Puppyboy Agend-er March 18, 2025 4:50 pm

After rereading this years later I have come to realize that this could have been a fairly decent story if the plot actually went somewhere.

There was a potential murder-mystery involving military power struggles and two characters seemingly tied together through fate and a semi-common goal.

This had the potential to be gut-wrenching and actually satisfying, but it just falls flat on its face within seconds. Even the reveal of who Shiohira is to the two protags was lackluster. I remember my first reaction, and it was literally just "ohhhhhh... ok." LOL

Idek. It's just disappointing.

    luci_with_a_spoon April 19, 2025 3:13 am

    my exact thoughts :/
    I really thought it could've gone somewhere, like, we never got to know shit basically
    why were the higher-ups acting like that? why would it be an issue if it was revealed that the ML was the fathers son? since we know how the dad died, MC being the witness + cause, ML wouldnt be suspected for murder
    like,,, theres so many questions I had, but there was more porn than plot so...

    luci_with_a_spoon April 19, 2025 3:15 am
    my exact thoughts :/I really thought it could've gone somewhere, like, we never got to know shit basicallywhy were the higher-ups acting like that? why would it be an issue if it was revealed that the ML was th... luci_with_a_spoon

    even the fact that the ML is traumatized and the MC understood that was actually somewhat decent in the portrayal of an unhealed trauma victim but eh,, imma go eat some kiwi...

    Puppyboy Agend-er April 19, 2025 3:37 am
    even the fact that the ML is traumatized and the MC understood that was actually somewhat decent in the portrayal of an unhealed trauma victim but eh,, imma go eat some kiwi... luci_with_a_spoon

    Yeah, seeing as this is an earlier work for this mangaka it kinda makes sense that it's so full of holes and doesn't really do much with the plot lol

    It was just a fairly interesting plot that fell flat due to writer inexperience and probably time crunch since deadlines are brutal for mangaka.

    luci_with_a_spoon April 20, 2025 8:37 am
    Yeah, seeing as this is an earlier work for this mangaka it kinda makes sense that it's so full of holes and doesn't really do much with the plot lol It was just a fairly interesting plot that fell flat due to ... Puppyboy Agend-er

    truee

Puppyboy Agend-er March 4, 2025 8:21 am

Hatoya-sen's style *has* been changing since their first ever series.

It happens. It especially happens with long-winded series like this one that apparently has 6 volumes with only 3 of them translated so far.

Either shut up and read or leave. Ya'll are annoying with all your whining in the comments about how Ai looks "younger" when literally everyone is steadily becoming rounder and have more chibi panels. I'm tired of ya'll screaming "pedo, pedo!" like you're some sort of Pokémon. Jfc.

    larulair March 7, 2025 11:53 am

    Exactly! Stop having opinions! Doesn't matter if it makes you uncomfortable, never express that out loud! That's how any reading community should be!!

    /s

    Puppyboy Agend-er March 21, 2025 3:45 am
    Exactly! Stop having opinions! Doesn't matter if it makes you uncomfortable, never express that out loud! That's how any reading community should be!!/s larulair

    Boohoo who fuckin' cares lol

    If you don't like it don't fucking read. If you don't like the art style then go somewhere else. I bet your ass can't even draw two stick figures kissing.

    Jobless behavior.

Puppyboy Agend-er March 3, 2025 3:54 am

Welcome back, Tsukiyama.

Puppyboy Agend-er February 28, 2025 2:17 am

Now show me his guts while you fuck him.

    Puppyboy Agend-er February 28, 2025 2:22 am

    Reliving my Maki Murakami Kanpai DJ days.

    I need him to fondle and stroke his guts while his dick ravages him. Yes, yes.

    Seeyiaa February 28, 2025 2:34 am
    Reliving my Maki Murakami Kanpai DJ days.I need him to fondle and stroke his guts while his dick ravages him. Yes, yes. Puppyboy Agend-er

    Omg I remember reading that for the first time..., surprisingly I was okay with it which makes me more surprised

    Puppyboy Agend-er February 28, 2025 2:52 am
    Omg I remember reading that for the first time..., surprisingly I was okay with it which makes me more surprised Seeyiaa

    I *literally* just spent 10 minutes digging through other sites to find it again since mrm is fucking itself over rn LOL that one and the amputee regression Komahina dj made me who I am today.

    It's just as good as I remember it.

