This is the type of wholesome story that people who dislike good plot development love I guess? It was a cute story to read when there’s nothing else to read but it’s boring. This is when you write a trope and not a plot. The trope is omegaverse. Therese sex and a baby. That’s it. There was no room for development or improvement because the characters immediately talked things out. This is why most author don’t use communication when writing stories. Because they’re boring like this and it doesn’t give room for any kind of plot development. Definitely the type of story most moralists would enjoy though since there’s nothing to marinate and talk about.
I did feel like they did mess up with the pacing and fleshing out some parts but it was a cute story in the end still. I wish the author spend more time putting obstacles between their bond for it to seem like their relationship was that much more put together and real. But of well, I feel like it's hard to expect really good stories sometimes
Lord help me. I cannot wait a week for this story. I know Narim promised that Mokyeon wouldn’t sleep with Sunhwa again, but having Mok ask Sunhwa to spend the night with him almost gave me a heart attack. If it wasn’t because Narim is trying to make us hate Sunhwa less, they would have slept together again! The plot saved us. But then again they’re gonna have a threesome again. How is that not Mok sleeping with Sunhwa again? Unless this time Nanjo and Sunhwa start with the sex, so Mokyeon can prove to Nanjo that Sunhwa has been manipulating him into having rough sex and then Mok can’t take it anymore and shit hits the fan by either Mok trying to take Nanjo bc he can’t stand seeing him having sex with someone else or by storming out of the room.
Idk maaaaan I’m desperate. I need Nanjo’s pov too. I guess will have to wait for season two for that
I just hope the cliffhanger from season 1 to 2 its not to long nor too much. I dream of having a clean cut end of season and then season 2 its just the same but nanjo pov. I guess thats my delulu
This is one of those moments I love the Spanish fandom so much. We all rooting and loving Mokyeon while the English fandom is always trashing on the tops for whatever reason. Is Mokyeon a saint? Of course not. Is Nanjo a saint? Of course not. Let’s not talk about the twink. Full trash.
There are only three chapters left for the end of season one. So I’m guessing we’re either getting Nanjo’s pov or Mokyeon lose it and sleeping around after giving up on Nanjo.
He loves him. That’s why he broke things off with him. Because he doesn’t want to give into his sadistic tendencies with him. Nanjo is not just a hole for him. He’s in love with him.
dude if relatively yall think that nanjo is not more innocent in this whole debacle then the spanish fandom has reading comprehension problems lmfao, even the majority of the korean fandom is more on nanjo’s side
ikr they want tops to be neat n hook perfect. Ppl can be imperfect and still good. What is up w these ppl calling everyone trash for very human things and totally disregarding some actual ahole tops cuz they're hotter and more popular. Such hypocrisy
Are you well? Nobody said Nanjo isn’t less innocent. Y’all always jump to defend bottoms JUST BECAUSE THEYRE THE ONES GETTING PENETRATED. That’s not how it works. Nanjo got the short end of the stick alright. But he ultimately made the decision to accept the contract himself. Instead of talking things out with Sunhwa to put an end to Sunhwa’s masochistic tendencies, he decided to meddle in his affairs and have sex with Mokyeon to keep Mokyeon away from Sunhwa. Not to mention that we don’t know Nanjo’s pov and ultimately the theory that Nanjo has planned all of this because he liked Mokyeon from the beginning is strong. The author confirmed that this is a story about an exclusive monogamous relationship between Mokyeon and Nanjo. Sunhwa is the stepping stone. I think your traumas don’t let you have a critical rational opinion on the actual plot. I say you’re the ones with reading comprehension and extremely emotional. Now gtfo of my replies and go join an ONG if you want to be an activist or something.
It’s a projection of their own traumas. Since they have no control over their real lives, they think being the moral police/moral heroes on fictional stories will save them. It’s a complex. They feel better thinking that they’re doing the right thing when in reality they’re hopeless.
