Like, genuine confusion
This was obviously rushed that there were a lot of things that didn't get resolved at the end. But because some readers have this optimistic guess that everything was somehow resolved at the end and that we should just be happy for them, I plan to just let it go. Hell, I'm too tired to even refute by now!
I'm just so happy with the comical sense of humor this story has that I enjoyed every second of it. Not the serious ones though, they suck in my opinion. I just love the silliness of the characters (the MC) and the author delivered the funny scenes well. I appreciate that at least.
Well, ta-ta. I might come back for the side stories but this is as far as my relationship goes with this story.
I LOVE the UKE! I also LOVE the Seme!
This is one of the rarest times where I love both the main characters in a Mafia/Gang related setting.
The Seme's a green flag and an absolute adorable doggo, whereas the Uke is a tough little pooch who, in my opinion, is the bravest of the two. I kept falling for the Uke myself, especially with his badass way of dealing with his enemies. But I'm also falling for the Seme.
Can you believe the Seme is the first Seme/ML character, after a LONG TIME, that I actually had the urge to take screenshots of?! I mean, there are a lot of Semes/MLs who are beautiful (appearance wise) and charming but seldom are as beautiful in the inside, you get what I mean??
I mean, he's beautiful inside and out!!!! Most of the time I'd hate the character for their trashy and toxic personalities and I'd hate on them more for their handsome faces and sexy bodies, but this one Seme is a gold one.
It's even better when he's paired up with the best Uke ever! I kept whining everytime I see his adorable puppy face and then laugh at how comical he is! I want moreeeeee! Give me moreeeeeeeeeee.
I'mma wait here for the side stories. Whatever this is, I'm here for it!!!
The story is too dry. And it's upsetting. And rhe characters are frustrating as hell!
The art is not bad though, in fact it's the only saving grace of this story. Too bad the story didn't live up to it.
It's crazy! But I loved it! This deserves more chapters
Too much cheating. I didn't like how they keep justifying their sex by using that one guy as an excuse.
All was well in the end but it's basically al about cheating. The four of them are all somehow involved, sexually speaking, and went through a lot of things to end up together. Didn't like the start of their relationships and didn't like the constant cheating.
Yes, it's twisted. Yes, it's incest. And no, it's not good at all. It's basically dark porn. Can't even be bothered to put a star on it. It's dirty.
Thank you for this. Another lovely story on my list! It was so funny and simple which is why I liked it. Not too complex and not too frustrating. Thanks so much for the work!
Honestly, there were a lot of plotholes and unresolved issues. Like with the Seme's family situation, the classmate who was a snitch (like, what happened to that nosy ass sissy?), the part with the scandal between the Uke and that bastard (did they reveal the Uke's face?? I'm anxious about it), and the part where the Seme's brother said he spent an intimate night with the Uke when the couple broke up. Like, did something really happen between them!? Nobody clarified it for me.
Also, the Uke's friend actually contributed a lot with the couple's romance, they should've featured him more at the very least. I also wanted to know more about Anna.
But despite all that, I loved the story. It's quite an uncommon match up and concept, with the Seme as a boomer at that age?? So uncommon. I also don't believe the Uke was a virgin before the Seme came along but who knows, so I wish they clarified that. All in all, I just want to say the story was cut short for me. I wanted more!
The art was beautiful, especially the smex scenes, which I really appreciate . The flow and pacing was too quick for my taste but the storyline was alright.
I hope they have more side stories! I mean, MORE! I WANT MOREEEE
Yeah, I don't like it. I hate it, hate it, hate it, Oh-ohhh
So bad, it hurts
Coz I don't want it. I really, really don't yeah Oh-ohh
I can't find the words so I'll just go
Urrrghhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Sorry, I'mma quit on this one. Lots of complicated and disgusting things. Too much ego. Too much pride. Too much narcissists. It's sad that the Seme is not as strong as I want him to be. You know, someone the Uke could rely on, like someone who has good education, or a good position despite his background at least.
It's not cute either, their story I mean. A story this effed up could only be salvaged by a Seme or an Uke who is equally or stronger than their enemy, materialistically speaking. That's how effed up the principles of their world.
Didn't see how hard it was for those with recessive genes until I read this. Other Omegaverse stories didn't really treat them this bad, I mean, to be called half-breed is too much even in fiction.
I really liked the second couple though. I would've chosen their story over the first one.
The only reason why I gave it 4 stars is because I loved the first story. The second story not so much.
I really wanted more of the first story, too bad they cut it short and gave a spinoff. Didn't really like it too.
The art is good. The storyline and the plot is too cliche so I didn't really like it that much.
I don't like the ML.
Despite his problems he should've been a decent enough person to not use the FL for his tendencies. He should've protected her from his nasty sister, not focus on his problems. He never even noticed how many scars she had when he was basically stripping her bare every night before she ran away. He's also ugly as heck. I mean, not THAT ugly, but his face is not a face for an ML. Probably a side character, not an ML.
I don't like their story. It's alright but I prefer the love story of the physician woman and the ML's bestfriend over this romance.
The FL is beautiful, but naive. Kind, but naive. Lovely, but naive. She's basically a fool but I respect her skills for survival. She was raised by a lovely mother but wasn't taught to protect herself from wolves (i.e. the ML and his sister). It's a miracle her sister opted to protect her. I'd rather she doesn't marry the ML and live with the sister instead but that would be wishful thinking. Being a royal sucks. She had to draw a line to keep people from using her against her sister.
In any case, I skipped some chapters along the way. Didn't like the story but I appreciate the effort. And the art is Mwah! They should make another story but a better one (I bet there's many that are better than this one) and bless me with this art again.
I love the concept. It's unique where the Uke was an omega who turned into a beta and then got pregnant unexpectedly. Pretty unique and interesting.
The art is amazing too. The storyline is not that good but it is uncommon so I wanna add more points to it. The characters are both buff, hot, and sexy... Their smex scenes are so good too!
I want moreeeee. I need moreeeee
Okay, it was hot and the characters are fine as hell! Can't believe his ex gaslighted him into such low self-esteem but everything worked out for the best.
Anyway, I liked it, I want more, and I NEED MOREEEE!
It's unique. It's interesting. And the characters are hot! Not sure about the Uke being sexually groomed as a minor, it's basically a pedo at this point. But he's also a psychopath and a serial killer, I doubt there's anything that could surprise me about him anymore.
They said smut but there's barely any. I know, I'm disgusting but I know what I want.
So it's done. It's finished. Another masterpiece leaving me behind...
I just wanna erase my memories of ever reading this and then read it all over from the start. I'm gonna miss you guys. You just added yourselves to my list of heartbreaks .
It's funny how the Seme keeps believing that the Uke likes him, not the other way around . I mean, he's not wrong, the Uke is so dense with his feelings he had to take years to realize it.
But the Seme is also the same. It's hilarious with him saying, "See? You like me! So date me!" to the Uke. Like, he's either naive or a narc. He could've saved years of suffering had he confessed to the Uke before, but he's too self-centered to think about that.
Anyways, it's too short and the concept is too common for me to think this is good when I could compare it to other works.
Didn't get full points because of the scanlations. That being said I liked the concept. But how dare you end it here. There's a difference between a short story and cutting a story short
Lady Of Yaoi ^_^
26 yr
From Morocco
A straight girl (she/her)