I'll actually stop here. The idea of this story is good, I actually love a physically strong FL. The flow is just not it. They just failed to execute it. Too bad, it was interesting too. The art is just a waste if they didn't make the story as good.
How in the hell did they not know of FL's reputation before they went and have her married to the ML? It looks like not a lot of people knew of her position in the knights but even the people in her own country didn't know? How good were they to hide that? When she was caught almost every time she did something by her husband.
Anyway, it's such a shame this is not as good as the general idea and the visuals of the story.
It's the first time that I've encountered a story like this and it's very bizarre and interesting to me.
I like the unique plot. It would've been a lot more popular had the art been more visually appealing. The art is, frankly, too simple and it makes most of the characters look like children so at times I can't take it seriously. There are a lot of plot holes as well and things that don't make sense, but all in all, it's a decent story.
FL had 3 husbands, the first one was assassinated, the second one disappeared with their child, and the third one didn't have a good relationship with her, she gravely misunderstood him because of lack of communication. All of them, she was sold to by her assh*le of a father.
It's frustrating that the FL won't listen to ML (not really sure if he is), the 3rd husband, whenever he tries to reach out to her. And honestly, I see her as a fool affected by the past because she lets it affect her whenever she encounters them in the present.
However, if I was in her shoes, if I was the one who went through all of that, I will probably do the same. She was greatly hurt by her past that she denies their existence in her new present. Because she's afraid. She doesn't want to be hurt anymore so I get that. I can't empathize but I do sympathize with her.
By the way, I really, really, REALLY hate her father here. I hate him the most of the trashy fathers I've seen so far, and that's saying a LOT. He neglected the FL, abused the wife (her mom), cheated on them, let other people abuse them, clearly showed favorites between his daughters, sold her not just once or twice, but THRICE! Three men!
I really hate this character. Like, how in the world do you sleep at night treating your daughter like some kind of doll to be passed on to different men! He also abandoned her, left her AND her stillborn child, HIS GRANDCHILD, to rot in prison! He didn't help her, he didn't even tell her husband about it because he wanted his other daughter to be the kaiserin and take her place on the throne. How sick can you be!
How much of a trash can you be, he doesn't even deserve to be a father. And the gall! How dare he try to make up for it in her next life! He's despicable, if I were her I would strip him of everything he owns. Torture his favorite kids in front of him and have him watch them die. I'll torture him for months on end and then I'll leave him to die.
That's how much of an evil person he is, enough to make me imagine doing all of than to him.
In any case, this was good in terms of the level of uniqueness of the plot. Other than that I can't say anything good about it. Don't know if I should recommend it or not, but I won't stop reading it because I'm already too far in to back out now.
This story just sucks you know what. The art is basic, the story is too damn long and it's not really appealing.
A lot of things didn't make sense and I tried. I REALLY TRIED! To read this again and see if I was too immature to see the beauty of it. But now, I'm either too immature or that this story really sucks. Eff that, it's the latter for me.
I mean, I tried giving this a chance TWO times now and for what? Wasted time.
Not worth the effort if you guys plan to read this then stop and read something else. Heck, I'm surprised this kind of story reached over 140 chapters while the wholesome ones get cut too short. Just--- UGH. I'm out.
The story is A-Okay. Although there are a lot of things that are confusing and there are lots of things that didn't make sense, there would also be a lot of elements they put in that's a little off topic and would sometimes delve further from the main story.
I would love it if they focus more on the FL's bond with the Duke, with the ML an with the other people around her. That would be more wholesome.
The characters are great and I love the Female Lead! I love how clever she is and she's by far the best child FL I've read in a while.
I love the story, it's just not THAT perfect. I'm hoping for the making of the story to develop. And despite its flaws, I will still read it and finish this till the end.
I REALLY LOVED IT!
I've re-read this several times already and it's still as beautiful as the first time I read it. The art is just muah and the plot, the storyline, is just so WHOLESOME it pulled on my heartstrings so many a time!
The characters are well made and the love story of each couple, it's uncommon but I fell in love with each of them! This is just too good to pass up so I hope that other people could experience what I did reading this hell of a ride! You won't regret it, sweethearts.