Lmao girl calm down you wanna defend the dick user go ahead no one’s stopping you
So you only defend pussy users but read manhwas about two dick users non stop? Makes so much sense. A misandrist shouldn’t even be here in the first place lol
Ok dick user defender
For real. Hating men while reading BL speaks “self insert!!!” These percentage of women read BL to self insert in the bottom’s place. That’s why they take the stories so seriously lol
Ikr. They freak me out sm
Family? My brother in Christ, you came to the conclusion that you both are family? This poor dude never had a proper demonstration of what a real relationship between two lovers or family is like. He has a distorted twisted view of life. He was doomed to be a masochist because what he needed was therapy. Readers didn’t even need to romanticize this. The bottom did it himself. I’m used to reading twisted stories and they tend to be my favorites. But in those twisted stories the bottoms are always aware that they’re as fucked yo as the tops. This dude went and said “I know this is wrong but we’re family so it’s okay” whaaaat? Stupid fucakss bottoms like this that act all sweet and lovable in a red flag twisted relationship piss me off so bad brooooo
This story should have been uploaded on the other website so people could comment free of the moralist spreading their agenda in EVERY SINGLE chapter.
It’s funny how they say “I’m not easily shocked, I’ve read some fucked up things”
You haven’t. If you think this is horrifying, you need to spend a day on the other website or just stick to your vanilla wholesome shit.
End of the announcement.
lmao right!!!! i wish they would stop so that I could masturbate to my rape porn in peace :///// ughhhh I cant even get wet while seeing the moral police in the comment section all the time </3 can yall stop it? its heartbreaking...
Ermmm ur a weirdo
babe that was sarcasm </3 unless you're on op's side
Oh ok I was like erm what
Y’all are so easy to piss off. Not you all blocking me after looking for a fight. Y’all don’t last a day in real life lmaooooo
Lmaoo frr
saying we wont last a day irl when ur the weirdo here none of yall would even dare to say half of the shit u say on here irl... this is not tuff gng
Keep going you all!! I’m almost there. Yea. Right there!!! Hmnnnnn
Lmaooooo
naurrrrr everybody block ur noses quick
*opens mouth*
HELP?????
Gimme some of that too daddy
You're so fucking crazy, I think I love you. Lol
Mokyeon hold it broooo I got you, from right here. I know Nanjo loves you and he realized that you treat him differently to how you treat Sunhwa. I know Nanjo realized you cooked seafood just for him. I’m gonna cry the twink is finally fading away bc Nanjo ditched him on his birthday. I think Nanjo is using the contract as an excuse to keep them separated. Nobody is gonna convince me otherwise. Nanjo likes Mokyeon. But he never thought he could become Mokyeon’s type so he has to go through all the trouble of pretending to be in love with Sunhwa in order to keep Mokyeon’s attention on him. That’s why he brought up the contract. “If you don’t fulfill the contract and stay away from Sunhwa, I’m not going to sleep with you anymore” bc Nanjo probably thought that Mok was obsessed with Sunhwa. Aaaaaah my babieeeees please marry soon. But after a hundred chapters of making love please and thank you
You..... Damn you're on to something... It actually makes more sense.
But what Nanjo already had his eye on mokyeon and used the twin as stepping stone to get closer to him.... Cause if we're being honest he only shows that he's interested in the twink in front of Mok.
Man I hope this is what it is . .....
I forgot… what was their contract again?
You..... Damn you're on to something... It actually makes more sense.
But what if
Nanjo already had his eye on mokyeon and used the twink as stepping stone to get closer to him.... Cause if we're being honest he only shows that he's interested in the twink in front of Mok.
Man I hope this is what it is . .....
That Nanjo will keep sleeping with him if he stays away from the twink and not touch him
People are so dumb istg. They had a ton shit of trigger warnings and here they are. All the wimps crying about it. About how this is fetishizing, about wanting the top to grow back and how the bottom is shitty. These people will fight anything just for the sake of being confrontational. Don’t y’all get tired. You’re not gonna change the world complaining on an illegal site about these topics. Go outside, touch some grass and join an ong or something.
BL manwha will never change bc it’s KOREAN and Koreans love and live for good looks. That’s what sells. That’s the main selling point in the industry. Creators and authors have said this themselves. They’re never looking to be insightful or deep serious about matters of the world with BOYS LOVE bc BL is a fetish for straight people. The fact that some of us queer people read it doesn’t mean the at have to cater to our need for representation. If you need representation of real life go and protest or something. BL, yaoi, is about entertainment not advocating. Now get your heads out of your asses and let people have something. Smh.
