This plot is just hateful, the ML is Hella trash, wanting to trap her with a baby, treating her like a slut while he just ignored her for 8 years. Like wtf??? What was the author thinking when they created this characters.
Right, I not enjoying reading them
The bro is coming out like it's nothing, like it's just coming out of a door lmao. I would never.
WAIT WHAT WDYM ??? SHE WAS THE REAL JUDITH FROM THE START ???? AND SHE WAS THE ONE HURTING OUR BABY LUCA??? NO WAY NO FREAKING
I wanted them to kiss not having all life flashback:((
Y'all are horny istg, you keep talking about their boobies lmaooo
(But yeah y'all are right lmao)
Idk about you but I completely understand the OG sera, she looks like she is at her emotional limit.
Firstly it's not easy to see something you put so much effort in it and what was "destined to be yours" taken away . Secondly, the environment she grow up in doesn't look that healthy, growing up with the weight of critics, the apparence and reputation matters more than your own feelings, ect... Thirdly in this chap (19), you can see that she's tired and lifeless, the only shown emotion in her is anger which is triggered by not wanting to let others stepping on her (criticising her or mistreating her),yk trying to preserve the last dignity that you have in u . Her violence outbreaks are definitely a defense mechanism. And every action she makes to defend herself is usually turned against her, which create a spiral (like when she stands up against the OG FL, who is clearly manipulative, and no one believing her and saying that she's in the wrong when
she's clearly not just because she has a bad reputation).
Bad reputation -> Mistake/ mistreatment ->Anger (defending herself) -> violence outbreak (defense mechanism) -> bad reputation
Yeah sure it doesn't justify the violence that she showed towards innocent (like "her brother", or staff making small mistakes).
Plus imagine thinking that you can find comfort from someone and getting attached to him, and that person only care about apparence and neither your feeling or the fact that you're right. Must be an awful life NGL
Luca is such a cutie (⌒▽⌒) and our fl is kinda dumb with no survival instinct lol
Girl hasn't got much to work with come on, trying to buy time for someone to come get her and once she realises she doesn't have enough time to wait, she starts her plan to escape.
It's not about that it's about the fact she was talking loudly when Luca came to help her, that's a dumb move you see
This boy is so brainless gngngngn "how dare you zip my jacket" bro if the ml I would have beated the shit out of you you see ??
Whut what ???? Wdym Dietrich has died ??? The hell ???? No no no please???? Why? How? I'm going to cry
Okay, let's have a honest feedback. Was it good? Not specially. Was the plot good? It did have some potential. Was I into it ? No. Was the smut good? Neither, but I maybe subjective cz I'm starting to hate all smut. Was it some crazy art? No. So what's so good about this one? Another time, nothing special.
Honestly, most of the time I felt that the story was so shallow, the art make it look like some marionette moving ( the artist must be using 3D models but can't seem to make the moves more natural or blend them with the background). There's some potential like a curse, only the hero can cure it blablabla. But their relationship looks so superficial, like don't get me wrong but the only things we got form the FL or the ml are either smut, kisses, or possessiveness.
When the fl was exposed the way the things settled was meh.
Well overall. It was bad. But there's worse so let's be grateful to not have waste more time in it.
Can't agree more lmao
All of this, though I got a certain “guilty pleasure” initially from the cliche of everyone loving MC immediately for little to no reason. That wore off fairly quickly though and I was left only mildly interested in where the plot was going.
Heavily agree but also I still had a fun time reading it so I’m not mad it’s ending
I agree on this story but maybe u should take a break on reading smut then no point if it’s gonna annoy u yk
That's what I'm trying to do, I skip all the smut when I'm reading something for the plot or I just don't read it all together lol
I'm not mad either, like I said it's bad but not the worst. Not the hateful bad ( the trash bad). Like it doesn't normalise things it shouldn't not, it just feels shallow and the art doesn't help that much.