It's been a while since I first found this story. I didn't read it in it's first few chapters because I had a feeling it would be much better for me to savor each and every chapter so I saved them until they had over 70 chapters. And boy, it felt like I was hit with overwhelming rush when I finally had the chance to read this.
Dear Author, thank you for this. Thank you for the story, thank you for the experience. Thank you for the journey. I hope to see you again soon as you work on another wonderful story and I will be there with you from the start till the end.
Got bored again. The story's too long and there are too many chapters. I skipped chapters to the 90th one and it was just then that the ML found out the FL had a child but it will be even later for him to find out the child's his.
I got lazy just looking at the chapters. I mean, how on earth did they spend over 80 chapters without giving out the existence of the FL's child? Certainly, it's too boring of a fight without even a little development in their love story. Bye bye then.
I love the story. I also love how the characters were made! It's been a while since I've read something so perfect and not frustrating in the least. It's also funny whenever the siblings bonded, like, that's true for most siblings and very relatable! I love that element in the story.
I really love how they made the villain too so I'mma say some things I feel about her and that I don't agree with this revenge route she chose.
Annette and her past is pitiful alright, I'll give her that. But is it really enough for her to stoop so low as to blame the descendants of the man who betrayed her?
It was her choice to go with the emperor and follow his whims. Blaming and punishing the descendants when they didn't do anything to hurt her is like BLAMING a CHILD for their PARENTS' CRIMES. It's UNFAIR and ILLOGICAL.
It's also curious that the First Emperor from his Aide's diary is heartbroken when he learned that Annette escaped from prison. And it's also curious that he genuinely did love her but just one day he was compelled to wipe the entire population of witches from the world. He didn't even have any qualms against witches in the first place. It's likely that the god they serve actually manipulated him to do that.
If you ask me, I would blame this god of theirs. They're unfair to the witches that were only lucky to be chosen by magic and I would blame the First Emperor for doing the things he did. Annette's actions are understandable for the pain she suffered in the past but that DOES NOT justify what she did ever since she woke up.
She shouldn't take her anger out on completely innocent people and focus on getting revenge on the god instead. She makes it seem like it wasn't her fault when it was her choice that led to their doom.
I'm really, really, REALLY tired of this story at this point. There are a lot of beautiful moments and the plot is nice, and don't even get me started on the art. Sheesh. If only the world is as beautiful as the art in this manhwa.
The only thing I didn't like is that the story is TOO COMPLICATED. The fact that the FL tried to get closer to the ML so that her family won't die even though she hated him, the fact that she's not sure if she likes him or not, the fact that she's the rightful heir to the throne, the fact that Tori's actions are confusing, and also the fact that there exists alchemy but it's not as useful in the story just gives it a lot for a reader to take.
I mean, everything is so complicated that it's frustrating!
Also, her picture perfect family and close best friend just became a thorn on her side. Her father aiming for treason so that his son and his daughter would get married, like how toxic can you be. It's sad that the FL risked her life to protect her family only to have them go on with treason, even though they knew what she went through in her past life.
And also, her best friend blaming the FL for not knowing that her brother is in love with her, you'd hate your best friend just because your crush loves them instead of you?! Be freaking for real!
The FL and ML's positions are also complicated. Neither of them are willing to give up on the throne (for the ML) and her family (FL). Which is why one of them has to die but they can't live without one another anymore.
It's also complicated that the FL is not sure what she feels. The plot of the story, if you really look at it, it's simple. But the author is making it more complicated and it's making it hard for the characters and the readers too.
Geez, luis. My head hurts trying to comprehend everything.Just reading the entire thing frustrates me to the core. I still plan to read and finish this because I've gone too far to back out now.
They left me hanging but the last part was clearly hinting the possiblity of them being pregnant. For real. I was hoping for a baby at the end so I cannot believe they ended it just like that
So the story fell short for me in that part. I also didn't like that it was too short. They didn't even get to announce their relationship to their friends that had a big part in them starting a relationship.
I love the story too much for me to be satisfied with a cliffhanger.
But is that all??? Like, the Seme wasn't honest or he didn't even tell the Uke about the misunderstanding between them the first night they got together. He didn't tell him that he was interested in the Uke's powers at first and that he fell harder later on, like honesty bro. That would've made the story longer and their relationship even stronger.
Also, the powers part is a little out of place here. It's also confusing that the Seme didn't like the Uke at first but he was always giddy like a high schooler whenever the Uke makes a move on him. Like he's the one with the feelings.
