Wheeze's Topics (103)

Story was amazing and I hated the brother with everything I have but for once I’m happy with how the aftermath of trauma was portrayed. I’m a SA victim and sometimes how trauma is portrayed in BL sucks and it was nice to see how bongchun treated him after it happened. He took his time and didn’t rush and didn’t ask bc sometimes as victims it’s harder for us to recall those moments especially if it happened with a family member and while I wish we got alittle more attention on the trauma from soongap it was still a surprising touch to the story and made me happy cry bc it was such a triggering and traumatic scene and so it’s nice it wasn’t completely glossed over though I do think the brother deserved to live with his guilt till the end of his life if he died I don’t think soongap nor bongchun would have coped with that nicely especially with how they coped with death and trauma around it. I think soongap wouldn’t want his brother dead but definitely wants away from him

I couldn’t even tell you what the plot is or the character dynamic bc they seem to change every chapter started off like a fun short smutty story but it took such a turn for the worst and they went from fake dating to married in one chapter? AND NOW THEY TOXIC? WHATS HAPPENING???

I actually hate every character in this story and the plot confuses the fuck out of me but I’m still interested in reading it. The abusive relationships make me uncomfortable so it’s definitely not a wholesome story for the faint of heart. This shit is TOXIC yaoi lol

Not my favorite, the rape does not fit with the whole “growing as adults” narrative bc that’s not how that works! I also feel the pacing is too fast for all their development especially like I’m confused if the two tops actually liked each other or not bc they were called rivals but they were also dating? Jin’s character was crazy and kinda filled with just stereotypes of moc like him being incredibly dangerous, out of touch and like cold, and like a rapist. And the bottom yelled at him for raping him constantly but are we not gonna talk about the way the other top dressed like a kidnapper and violently raped the bottom at his school!? And the way Jin was apart of it!? Like what the fuck is happening. The communication aspect was very realistic but the way of their development needed more chapters and longer development bc I feel no love between the three

I really liked authors “dear gene” and came to read more stories from them but this one ultimately triggered me like really bad! I like bl so ultimately I’m use to sadly seeing these topic portrayed and I usually can handle it but this one broke me. I have a few issues with it; the pacing was not the best, idk how we got from him feeding him to him raping him and I don’t know how the kid did what he was able to do, I didn’t really see the grooming aspect which is why to me the story seemed to treat the kid and the rapist as equals more than a victim being groomed into this abusive pedophilic relationship? The portrayal to someone who’s gone through this didn’t seem correct, also I need authors to know that you can portray scenes in horror and psychological media without getting super explicit. I didn’t need to see this man fully rape this kid and I didn’t need to see all the other scenes, I wfeel the author could have cleverly input more of the fish scenes into those explicit moments bc I was so busy skipping through them I’m probably missing a lot of info which makes it hard to understand the whole story :(

I NEED CLOSURE!!! I cant handle it and it gives me too much emotions ┗( T﹏T )┛I know Trever definitely still loves gene but does gene still love him? Do they get back together? I need to see them smooch again!! The story is perfect but the greed I have for side stories or maybe a sequel about them getting together in the end is huge

I wish we got more development about the boys feelings towards rika? Like it was super uncomfortable to me about everyone just being ok with him seeing rika as a girl (whether he hates myself for it or not doesn’t excuse that he needs to unpack shit) (also uncomfortable with comments totally excusing this thinking when it’s a explanation not a excuse) but it seemed to me that he was too hard on himself so he must have compared himself to others around rika when the poor boy didn’t realize that he’s queer. What got me was the way he literally told the uncle “I like him” he might have thought “I wish she was my girlfriend” but that was about the only time he actually ever seemed to think of rika as a girl or misgender him so I wish he got some kind of conclusion of if he figured out his sexuality and still likes rika even as a boy or if he ever got rid of his feelings for him.

I loved rika tho! My boy (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

Like I know we are supposed to be cheering the mc and ml but I actually can not get myself to like either of them and I hate that the mc and Woori get along so well and actually would fit together in another type of trope but instead the mc is cute but a nothing naive character and the ml is a basic top nothing character. The chemistry I just don’t see between really any of the leads and the mc and I know Woori will end up with that stupid crazy ass celebrity over another man who he actually deserves which is neither stalker man or mc. The concept for the story was great but it quickly turned into a boring story sadly :/

Tbh I think the story would have been great if the author didn’t try to force romance into it and literally just had them all as a fuckbuddy polycule bc I have yet to see that and I think that would be a interesting story especially with how the characters are set up lol

I actually didn’t have high expectations for the story but I loved itttt, i actually think it’s too short like i want more! I need a whole 100 chapter slow burn version of them ヾ(☆▽☆)

Nahhhh wth, you get one text from the man who broke your heart and decide to just leave Woori? Like even if mc only sees Woori as a friend that’s like a terrible thing to do we all know he isn’t going to send one single text to Woori and just leave him hanging. Never put a toxic man before your friends #－.－)