
I read up to ch17 it just seems kinda boring. Neither seem to be honest with each other feelings. Karlyle seems confused by his and Ash is giving mixed singles saying he's not interested but acting like he is. Feels like one those stories where miscommunication is the biggest tool to push plot along. I just find those stories draining after a while.

Stopped reading at ch 5 seme is weird but if feels like ur being dramatic for pointing out his behavior.
Like who just touches somebody's face the second time you've met them?? Or in what world would it be appropriate to get a streamers address and show up to there house??
Like its weird and him going uwu hope I didn't scare u or block my number if u want like he's making u feel guilty if did just block and ignore him
Maybe it's cus Ive been in similar situations with men so I'm instantly put off by this type of behavior
I saw someone comment about this being a healthy relationship but so far I'm not sure maybe it get better later I think we're just so use to stories full on SA from love interest that behavior like this seems healthier...
Man once they made it clear that messing a characters tape will mess with what the person remembers I knew Doha would do some sabotaging #-.-) Ugh I can only hope he'll stick to destroy clues rather then messing with Bada tape.
Also we knew Bada can't remember his life before the game but can Doha remember anything? Have they mention anything like that and just missed it?
Or are there clues on their phones to at least give some evidence that neither party is just a character in a game?
This feels like some black mirror stuff. (⊙…⊙ )
Even tho Doha sabotaging Bada is a concerning sign. I hope something comes to light soon that builds their confidence that they'll be able to be with each outside of this game. Especially before he does anything that's really unforgivable.
I'm also concerned of the effects of killing and seeing/experiencing so much death is having on Doha and Baba
On another note the dirty talk is pretty good in this. I feel like usually yaois suck at dialogue when it comes to sex scenes besides shutline I can't think of any other ones that are able build a mood. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