Confusing and too short, that's all I could comment on this. In any case, it was a good story.
story's crap. Can't say anything about the art since I don't want to insult someone's hard work but the story is literal crap. A mountain of crap with 37 chapters. It's ongoing still but I don't like the characters so this earns a negative in my ratings.
I mean, who the hell makes a puppy and herbivore like Seme, a cheater!? Those two characteristics don't match as far as I'm concerned. I would've wanted the shitty seme to be a trashy and psychopathic cheater over a dog-like innocent cheater.
Also, it seems to me that the characters here are all f*cked up. No sane person would cheat on his son's boyfriend, and no proper boyfriend would also cheat to get back at his boyfriend. I get that you're hurt but if you do it too just to get back at him, that means you're the same as that trash you call your boyfriend. Give it up, man. You should be better than that.
They didn't even break up then and just kept seeing each other even when they were seeing other people. I mean, give yourselves a break, people! Leave the man and find happiness someplace else, why torture yourselves by getting back at the people who hurt you when you're hurting too! I don't really get this NTR stories. I don't get the fun of it too and I don't care if you hate me for it, bite me!
What disappointed me is not the Seme, but the Uke who did the same thing and the father of the Uke who was completely aware of their relationship but kept going for it anyway.
This story shattered my expectations in fluffy yaois seriously.
There were a lot of loopholes and things that didn't make sense. The weird thing is that I didn't stop reading it like it had some sort of pull on me. It would've been a wholesome work had it been made better. In any case, I feel stupid finishing this lame ass story.
Just something to keep my mind off of things but I spent most of my time skipping the embarrassing things that I don't think I really read it.
It's bad. Really bad. Don't really wanna read any further. Sorry I'm out. I gave it a chance considering it might be an underrated golden story but nah. The ratings speak for itself and it really let me down.
I mean, what's with the uke saying, "I'm not sure if I wanna date you." then the next day he goes "Are you only with me because of sex?"
Aren't you contradicting yourself, sir? You don't mind having sex with someone you're not dating but then you get offended when your partner says you're just friends with benefits? Make it make sense!
Also, what's with the seme saying he'll make the uke fall in love with him and then dump him later. But then the next day he goes, "I keep messing things because of old emotions."
Like, what?! You want revenge on the uke but the minute you get into a lover's spat you regret making him cry? Dude, make up your mind! Do you wanna hurt him or do you wanna console him?
And again, make it make sense!
They're both childish and the flow is just too weird and off for me. I actually thought it had a decent start, just colleagues who used to go to the same elementary school. But no. They had to mess with the plot by inserting the hallucinations of the Seme made of his guilt in their past and his reasoning was just childish. They also made the uke into a naive adult man who keeps assuming things and is often indecisive. I hate that kind of character.
Also, the story has a lot of dramatic scenes that are very, VERY unnecessary. Like with the Seme talking to an imaginary uke who was the epitome of his guilt and anger. Since when did the story turn into a psychological genre? The Uke would also cry so easily, like when the seme said they were just colleagues or like when the Seme confronted him a day later. He just cried, but I thought you didn't wanna date him and you cried just because of that? Give me a break.
Anyways, I'm out. Too bad, it had potential at first and not even halfway in they ruined it.
The story's not even good. It's a waste of time and art. Can't believe I actually read this trash. I won't even wonder why the uke's living like that, I mean I can't be bothered.
HUHHHH????!!!! IS THAT IT?!!!
Don't get me wrong, it has a hella lot of chapters but the end is too, you know, it doesn't feel like the story ended.
sorry it took me a couple of days guys, but I took a little break . I hope this chapter wasn't so bad :D
Absolutely tasteless. The story lacks a certain amount of detail, like they don't explain much about what the FL went through in the last 100 regressions. And also, I felt like I had a stroke reading through everything even with the high quality scanlations.
The story is unstable, the plot is unstable, even he characters are unstable. The FL was not afraid of death but was scared to be killed whenever it happens, like, PICK ONE dear author!
It also doesn't state what rank of nobility the FL has but she's higher in rank compared to the other girl she used to serve?
Painful to read really. The only reason why I want to continue is because I want to feel tortured at the idea of living the same life over and over again.