
Whyyyy did he have a six pack the chaoter after we were told he was out of shape???? It's so irritating. I know it's not a big deal but it just feels so unnecessary. He's training now ro be buff anyway, why couldn't he just be drawn normally before then, so you can see the difference properly?
I'm just kinda bummed about almost every Korean artist having six-pack disease, where every male character gets a six pack whether it makes sense or not

I just don't feel the love at all. I want him and Jun to work things out, but there's no affection to found anywhere. Their good times are only alluded to. They never look happy together. It's so depressing.
It's not like I expect them to be a super lovey-dovey cringy couple that's constantly all over each other. But the author doesn't even show a shred of affection. When Jun says "I love you" I literally don't believe it.

This "keeping things within the bloodline" bullshit is gonna kill Kabuki. If they're not willing to bet on outsiders and people who truly choose it instead of being born into it, it's all gonna crumble eventually.
Fr, just adopt people if you still need to keep families going. Their archaic rules are their own worst enemy.

That's easy for you to say, but it is thing that is followed for generations in kabuki. Obviously they gotta change according to the current times, but sadly there are still many places in the world that don't accept adoption, surrogacy and homosexuality and even consider them as taboo. I definitely think the main issue isn't silly.

I don't like how casually they chat about slavery. Like, how dare those slaves try to escape, naturally they'll get executed! And her reaction to it is so weak. She's from modern times, she should feel more revulsion

That's what bothers me with a lot of Isekai stories. Transmigrated MCs will take over the body of someone, then be so enmeshed with their new world's moral/cultural standards and have zero tensions with their original world's bred conscience. The way I almost forgot she technically isn't Penelope until I read your comment xd

Yeah, I began reading it again from the beginning, and she just takes this whole slavery thing so much in stride, like who cares? I mean, it's natural that she cares more about herself not dying, and I'm not asking her to change the whole system by herself, but she should at least feel some kinf of pity? ask if there's a way for them to not die?

To be fair tho- this whole game system is trying to kill her just for existing. Her main priority and the only thing ever is in her mind to reach 100% and survive. I think she is pretty preoccupied. Maybe once she is safe she can think of it. Like she is human too, when in such stressed situations everyone would have similar experiences. But yeah it would've been nice if they would've at least shown some concern from her side.

Yooo, those 2 newest chapters were comprehensible! Can't give better praise than that, but I'm thankful to whoever did it

if "comprehensible" is all you can say for a hard and unpaid work and absolutely free of charge for readers like yourself, maybe you can read the next chapter (322) RAWS better. Nothing beats originality after all.
And btw dissing the previous translator for doing a crappy job will only get you zero chapters. After so many negative feedback by the readers they've stopped doing them anymore. Perhaps it's just a matter of time for this translator to call it quits too even though they are not regular with their work.

Hard work =/= good work
But I do think that my comment was overshadowed by my disappointment with previous chapters. It's actually way better now. It's good. Not great, but more than serviceable.
You're not going to guilt me into being nice, I usually adhere to "if you can't say anything nice, say nothing at all"
And I made my comment because like I said: it's an improvement!
"Dissing the previous translator for doing a crappy job will get you 0 Chapters" oh no, woe is me
I don't care, I didn't want or need them like that.
Also I didn't diss them. Maybe others did idk, but I'm not about to lie about the quality
Shizuma is fine! Comment section was freaking out, but he is aware of all his faults and striving to do better. I have no complaints
Right? It’s like people want him to lock himself up in a cage and serve Minato
Fr like I don't know what they want him to do he's human bro
And he's just a nice guy like why is everyone acting like he's an awful boyfriend. He's treating people like a human would. He was talking normay and communicating like a normal person would like what do you want him to act like a piece of shit to everyone except Minato
People who are hating on him and calling him an awful boyfriend should fr stay single yall are way too jealous
Fr it's so annoying he's the perfect boyfriend idk what everyone's yapping about. Just cause Minato has issues doesn't mean shizuma is a bad boyfriend he legit tried to lessen his issues and reassure him. But he can't just not talk to people like what do people want.
Minato needs therapy (saying this as someone who loves them both equally)
The boundaries is the problem... that's it.
The comments is making me wish thid story was over. Good thing this is illegal site cause I feel like some of these commentators will send long rants or unpleasant messages to the author, with how some of them are going on. It already happened a bunch of times. I guess some emotional reactions are do to personal experience.