I'm so tired of the helpless doormat mc trope! why do they always need a knight in shining armor to help them with every problem? why can't we get some strong indoeend characters that have their shit together for a change?
ON GODDDDD
Read the Yaoi story called Red Candy. You got an uke who is a total baddie SS rank agent like spy. Who can kick butt and pop off with that gun...ヾ(☆▽☆)
idk why, but I find mc's blockheaded-ness quite annoying. he hasn't really done anything wrong necessarily.. can't quite put a finger on what's bugging me but something about him annoys me lol I wanna see him chasing the ml!
also, that friend better not fcking open his mouth and expose his secret. that'll piss me off!
Because it felt like he does thing insincerely.
Sometimes you can feel it when someone didn't put their heart on anything they do.
That's my take though.
oh my god THAT'S EXACTLY IT!!! thank you! All of his interactions with ml also feel insincere.. like, he was curious and amused but nothing felt genuine! we'll see how the rest of the story develops, but as of right now he still annoys me and I can't bring myself to like him as a love interest for ml
I'm trying very hard not to take this seriously because at this point everything that's happening is fcking idiotic.. but every time seme opens his mouth my blood pressure rises. He's such a complete fcking asshole!!!!!! zero character development. scum of the earth! I'm so disappointed in Garam for putting up with this shit. No matter how good the sex is, how can you stand a piece of shit like him that's constantly degrading and mocking you?? let alone him becoming a "love" interest??
TALK YO SHIT TWIN!!!
the art is so pretty, and plot is so far pretty okay though we don't know much about anything or anyone yet. why do these poor ukes always have to be poor and get sexually assaulted because of it?! being poor doesn't make anyone any less human! the rich asshole tropes are so frustrating
Making Uke poor and endebted is an easy way to build a yaoi plot without having much researchs to do in terms of concept or background.
Although a lazy plot, it can still work if the art is good, ml is hot and his dynamics with mc is interesting - which is also the case in Cry me a River. It's an easy setting, fast development and smut comes fast cause Uke won't have any choice but sell his body to save the day; preferably sleeping with a Hot and tall rich guy because this is BL Yaoi and it's for the phantasm.
The art does also a lot, cause if these stories weren't illustrated with nice art, they wouldn't be so pupolar.
So yeah, that's how we get SO MANY Korean Yaoi with practically the same pattern...
this seme is the same exact kind of trash as Haejoon from "Whats the possibility of a successful love". This shit better not be forgiven easily!!! I want a long and painful groveling arc. nobody gives a fck that you fell in love in the midst of your trickery and heinous scheming. absolutely no self reflection or apology?! they always only start to feel bad once they're exposed..
Dear Hwirim, this is not the time to let your feelings cloud your judgment. you better give him a taste of his own medicine!
neither of them were seriously hurt.. and IT WAS RIGHT THERE!!!?? that makes zero sense no matter how you look at it. and it wasn't some pocket change, 1B fcking won! what was the point??
Right
What about the video
is uke an actual idiot?!?? does he really believe a smug faced dude like that needs his coaching?!? why lie in the first place and do all sorts of embarrassing stuff like, the second hand embarrassment is raising my blood pressure and idc what anyone says, seme is an actual asshole for toying with someone naive like him. if you "like" him, why toy with him? I have to throw my brain out the window if I wanna keep reading this such a shame because the art is so pretty
this was surprisingly pretty well written for such a short story, and there's so much to unpack!! some people may think the uke is trash for having 4 boyfriends, but it kinda worked in this story?! it did a good job at portraying the power of words, and how much of an impact a single interaction can have on a person's life. That's all it took for Tora to fall in unconditional love with Masami. I'm very impressed by Tora's character.. a complete green flag seme. He was aware Masami had other boyfriends and yet accepted him as he was, without expecting him to change himself for him!!! THAT IS HUGE! he stood by his side and just expressed his unconditional love until Masami chose only him, on his own accord and free will. In the meantime, there was no sexual assault or violence because seme was jealous, there was no verbal or emotional abuse, he did not act like an obsessive or possessive man-child.. he simply loved him for who he was! Given Masami's past and his trauma, Tora's unconditional love SAVED and HEALED him. "No one's Perfect" is such a befitting title for this story because it's so true.
Edit: I completely missed the part where mc admits to cheating on his boyfriends with the others. I must say that is the biggest ick and con of this story unfortunately.
Sick bastard! hello??? did you forget that you raped him?? manipulated and forced him into having sex with you and accepting your "feelings"??
as expected of a mentally ill psycho to jump to the absolute worst/nonsense conclusion. I hate this guy so much I might have to drop this