100 rejected confessions later-…. “ I truly loved her “ DUDE WTF!
I love reading about her journey in moving on but every time we are in his POV I get so angry!!
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They spent SO, SO LONG together!! And it’s only now, NOW! That he realizes!! This is why you can’t have spouse privileges without an actual marriage! I’m glad he knows to be regretful but I also hope he feels like an idiot. I blame her a little too for giving so much of herself without ever getting anything back.
He didn’t have to give her anything because she loved him so hard and honestly. He wasn’t grateful for what he had. She is even still his friend! More distant to heal but still! Just argh!!!
I hope he doesn’t tell her but if he does she deserves an apology. It would be fine if he genuinely didn’t like her. I’m only angry because he did and does but just didn’t appreciate what he had. Anyway rant over, I’m probably saying the same thing over and over but argh! I do NOT want him as the ml
Same and because of the characters here’s a couple other ways this could go imma rant too.
ML little brother he clearly likes FL in all that time he could have showed that he’s a better contender than his older brother and showed her the treatment and respect she deserves but I think he’s more of the here’s my chance and fail kind of character and oh my brother is your real love ughhh.
She could have went to business instead of pursue love or better yet even her own brother could have said something what you mean you didn’t know over these 13 years your sister was in love with that man your own parents knew how did you not know but I’ll give you a pass for now.
Now yes you’re right she was giving him so much with nothing in return that is a problem but also since she was 8 when she first started liking him it should have been the parents duty to talk to her and show her like hey we don’t want you to get taken advantage of so try this instead especially since she was the daughter they cherished oh so much.
Berne is in no way perfect but it could have been an amazing story about overcoming past heart breaks and learning to love again in their own way and heal.
All in all idc I don’t want ML to be the ML. Girly deserves someone who’s willing to let her heart mend but show that someone is there for her to mend her broken heart and truly care for her. She also needs self improvement towards her self worth and learn to love herself and find more confidence. Not be with the man that broke her heart and only just now realized shoot I do love her only cause she’s not giving me what she always gives me and now giving it to someone else no screw off you had your chance no more. Sorry for more ranting and bad grammar I’m just heated and too lazy to fix my spelling and stuff.
No!!! Comeback!!! The smut is so unimportant to me at this point! The story is so engrossing! I’m so concerned!! Creepy old man no!!! Dragon get your girl!!! Run lady run!!!
Argh!! No matter what choice she makes she is in danger right now!! Also I love she keeps trying to be reasonable, I didn’t expect THAT dream at all. Our boy is kinkier than I thought. That was embarrassing, I thought I was gonna die from secondhand embarrassment.
Lesson learned, mind my business even if I think you’re on the brink of death. I thought he’d be dreaming her saying mean things and she’d have to kick her own ass. I didn’t expect a confession yet
The smut just gives me anxiety in this story, I’m so glad that was a doll. I need the smut to be consensual so badly. So far it’s just been kinda terrifying, they’ve both had scary encounters so I’m always afraid they might accidentally scare the other.
I’m so glad they are back together and talking. The entire palace trip had me in a CHOKEHOLD. And her hallucination confession made me cry. They love each other SO MUCH!
He came in like a hero!!! And now she wants to fight too!!!
Mom’s reveal also got me. That she knew the WHOLE TIME!! She was so kind and patient.
The real reason FL is afraid of birds was super fcked up though Still like she said she has come so far. I shouldn’t pity her, I should respect her. It’s so nice to see her be herself. And I’m so so glad they are finally spending time together again!! Rebellions are busy











Love to see them actually being parents after the love story. Love seeming them actually live their happy life!