
i'm
not going to lie
this story is weird
like i'm having a real hard time following the whiplash of character actions and emotions. it all seems so wildly out of pocket and random at all times. it's not even that they're immature it's just disconnected, almost written like a random series of events rather than anything with any cohesion. i get what the author is trying to say but it's just not coming across.

oh man i needed like 40+ chapters of this
i want more of them specifically but also the story would have just benefitted from being longer. it's not bad at all i fucking loved it but it could have been even better (cuz yea there were some things kinda rushed/left without being said)
holy fuck philip is my type. huge weird-ass puppy top with messy silver hair? give me 20

basic ass lazy rape to love scenario with another poor traumatized mc
mc really said he dissociated through sex the way he did when the loan sharks came after him. like wow there's no coming back from that one.

ch7 when he says his 'memories become a blur' -- what he's describing is dissociation/disassociation and it happens to protect the mind from a traumatizing situation. like okay sure if someone is pushed past their limits sexually (which is still not cool) you could potentially sort of drift in and out and lose time
but the author made a deliberate choice to link being beaten/the stress of his father's debts with sex with ml
idk if they did it knowing what they were saying but still if you know the psychology behind that it's very very yikes
anyway i am also an enjoyer of choso's tiddies
i literally stopped reading this to let it cook after the three solid chapters of rape at the end of s1 and i come back to check on it and all the comments are about the fucking rapist
can someone spoil me, does the 'main couple' even get any screentime in the last 25 chapters??? bc if this is just the Redhair Show then i'm not really all that interested in continuing
Well they do get screentime just not a lot and the redhead became a bottom so that’s why’s everyone talking about him
thanks for responding, and ugh
i felt this in s1 and nothing i'm seeing is dissuading me from the thought that redhead is the real main character bc the author clearly seems to favor him. Dochan got like 2 chapters in the entirety of s1 and mc seemed to be only there for redhead to torture, he had very little depth other than what was tied into redhead/redhead's family, and now that redhead doesn't have anything to do with them they're just. not in the story.
imma be honest i don't really care if he became a bottom, it actually kinda icks me out bc it's sort of feels like 'rapists can redeem themselves/be punished by taking it' (which is something I've definitely seen in other manhwa/manga)
what a shame. if redhead had been a throwaway evil character who left in the first ten chapters this would have been a great story.
Yeah u've summarized really well what's wrong with this story. Like at this point, I'm just reading to find out wth "arts manz" means, who the protagonist is, and tbh just wth is going on. And with this last ch, black hair guy expecting redhead to "realize i slept with him cuz i like him," like be fr. My fed upness is very quickly putmaneuvering my curiosity :/
yeaahhhh i think i'm gonna wait for it to finish and then read and skip all the chapters i even see a flash of red in lmao
i literally could not care less what that character does i just want him off my screen
completely feel u! i’m still reading this but i fucking hate the rapist and can’t get over how everything just works out for him and how everyone just ignores it now. i want more dan and dochan </3
Don't know about that. I prefer feisty couples over fluffy ones when it comes to fantasy. Second couple is fire
feisty is fine. i'm not at all saying everything has to be fluffy bc some of my favorite couples are enemies-to-lovers--when it's done well. i don't even care that redhead has a shit personality bc that's room for growth. but i draw the line at blackmailing/intimidating someone for sexual favors. i'm just not interested in a character who does that shit.
yup, all of this
Room to grow? He rape his best friend twice-
i mean a shit personality if it weren't for the rape
like if he was just a bastard who hadn't done that i wouldn't mind as much bc there's room for all kinds of characters. but i do absolutely draw the line at rape.