It's bad. Just bad. Too many plotholes. The story doesn't make any sense. And their love story is too unrealistic and ridiculous (in fictional standards), I can't.
The art is decent, which is a bummer because the story couldn't keep up. There's no start and it irked me when people just mistreated the Uke when he's legally bound by a contract to stay there and be a surrogate. The housekeeper keeps giving him the stink eye for asking for food, like, HE'S FREAKING PREGNANT, YOU HAG! He's eating for two people for Pete's sake!
Punks just go in and look at him lecherously when they're aware he's carrying their boss's child, like EW! Get your horny asses out!
Also, what's with the complete 360 personality change of the Seme! We see him having sex in the living room under the same house as the mother to his child, to being the weirdly creepy husband. (He's weird and a creep, y'all. If you stop looking at him with rose tinted eyes you'd see it). He's also a little stupid, in general. Acting like a common thug you'd see as side characters in stories and not something Seme-like.
There's too many plotholes I just can't even keep up. Also, the characters talk too much nonsense and it's weird how much time has already passed with the Uke not showing any baby bumps yet.
Anyways, I couldn't bring myself to finish this. Which is a shame because I'm almost at the last chapter but I just couldn't take it so I'm out. Buhbye.
Okay so, there are a lot of plotholes here. Obviously because it's a short story, everything's so fast they barely resolved the conflicts and left most of them hanging. Thus, the plotholes.
Anyways, it's a good concept and the art is good, mostly in the sensual way which fits the yaoi and smut genre. I want more though. It could've been better if they made it longer and reduce the pacing.
It's fun, it's engaging, and the art is marvelous!
I want to read more! Why did I have to read this story this early!!?
Anyway, I'm actually aiming for the Demon Lord here instead of the MC. Hear me out, he's probably 30 years older than me but, look at him! He's too hot to not simp on! Also, he kept tempting me with his boob and abs window, it's basically a door now.
Anyways, I'm letting this marinate for a while. Imma look forward to binge reading it someday. Impress me over and over please!!!
Another Manga that got me invested after watching the Anime. When I finished the second season of the Anime, I was so smug about the fact that I could spoil myself and read past that. The feeling is SO EXHILARATING! I love it!!!!
Anyway, it's fun, it's engaging, and I cannot believe I got invested in a story set in VR games. I totally love the art. The action scenes were fun. And the comedy bits were hilarious! It's actually great that the story didn't just focus on the SLF game. They showcased the other VR games the MC plays as well, which is fun and exciting to read.
I want more! Do give me more! I love reading every bit of this and I'm starving for more! Another masterpiece in my list!
It's good and the art is just as good as the story. It's just.... TOO LONG .
I got bored waiting for things to happen. There's not much that happened that are significant to the plotline. Like, they're not even showing much of their training against this evil spirit. Nor is there any progress on preparing against it. I think they're just waiting it out. There's a lot of plotholes here.
Like, them letting the og FL give up on her dream to be a doctor so she could succeed the throne. Even the villains are unnecessary here. I think the result deviated a lot from the initial plans of the storyline and I'm just so sad for that.
Anyway, I got bored and I don't really have the interest to finish this. See ya.
It's beautiful. The art is amazing and the story is interesting. Their love story is almost twisted but the ML made up for the most of it. I loved it.
It's just... It's not ISEKAI .
The setting is good, historical, political, economical, and relatable! It's just not Isekai and Fantasy.
It's good as it is but I'm a sucker for Isekai and Fantasy so I got bored for some parts. I barely read anything relating to business and politics so it's sad that I couldn't resonate with this story as much as I do for the magic influenced stories. So sad.
I'mma stop for a while. It's gonna be hard to tell when I'll return to finish this story but I do hope I will, for curiosity's sake. I at least wanna see how it ends.
This was a beautiful story with a powerful message. Granted it is not a masterpiece, but would you look at the plot!? It's so perfect and beautiful that I just wanted to be in it!
Reading this made me remember that no amount of hate and no amount of revenge is worth your happiness. They're not worth your suffering! Like the FL said, she will never forget, as these experiences made her stronger, but she will always forgive.
Gosh, she's too beautiful for her own sake!
The art may not be up to the standards of the modern world, but the story is worth it. It's so wholesome and beautiful I teared up so many times.
I stand by the idea of exacting revenge on the people who hurt me by giving back 10 times the pain they caused me, but I stand by the FL here. That a day is too peaceful and beautiful to spend it all on hating someone. Give yourself some peace. Some quiet.
Their crimes will get them one way or another, like they did in the story. The FL barely lifted a finger. She just... lived. The kindness of her heart outshined the darkness of these villains and they got consumed by it. She's too pure for this world .
Anyways, I love the story. I love the art. The character designs and their back stories are just muah . I love the pacing. It's good that they didn't involve the children's love stories much. I'm not as interested in the love lives compared to the parents and the writer here knows that.
Also, I want the king! I know I'd hate the throne and the responsibilities of a royal but for him?! Yes, sire!
I fell for him the second his personality turned °360. I was like, "Who are you!?" and "What happened to you!?". He and Ingrid were never meant to be. She wants to be free and being a Queen is anything but. He just wants someone to love and be loved. Being on that seat really sucks.
Anyway, I'll go back to daydreaming that I'll end up with the King in my own fantasy. So buhbye.
I've read this when I was in 12th grade and now I just graduated college but this story has yet to end.
The art didn't get better which is a disappointment. It's somehow awkward to read everything in the narrator's point of view. And the love story between Ein and Karina makes me wanna pull my hair. The answer is simple! Just get married! Ugh!
You'd think their parents got married because they liked each other?
They don't even have any other love interests and it's SO OBVIOUS that they like each other. I've had it up to here!
