
It’s not bad but unfortunately, it feels all over the place. It feels as if unfortunately, it feels all over the place. It feels as if multiple chapters are missing or something because it’s jumping from one thing to the next without any clear explanation of what happened before that or how we even got to this point. Like when he first got to the village we never saw him speak to anyone so I was highly confused on how he even learned about the little girl being sick. It feels like a lot of holes in the plot to be honest.

I’m only chapter 13 and this story is stressing me out so bad! Like why are there so many people getting in the way of their relationship like omg just let them live!!!!
Honestly might have to drop until it’s finished. Like it’s pissing me off so bad and then I skipped around to later chapters and this princess I can’t.
I will say Sayo’s and the Demon God strong because I think I would have just killed myself out of sheer stress this caused.

I’m so happy the etiquette teacher got what was coming to her. Also I wish Saya wouldn’t have endured being hit for so long but I’m happy she went and informed her fiancé right after because in to many other stories they’ll usually just endure the abuse into the ML somehow finds out.
I also like that in this story the person who was summoned with them is a genuine saintess and doesn’t seem like a white lotus person.

Chapter six I know Amane said she didn’t want to tell her father but that would have been my slight revenge against the whole family. Because by telling the father and he learns of his wife’s transgressions and that the daughter he ignored all these years is the one from his lover I know I would have been happy to see the family fall a bit before I leave.

I find it hard to understand FMC’s like this. Like your sister framed you as a murderer had you locked up and abused for years and then when you finally try to find happiness she attempts to kill you and others because lets be honest other people could have died during that attack. Like why are we sad that she died?! I know it’s just a different of our personalities but it’s always unfathomable to me how they can still want to make up with their sibling or care about them dying when the bitch wouldn’t even spit on you if you were dying of thirst!
Just something else that irked me was how everyone treats the ML like wouldn’t be a good thing he has high spiritual power why would you ostracize him instead of properly teaching him?
It looked so annoying having to get your engagement annulled because having to listen to scriptures at all but especially for three plus hours would annoy the hell out of me.