guy. He was the type who didn't appreciate things that was always there for him and only realized it when it was gone. Kinda like my electric fan that is currently broken in this hot weather.
I hope it takes a long time for him to realize how he actually feels for Seojoon. Don't make it seem a few weeks, make it months... Heck, make it a year! He needs to learn that Seojoon will not be there for his sorry ass anymore and stand up on his own. He keeps acting like a baby, honestly, they made Geonwoo the epitome of a green flag boyfriend that I'm SO disappointed with this douche.
Anyway, I'm not complaining with how it was made, just saying he's got a lot of things to make up for and should use Geonwoo as an example.
Wait. I have a feeling Jazz will lose this duel just because the rules said, "They have to have five fingers holding the item after 3 seconds upon possession"
and in the last panel, Jazz put it on his mouth.
NOOOOOO please give him this win!!!
And that Malius is seriously making me angry now.