Anyway, it's weird with the age gap between the siblings. Risa is as old as the son of the emperor who is as old as Ein, that goes to show that Ein is past his marriageable age. I love how his parents don't pressure him with marriage but if I were his mother I'd smack him in thee head and tell him he should be more honest with his feelings. He obviously likes Karina and she obviously likes him too. Arrghhhh.
It was good until they changed the pace. I thought it was about family but they skimped out on them spending time with their daughter.
I. Did. Not. Like. Reading Karzel's love life. What the hell were they thinking skipping their teen years with their parents! I wanted to see the family bonding, not see my grandbaby getting married! I wasn't prepared! Also, why at 18/19 years?! You could've at least waited until they turned 20, you know! The FL and ML don't look like they aged at all and their daughter is still 12 years old so what's the rush!
Never thought that I hated the ending until I actually wrote it down. It was so good too, despite the plotholes, it was a rood read.... Until you ruined it by marrying my grandbabies THAT young. I am so disappointed.
It definitely had good potential at first! What happened after 50 chapters??? Everything was just... Lost.
This is so disappointing. I would've understood if it was a fast paced story in the first place and just a short story, but they added a lot of elements that was significant at first but judging by the ending it's not even important.
They should've just focused on the politics and the romance if they were aiming for a short story. But NO. They had to insert the dragon and magic and all of that crap that they panicked when it was too long and had to end that arc in just two chapters!
They slaughtered a perfectly functioning story and it's so disappointing.
HAHHHH???!!!!! WHAT THE HELL WAS UP WITH THE ENDING!
It was rushed. Why did you break my heart like this!
Her family is already ruined from the start. If their family's happiness is sustained from the demise of several people, not to mention the murder of their own flesh and blood, then it's already ruined beyond repair.
Even if they succeeded to keep everything under wraps, they'll just involve innocent people, like Ina when she could've just lived a normal life but now she's damaged as well from her parents' crimes.
Their love story takes excruciatingly long to bloom. it's over a hundred chapters and they have yet to be together.
I was under the impression that shoujo stories contain less that 100 chapters so I thought by the 80th one they are already together. But since the story is centered in war and politics, it's gone this long and neither their romance nor their victory has yet to bloom.
I've been reading this for years now, okay. YEARS. I thought it would be done by now. So, if you're not a fan of slow burn love stories, this isn't for you.
Looks like it's gonna take another year for me to marinate this story to continue reading it.
The art needs more fixing, there are almost no facial expressions at all so I hope the artist will improve on that in future works.
But other than that, the character designs are fabulous. And the story is just muah . I love how the desserts are made and I had to literally wipe the drool from my mouth.
The story is good but I feel like it's been rushed so I can't process it yet, but it's good beyond that.
But the thing I hate most is that FL has to leave her freedom behind for the sake of being with her man.
I really, REALLY hate the throne, and the idea of being in one. I'm on teams Duke, Marquis, Count, or even Viscount and Baron. Any of them but a King or an Emperor!
If I ever get in the shoes of every FL character in the same genre, I would say "Eff off to the Royal family" and run to the other side of the world. It just feels so troublesome to be in the royal/imperial family. Too much responsibility and too many things to worry about. Like, I want my freedom, man!
It's sad that FL turned on her dream to be with her man but I understand that. The ML is worthy of her and he's a precious little thing so I suppose it's all good.
Let's start from the beginning (so I could gather my thoughts too, I'm a bit confused myself):
The Moon Goddess
- is the god of death.
- so the Sun God, who is scared of death, killed her. He didn't know that she is incapable of dying as she is death itself. So she reincarnated.
Erzebet
- the witch.
- She's the Moon Goddess's reincarnation which is why she's titled a Witch and is stronger than any other entity.
- The Sun God found her too early and declared she's to destroy the world, then ultimately, SHE DIED.
- Sun God brought her to him and made her into his servant, AKA, The System.
System
- the one who handles the world/system under the Sun God.
- She lost all her emotions and humanity in exchange for helping Lee Seojun who was "going to die" (which IMO, there was no need to) if she won't do anything about in---enter the servant contract with the Sun God.
- Bound to the Sun God and without anything in return. In other words, the piece of shite scammed her.
- As she learned not to fully trust anyone, she split her soul to help Lee Seojun in her place, AKA, the Erzebet Double.
- she was curious about Seojun so she went down to earth as Yoo Eunhye to spend time with him. She fell in love with him and decided to split her soul, AGAIN, to stay with him on earth. AKA, Yoo Eunhye.
Erzebet Double (Split soul)
- She is the one in contact with the present world. In other words, she is the one we see in the current timeline.
- The first Erzebet already died in the other world so this one is a duplicate.
- She's the master of the current adorable baby Seol-ah.
Yoo Eunhye
- mother of Seol-ah.
- The System, once again, divided her soul and erased all of that soul's memories, making her believe she was originally born on Earth.
- Her soul was part of a divine being, Moon Goddess, so she's mostly the reason why Seol-ah is stronger than any creature on Earth, and (a painful fact), the reason why Seol-ah is born a Witch.
I. Hate. You.
You made me go through a rollercoaster of emotions and made me scroll through the entire thing that I didn't bother doing anything else .
Why is this so lovely! Ughh!!! You better give me the next chapter soon, I'll die without my Seol-ah therapy
Wait. Is that all??
Lame! So lame! How could you play with my heart like that! Ugh!
Please give me some side stories!! I cannot accept you ending it like that! And with all the teasing you gave us in their smut scenes!
Re-read this and still loved it the same.
They said they complete each other. Well, these two idiots complete me. They're so hilarious and adorable I felt lonely even though I'm not single.