chocobuun's Topics (2003)

Honestly in most stories usually they’d have the FL spend the most time with her family, but this is a rare story where even as she has limited time she doesn’t have that many scenes with her family. Pretty much 1 percent of interaction with her brothers. I wish they’d include more of that though. This is a story that seems to have FL interacting more with lots of people outside her family

Author either gotta be impatient and wants to get to the good stuff or they just really love all these time skips lmao (which is so real if you’re an author/artist). Just when you think they’re done making 2 separate time skips- they add ANOTHER ONE. (At least it’s only one year this time)

Brother eughhhh. New guy is not it. Just another dude that looks like he’s ready to manipulate to get his way. You TOO LATE dude. He really chose to come into the story late af and not when she’s married to the king, so it’s easier to get access to her after she’s divorced smh

Since this was tagged as smut and it started off with “sex therapy” I genuinely thought this would be like any regular smut where they’d do it first and the smut scenes would be throughout the entire story. Then I saw the raws and basically they moved in together before they even did the full deed lmao. And the time they actually did the deed it was censored and was past chapter 50. (Though they got handsy in previous chapters, they didn’t go all the way cause he still suffered from ED. It’s also odd that it was less censored when they got handsy but more censored later on).

It’s been a while since I checked in on this. I’m glad the art made her look so mature as she’s grown. Cause some stories where they make the FL a child for several chapters- makes the FL still look like a kid in the face and just slapped an adult body on the bottom lol

Bro these complainers are seriously so annoying. They gotta come back every time and click on the damn story just to make their same copy paste negative opinion about the art. It’s crazy cause they feel like they have a say and are some sort of qualified judge- but they’re not a professional artist or writer, just some reader taking what they can get for free off an illegal site. I will always say this: those who complain will never be able to comment the same crap they say on the artist’s social media account or the official site. Why? Because they know their comment will get disliked or reported. Which is why they’re so happy to say anything on this site that doesn’t delete even the worst of comments.

Saying stuff like “the art is emotionless.” HONEY- yuri gable is described to be an EXPRESSIONLESS MAN 99% of the time. Everyone in the story is aware of it, even taeui. The only times he changes expression is when he’s having sex. Xinlu also likes to keep up a polite and plastered smiley expression 24/7, except when he’s with yuri (which the artist drew well). Anyways lemme just say that those who cry about not liking the art always feel the need to be validated. It’s one thing if the art deteriorated part way through the story and it’s another thing when the story has just begun and ppl complain cause it’s not up to their ideal. If I dislike the art of a new story, I simply don’t add it to my reading list and just move on. You can tell who really seeks attention and likes when they feel they need to announce their disapproval yet still clicking on the story every time. It’s not even constructive criticism, they give no actual advice, and they’re trying to comment this where the artist can’t see it. So don’t start with that crap.
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I get all the ppl saying it’s a realistic reaction for an adult not to believe a kid looking like he’s throwing a tantrum. On the other hand there’s a lot of ppl irl who genuinely believe in having a “bad feeling” or trusting their instincts which has actually saved a bunch of ppl from dangerous situations. There’s been a lot of real life events where ppl got a bad feeling about someone they meet or that they’re in a place they shouldn’t be and then the bad thing actually ends up on the news, to someone else- like the person they met got arrested for murdering someone or an accident happened in that area.

I believe it’s a widely known thing that animals can sense danger ahead of time and children can sense bad people. I get the mom’s lack of belief in the story but you’d think she’d start thinking to believe the mc after the several times he told them to do something and it turned out well 24/7. In this single scene, it feels like she cares more of what others think and how they see them rather than what her child is thinking or feeling. In general, if I were a mother and my kid suddenly starts saying “it’s dangerous, we gotta go now!” Out of nowhere, even if I have my doubts- I’d still choose to believe my child and ignore whatever the people around us thinks of this “tantrum.” I’d at least take him to another area, ask him what’s wrong and be wary of what could possibly be making my child act so frightened rather than make him feel like he’s saying nonsense. In general, brushing kids off like that is an easy way to make your kids stop trusting you and confiding in you. (Unless you have good reason and the kid always says nonsense and plays pranks).

So I’m only on chapter 19 rn and I can see how ppl find the FL stupid. She’s very desperate when it comes to her crush and will drop anything for q-ta. She truly doesn’t listen at all. Her original goal was to be better than her mother as an actress but got completely side-tracked with this romance. What really bothered me was how she hears how the ppl who worked with her and took care of her, is excited about celebrating her accomplishment and planned a dinner party and was waiting for her to come home- only for her to ditch it and go with lover boy.

Oh and another note:
I’m surprised but it looks like I’m the only one rooting for haruka to be the ML. I feel like there’s too many issues with qta and the manager. Qta originally wanted to be with her to be the son-in-law of her father and he does disregard her path to being an actress over his little romance with her. The manager is too old for her and it feels off with her thinking he’s her benefactor, the scales in power feels wrong. Haruka is the one I feel suits the role as ML best, both because of character development and relationship development where FL and him don’t immediately see each other as love interests. And she is the most normal when she’s around him compared to being on her toes around qta and the manager

Chapter 23:
Her mom really is a nasty human being. If it wasn’t enough that the first chapter showed it, she just reveals more revolting stuff. They had it on point though, making her like the evil queen from Snow White. She’s jealous of her own daughter since she was a kid both due to looks and attention. She feels the need to take everything from her, so it’s not surprising that she wanted to take away the tutor whom the mom assumed FL had a crush on. and the way she had to degrade her young kid to feel better about herself is insane.

Chapter 30: yep she completely went off the rails of her original goal and chose her love life over her career. Dropped everything to go chase after her man in New York. Funny thing is, he would drop her for an opportunity to work with her dad. The FL made a man her priority and the same can’t be said for him. He doesn’t care for her career either. I fully agree and understand the comments calling her stupid. Her heads stuck in the clouds and I’m honestly looking forward to it all crashing down and slapping her in the face with reality. Everyone around her is sugar coating it but if it were me as the manager, I’d call her the biggest disappointment of my career lmao.

Lmaoo this got me to read and finish the entire novel right away. (The novel isn’t that long in my opinion, it’s 2 volumes) It’s interesting to see how their relationship developed. The only thing that bothered me in the novel was how vague the time skips were in the story. Like I could be reading the story and then all of a sudden they mention how it’s been a year or years since they met. They don’t show a clear amount of time.

And it’s annoying how much ppl be complaining about the art. I guess that’s the problem with spin-offs main story. Fans of the main will never be satisfied with art they’re already used to. Which is a shame because I think this art is beautiful and has a detailed and soft style. You can see it when it comes to the backgrounds and features of the characters.

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It’s funny to see how xinlu goes from being an unstable violent man to being a needy bf LOL. He’s the type of bf to whine about yuri not contacting him enough or yuri not loving him as much as he is. He’s so jealous and possessive.

Wish author would stop with the sappy mincheol flashbacks like it would change anything. If there’s gonna be mincheol flashbacks, I’d rather it finally show the bad memories. I’d rather have more taeha backstory. I hope author would stop with the agonizing slow reveal of mystery.

Anyways hopefully this isn’t a sorta “clickbait” ending where it misleads readers to think Taeha and mincheol will meet, but it doesn’t actually happen yet lol.