
long first chapter, short second chapter. but you know what, I don't mind it's cute. The second chapter is all about the confession and the challenge ahead. And how our baker is not scared of a challenge. As for what he likes about him, it is because you are the first person to crack his shell and gain his trust. All while being so freaking sweet. I could totally fal for either of them so I can see why they like each other.

His ex shows up, moves next door, takes him out and then screws him. Not sure if he was whisked away by the flow or not, but then again they also teleport too. since there is no transition to them being in front of the love hotel or ending up inside it. because before it was about omelette rice and the other was him rejecting the kisses. I wonder what this will truly be like

Totally relatable. When one has speech problems they do not feel confident. I know there are more speech problems than stuttering, stuttering is just easiest to write since it's more consistent. Like I have a lisp, random voice change, volume control issues, random accent switches, and unable to say a word or two each day even if the day previous I could say it fine. This are hard to write about. But I use to be as scared as him with my talking. And even now I get upset, but I guess it depends on whose around. Cause for me I laugh at it too since it sounds weird. Wish our lead had a support group to help. Maybe his crush will become his support group. And ya know, he shouldn't be surprised that he made a friend. I have made friends because of my speech impediments. Not sure why, but people around me now a days find my speech problems cute.
ya know this amuses me. it treats being mates as a wedding. I can see why. But I am pretty sure even without the bite people still considered them mates. Like we consider our friends who have been dating someone for years to be married to that person. But I do like how they talk about the being mates thing as a marriage. Other omegaverse said something similar but none followed though really. Since the Omega and alpha were never on level ground, this one they are.