
I’m going to give a complete honest review and say that I actually didn’t like the story. The story was confusing and the romance between the two main characters didn’t feel real but also the bottom didn’t feel like a good character compared to kei, kei was a fantastic written character about what a child psych can look like with abuse from a young age but what he did to the other main character wasn’t addressed and just thrown away like it didn’t happen and that really irked me. Kei raped him more than once and at one point made the guys boyfriend listen to them and then randomly they fall in love? We go from the ML being traumatized to him being smitten in like two chapters :( It made zero sense to me bc we got kei who is a complex and traumatized character but it felt more like him doing that to the ML was excused rather then explained, it was never addressed and then all of a sudden a weird cult come back and that confused me as well and then the main character blaming himself for kei leaving bc he wanted to hide his sexuality for safety reasons? Like no bro that isn’t selfish of you to do and it just seemed like he went from a fleshed out character to the stereotypical yaoi attached to abuser character. like we went from a good start to just watered down characters and plots which disappointed me tbh. Kei as a character was greatly written and his complexity was great as well just everything else was dissatisfying

The second couple could have been hot if the author didn’t keep changing the size of the top to the point where he some shots just straight up looked like a child bros height was different in almost every scene and it was uncomfortable to read. Size difference can be a pretty hard thing to draw at times especially when it comes to angles so it’s understandable that his size just kept changing but the way he looked like a child was not it, I’ve read some bls with the same height difference and the authors never really had issues with making the shorter person look like a adult but still kept them with that “cute” aesthetic but this one looked too much like a child for me

I’m going to be honest but the plot kinda confused me? I really like the story but I just didn’t really understand the human and his conflict and thought process? He seemed to hate life but then got upset at Demi being a king and then I was confused bc why did Demi send so many demons out and then cheer on Adam for killing them all? What exactly was Adam not able to ever forgive him about? The whole conflict era confused me tbh >.<

It was cute ig? The bottoms trope wasn’t my favorite, he seemed slightly infantile and it pissed me off to read at times tbh and the random SA scene made zero sense? Like it was pretty out of character for the top to me especially with how he treated the bottom before it happened and after it was just weird to me? He’s an understanding and patient guy the whole like time and then a switch just went off and the bottom decided that ig he liked it halfway? The entire scene was random and confusing to me lol

Besides the relationship literally being “yeah so I blackmailed and basically assaulted this guy” and the top being absolutely a shitty ass person the story and other characters are kinda bad too. Like there is literally a moment where one of the girls asks the bottom if he is getting manipulated and abused and instead of him responding he just responds “yes” in his mind? Like what was the point of that scene? we’ve seen it happening for like five chapters now, can the bottom please be able to fucking stand up for himself and instead of everyone playing into the abuse like actually talk to him like it just seems there’s no depth to anything, the romance feels forced and like not there bc the only scenes we get is sex or the top being a shitty person, where are any of the domestic scenes the bottom constantly talks about? The characters have almost zero depth to them it feels and the sex is uncomfortable lowkey bc all the bottom says is “no” or “don’t” or “stop” which doesn’t sound like he’s enjoying it

This was so cute(≧∀≦)
The way the top was such a simp and head over heels and the way he was so talkative during sex, praising him and just like head over heels! Also the way he introduced mako as his “boyfriend?girlfriend?super cute lover” was so adorable,
I was hoping for a side story about the maid and the bartender tho, they were so cute as well (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
I’m sorry but what was with the whole pedo plot!? and why did they both just brush it off like it was nothing!? WHY DID HE ACUSE HIS TIED UP BOYFRIEND IN A ROOM FULL OF GROSS PICS OF HIM OF CHEATING ON HIM WITH THE PEDO!?