    (☞☉—☉) ☞ February 28, 2025 8:06 am

    This comment is giving MADK vibes rn

    meowmeow February 28, 2025 4:41 pm
    Reliving my Maki Murakami Kanpai DJ days.I need him to fondle and stroke his guts while his dick ravages him. Yes, yes. Puppyboy Agend-er

    This is so real

    Puppyboy Agend-er February 28, 2025 6:36 pm
    This comment is giving MADK vibes rn (☞☉—☉) ☞

    Fun fact: I am Ryo Suzuri's biggest fan.

    Puppyboy Agend-er February 28, 2025 6:37 pm
    This is so real meowmeow

    Another good one is Zakiko/ZCC's Komahina dj where Hinata is an amputee with regression trauma lol

Puppyboy Agend-er February 26, 2025 12:46 am

Yes?? Baby time, yes???? Now?? Yes.

Puppyboy Agend-er February 25, 2025 7:22 pm

This chapter gutted me(/TДT)/

Puppyboy Agend-er February 24, 2025 12:23 am

>> insert Scary Movie "RUN, BITCH, RUUUUUUN" gif here <<

Puppyboy Agend-er February 20, 2025 10:11 pm

Some of you are so obtuse when it comes to series like this it honestly gives me a migraine.

There is so much more to the story outside of "weeeeeeh Winter raped Raymon" but ya'll are too preoccupied with focusing on that that the whole rest of the plot and the message it's trying to send just go right over your heads.

All ya'll care about is whether someone is getting raped or not and morally grandstanding over it. If you don't like rape/dubcon in series 'cause of trauma or other personal reasons that's fine. Not everyone can handle this stuff. STOP. READING.

This is a dark series about trauma, drugs, rape, abuse/grooming of a minor, suicide and murder. It's not a series you should be reading if you can't handle conflict deeper or darker than "but I can't be in love with a dude 'cause I'm not gay."

I am saying this for your own good. Just go read something else.

    rinoa777 February 20, 2025 11:35 pm

    fr. if there's something i dont like in ANYTHING i stop consuming it because i know i will not like it. i don't get why ppl want everything to be morally-good when plots like these exist, specifically in this genre.

    Rosette February 21, 2025 12:07 am

    Couldn't agree moooooree

    shou_aihime February 21, 2025 1:10 am

    agreed. I was so against winter in the early chapters but still chose to stay. I keep reading and it gets even more interesting how their past shaped their character in the present.

    Puppyboy Agend-er February 21, 2025 4:39 am
    fr. if there's something i dont like in ANYTHING i stop consuming it because i know i will not like it. i don't get why ppl want everything to be morally-good when plots like these exist, specifically in this g... rinoa777

    There are literal thousands of titles in the bl genre, yet these people willingly choose to stick to the series they claim give them trauma or are "bad" for having darker themes.

    I'm so tired of it LOL

    Puppyboy Agend-er February 21, 2025 4:42 am
    agreed. I was so against winter in the early chapters but still chose to stay. I keep reading and it gets even more interesting how their past shaped their character in the present. shou_aihime

    They expect the entire plot to be dumped on them for full understanding within 10 chapters. It's like their attention spans can't handle more than 30 minutes of consuming something lol

    Like, the moment Winter dropped a hint that they used to know each other my ass was like "ohhhhhh I am in for a long, painful ride" and have STAYED for it. I live for this shit lol and it's nice having something deeper and darker to read after I've had to sate myself with like 15 office/college romance series.

    Puppyboy Agend-er February 21, 2025 4:43 am
    Couldn't agree moooooree Rosette

    The day people learn to just move on from the things they dislike instead of continuing to consume it will be the day I finally know peace lol

Puppyboy Agend-er February 20, 2025 2:04 am

Says the woman who was bit during pregnancy and is now essentially a sentient corpse.

Look in the mirror lately, hun?

Puppyboy Agend-er February 18, 2025 5:44 pm

Welcome back, Kakyoin.

    Yamigopse February 18, 2025 7:24 pm

    Fr, I see him

    Puppyboy Agend-er February 18, 2025 7:37 pm
    Fr, I see him Yamigopse

    That one panel of him looking up at the knight sealed it for me lol

    Even the earrings put the look together for him.

    Yamigopse February 18, 2025 7:57 pm
    That one panel of him looking up at the knight sealed it for me lolEven the earrings put the look together for him. Puppyboy Agend-er

    We never know... Author might use him as a ref while designing that juicy wizard

    Puppyboy Agend-er February 18, 2025 8:32 pm
    We never know... Author might use him as a ref while designing that juicy wizard Yamigopse

    Tempted to go see if they've got other socmed accounts and see if they've ever drawn Jotakak LOL

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