
There's so many redundant parts in this story. They keep making it seem like "oh an abusive love triangle is gonna happen, whoops I guess not, oh now it is happening" or "oh so there's gonna be a time skip, whoops I guess not, oh now there is one". It's not even like foreshadowing because it just feels like the author keeps starting storylines and then pausing them
They went through all the trouble of having them separate and age 6 years and they didn't milk their reunion for any drama. This whole part only took like 6 chapters, how am i supposed to feel any emotion other than whiplash reading this part when it's just like 3 major events you're supposed to feel bad about per chapter?