I imagine the little dragon with a strong Boston accent haha. Not sure whether a comically deep voice or a squeaky voice fits it better though
TIAAAAAA!!!! TIAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN! I love smart protags omg
I think the sorceress lied just now. We know that Sylhan's memory is getting better and we know that Gjord has something to do with the previous sorcerer getting sick. For whatever reason, Lysbet doesn't want Sylvan to recover his memories, whether it's because she cares for him or she gets something out of it, I have no idea. She did let Sylhan choose the medication, which makes me think that she does sincerely want him to be healthy, just not capable of taking back his place.
Anyway off topic, but I reaaallly appreciate Gjord and how he's written. I feel like 99% of other yaoi writers would have made him abusive already, what with being strong royal who had slept with Sylhan before.
Ripped to the depressed bisexual, really going through it
I have to say that the best ones are the ones where the villainess is actually villainous. And I don't mean that dumbass "by revealing the cruel truth about these abusive pieces of shit, I'm actually being evil because I'm doing it for my own sake".
If all the people around you are actually cruel and unkind to you, the new cute girl especially likes to bully you for no reason and you've never done anything wrong, then sorry, you're not a villainess and don't belong in this anthology, because you're obviously a heroine.
I don't mind if the "heroine" is actually evil or whatever, but you can't just have this villainess be the nicest dish rag under the sun, with beauty befitting a heroine and act like she's actually in any way villainous. Sorry, no, being studious is actually a classic heroine trait, you're not suddenly evil because you study to be a good queen.
Art team is treating this like a collection of screen caps instead of like a comic :(((. Like I'm so glad your color grading and composition is breathtaking, but what about the pacing of panels, dialogue and chapters bro.
The number of panels this chapter: 57
The plot of this chapter: Characters walk into a room, greet each other, one leaves, gets dressed, they reunite and walk to a party.
I'd actually prefer if we got less shots of mc's sad face and more of the plot moving along. Like I know it sounds like nitpicking, but I'm only saying this because most of the chapters have been like this.
WHAAAAAAT!!! I was kind of on board, because I thought this was where the real story about how difficult it is to be the empress of this dickhead in his dickhead palace starts. You mean to tell me this is almost over??? This entire thing felt like a prologue! I thought all that manipulative asshole shit happened, so that we'd have space for development in their marriage and not that it's just how their story goes. That's sucks, not because the story is bad now or whatever, I still like it, not because it could've been so much better.
Don't write a story about a protagonist reborn into the story of Cinderella, if you're just going to make up a new Cinderella . This literally didn't have to be about Cinderella, or the protag could have actually dealt with the implications of possessing the body of someone abusive. If you're going to change all the good characters into stupid and sloppy characters, and all the evil characters into secretly wise and virtuous characters, then you're not writing about Cinderellaaaaaaaaa. Brb going to rewrite Shrek, so Lord Farquaad is a misunderstood king who loves his people wholeheartedly, but this evil jackass ogre and other cruel freaks keep trying to ruin his kingdom.
That??? That did not look like a dog eating two women to me????? It looked like a dog doing something entirely different to two women????? I honestly am dumbfounded about whether I just didn't interpret the drawings correctly or if they'd really go in that direction..