I agree
Right, theres ppl gonna be that. I saw someone said fatphobia likeee??? stfu
I'm with you. In fact, an act that fits with their beliefs would be not to watch this type of content, not to complain.
And ended up being a trashy Stockholm Syndrome case. Not even a properly developed one at that. A mushy mess in between “you’re my pray and you’re everything to me.” It was so badly written it feels cringe. I love dark stories and red/black flag characters. Both uke and seme. But in this case it’s almost like they tried to give feelings unsuitable for the boss’ character. Idk. This story rubs me the wrong way bc I feel they killed a proper dark trope with bad writing and development. Like Sagold tried to do it killing stalking style but the bar was too high. Absolute disaster
Nanjo likes Mokyeon. But he’s not used to follow his desires. Since he’s a chaebol and all. He has to maintain certain perfect image. That’s why he pushed away Mokyeon when Sunhwa opened the door. Because he doesn’t want him to see his flaws. But he feels more himself, more comfortable with his desires, with Mokyeon. He’s been more faithful to Mokyeon than he’s ever been to Sunhwa.
Maybe he hasn’t been planning to snatch Mok from the beginning, but what I thought was true. He actually likes and feels more attracted to Mok. Sunhwa was just the door to his true sexuality. And since Sunhwa plays the innocent little girl, he felt Sunhwa wasn’t gonna demand too much from him, emotionally and sexually speaking. That’s why he’s in denial regarding Sunhwa’s true personality. Because that means that he has to accept that he was wrong and that the one he actually desires is Mokyeon.
I don’t even know what’s gonna happen for the next and final chapter of season one. I’m guessing Mok will actually penetrate him. Since Mok realized Nanjo has been more faithful to him than Sunhwa and he also responded the kiss so willingly even while Sunhwa was in the next room. Mokyeon now knows Nanjo also desires him. There’s no way he’s gonna back off now.
I can’t wait for Nanjo’s pov and too se how Sunhwa will exit this relationship once he finds out Mok and Nanjo like and desire each other!
I agree with everything you said but I really wish Mok don't penetrate him there. it kinda makes it seems like nanjo is being used or being treated poorly against his will. if you understand what I'm saying. but that's just my opinion I rather see him walk out and leave them there letting nanjo coming to his own realization that he actually like mok
i also find it interesting how nanjo started to replicate mok's mannerisms when it comes to the intimate stuff— even when he kissed him during their shower thing, he was doing it the same way mok kissed him in the earlier chapters. same with the kiss in this chapter, holding his head. also, his ears go red when he's with mok, never with the twink, it's kind of a cute vulnerability/ honest reaction. i'm not too sure if he also was doing it with the twink the same way mok was doing it with him, from behind, but i'm kinda sure that in the earlier chaps he preferred doing missionary with the twink. anyway, i agree with your interpretation!!
No I get it. Honestly both options are fine with me. But Mokyeon realized that Nanjo is indecisive because of his chaebol position and superiorty complex. People like Nanjo don’t communicate because they have an image to maintain. They don’t act in their desires or likes. That’s why Nanjo said “does my wellbeing matters?” Because he’s not the type of person who puts his needs first. Which means that if Mokyeon leave the decision to Nanjo, nothing will ever change. People like Nanjo need a shock factor to either change their minds or make a decision that benefits only them. Mokyeon realized this after the kiss. He knows now that if he doesn’t bring out Nanjo’s true nature by force, Nanjo will never admit he likes and wants him instead of Sunhwa.
It’s because he feels comfortable with Mokyeon to let out his true nature and desires. But he’s also probably in a dilemma. Because he has a negative opinion of Mokyeon “he’s crude, rude and sadistic. If I accept him, does that mean I’m also like him. Then what about the image I’ve so carefully created my whole life? What would people think of me?” Since he’s a chaebol, he cannot act on impulses. He has to mind what people think of him and present himself as perfect. I think that’s where Nanjo’s reluctance towards Mokyeon lies. Because we know now that he does like him. But he’s also probably has to change in order to accept this side of him. And we also know now that Nanjo doesn’t have sex with Sunhwa unless Mokyeon is there. Which means both Mokyeon and Nanjo have to image each other in order to get it up when they’re with Sunhwa lol