Wheeze's Topics (103)

The story is fun in aspects of plot but the author put some average bl tropes in that just kinda ruined it for me :/ we need more bottoms with respect for themselves and not just let the top do whatever they want T_T bc wtf does he mean it doesn’t matter if he says no!? Bro what!?

This was one of the most realistic first time sex scenes in a bl! Like I’m sorry to the people complaining in the comments but actual sex for the first time does not last 10 hours with buckets worth of cum everywhere it’s usually very awkward and dry and sometimes not serious! Bro just lost his virginity he wasn’t going to last that long and have that much energy lol

This angst hurtttt, I understand Mr lim but for all this age talk he sure goes about conflict more childish than yeoreum -_- thats my issue with his character because I can definitely understand the doubts and insecurities he is having but he’s going about it in such a immature way and it’s frustrating!! Yeoreum better have him on his kneessss later

I actually didn’t like this story and I can’t quite figure out why? I especially had a distaste for the main character and his portrayal because I don’t understand what was happening with him? Like the internalized transphobia was never quite addressed except for the other teen who was a huge asshole. Like I understand having internalized transphobia because I had it for years before I came out but just because I was struggling I still had to hold myself accountable for the beliefs I held. It seemed like his was just never addressed because “he’s not trans just a cross dresser” which is a shit reason sorry there’s a strong history of cross dressing and queer culture and maybe this rubbed me the wrong way because I’m use to transphobia in bls or transphobia within the cross dressing community in modern times but the subject of transphobia was not my favorite and I feel wasn’t completely appropriate to include into the story

I hope this author knows I love themヾ(☆▽☆)
Actual bdsm written correctly? A dom who actually cares for their sub? Control in and out of play? A top with facial hair? A bottom who isn’t a stereotype that easily gets manipulated? UGH I LOVE IT ALL SO MUCH

So vile of the author to give us these crumbs bc we all know their gonna get taken away ╥﹏╥ I’m having second lead syndrome so baddd like ugh he’s so cute and pathetic and I love that for him. HES DOWN SO BAD

This story was weird but I somehow binged and become invested there wasn’t much emotion going on in the emotional scenes, the servants were weird as hell, and some other scenes threw me off so bad where they were just weird scenes or the dialogue seemed awkward. There was some hot scenes tho and Arthur was prettyyy so it wasn’t like the worst read ever because it was porn and you should never really expect a+ plot from porn lol

I love all the couples and I definitely clocked the girl and I hope we get more of them (≧∀≦) they are all so cute! I can’t get over him walking in on the girls tho I died

The second couple confused me? There wasn’t a lot of context as much for the first couple and their relationship didn’t make too much sense to me especially after that short of them on the phone. I would totally read an analysis on them and their complexity lol but just reading it made me confused and not too into it

Woori lovers, our time is coming! I read the raws and it’s ლ(´ڡ`ლ)