What did creed do to ryan I can't keep my eyes open anymore but I want to understand
Unfortunately even after reading it a million times I also don’t understand it fully but my best guess it had something to do with non-con since rape was mentioned (I might be wrongggg)
From what I understood, though it wasn't necessarily non consensual, Creed used Ryan to replicate rape and within that scene did exactly that whilst not caring about how Ryan felt at all and making sure he was still comfortable amd having despite the scene he wanted to portray. So in the end, for Ryan, he just got raped, hence why he said those things about Creed being no better than a rapist.
Damn, that hit deep
Why does it feel like the ml has a twin
Fr it's like I can't tell if he's just fucking around or its deadass 2 separate people
So it's just going to end up like any other toxic yaoi? Love triangle... crazy ml... very kind mc.. crazy 2nd ml.. man that raised him lol I'm so tired
Don't read then . We r enjoying it
Well I'm enjoying it too (mainly for the art).. js wondering if it's going to be the same ol' plain storyline lol
The art is good. But even the idea of toxic ml good ml is repeated the plot is different. And there is a lot of things to unfold too
I just got turned off from the 5th chapter on, I didn't think it'd be complete extortion and misery. I usually don't care if something is toxic because I can get over those parts, but she completely abused and endoctrinated him, I couldn't even ignore it. The smut was ok if you were able to ignore the rape, how miserable the guy was and how disturbing she was. The story had some potential, there are some great religious sexual stories. Had it only been that then it would've been okay..
They had to make her a straight up abuser, tormenting that poor ML... I can't even continue to read I'm scared for him
I just can't like the MC, I hate whenever an author makes the MC immature and very naive. Even kids are not like that anymore, i know that i can't expect something realistic from a story like this but it would've been soo good! The ML is written decently, he isn't an asshole, he has his beliefs, I really hate when readers don't try to see every point of view and can't understand that the MC is not just bubbly and naive, he's not well written AT ALL lol
yup agreed!! but i also don't think him and ml go well together at all. i don't hate either but they lowkey dont have good chemistry to me
Yes exactly you get it!!
honestly, part of it might be what you refered i.e the mc being written so childishly and naively because he's sincerely just waiting to get taken advantage of
It's the fact that the author doesn't even try to make him even barely conscious of what is happening. He's not a kid, it's just so unrealistic I hate it
ML seems to be going down to be an hypocrite tho, and he could've rejected the "naive" MC's advances tho. So no, he is not good, the story is being forcefully driven. Nothing here screams "let's be reasonable adults" from A to the Z
call me a bad person but i get him, guy is cute and he's having fun
Ok that explains, thx for the honesty
WHY WOULD THE AUTHOR ADD THAT AHWHGRHRHE OH he HAD to punish the last one obviously
Y'all. Y'all. If only it was just centered on them in highschool, i love the contrast between their lives and personalities so much, i love love love them soo much. I really hope everything gets solved in the current timeframe
We all know the nature of their relationship, I genuinely don't believe the author intends this to be purely smut and toxicity, as shown in the previous chapters. The story is solid and they are obviously well written characters. I genuinely believe they'll talk it out and it's gonna be something that gets highlighted. He did go over the board, but a healthy discussion would solve this in any normal and healthy relationship. I genuinely believe the ML is a good character and I don't think the author would add this non consensual scene just to.