It's a pass for me. I feel that the plot was weak, there for felt a bit feeding. I think it would be best to over haul the plot entirely. And place the romance in a adult setting. Were the dynamic can be drafted better. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
literally turned a good guy into a villain, this plot tool was horrible。 (︶︿︶)＝凸
the doctor literally said parents cannot donate blood because it's dangerous for the baby so he is trying to protect wo. why this make him a villain?
From a writer's perspective they way they used this as a unsuccessful plot tool was not beneficial to the story at all. Telling him he is gonna kill him, pinning a rather useless plot twist to star up drama when there is already alot. This was not necessary. To turn a support character into a bad guy who got them hurt. But hey at least 17 people think the same. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Ok sorry I understand, you're not blaming him about being a villain. you were talking about writer's way of writing. I'm not gonna give any spoiler but in the end writer manages to use this occasion in a good way.
Yes haha i hope it was kindaaaa useless to throw a good guy under the bus, but every yaoi has it's flaws. Webtoons kinda are know for their more random plot tools. I guess get the money ㅋㅋㅋ
this dont get cute it get drop dead gorgeous!!!!! I give it 4 outta 5 very good!!!
with yo yellow eyes, and crazy looking dick bitch! Alrriiwwwgghhtt ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
I'm telling you this, this shit is hella refreshing! I like a good slice and dice, whip him and dick him sorta story line yasssss!!!(▰˘◡˘▰)
At least the countess this time be scary asf lol.(⊙…⊙ )
it's Britney bitch!
Here to say I don't stan any of these toxic bitches.
All these bottoms out here in the fictional streets being toxic hoes.
All the tops in the yaoi fictional streets be abusive fruit roleups.
The verses out here in the fictional yaoi streets be katty drama causing secret bottoms lol ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ.
To mucchhhhh!!!!!!! Be gone be before I drop a dam house on yo asses! Bitpity bopatiy booo be gone bitches (⊙…⊙ )
LMFAOOO what's with you bitch just go drop it and get lost already lol we don't give a shit about you
Clearly enough comment cunt hahahaha lol fuckin fairy lol genius name btw.
What the actual hell?
HuH <(｀^´)> ofc it is, dickhead (๑•ㅂ•)و
lol if you say so lol cunt lol ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Nghh kono kusogaki (╯°口°)
クソガキ? Not a bitch using my language against me hahha, われめ!
私があなたのお尻を蹴ったので、あなたは今満足していますか？ (●'◡'●)ﾉ
You could try dropping houses on us, cunthead, try me.
Lol bitch ide just chop kids like you in the throat lol bye before you shit your diaper.
if me not supporting toxic fake bullshit is crazy then looks like I'm not needing to take a trip any where unless you paying bitch lol
Ugh gurl can you just get lost already ~
Yes drop it and go away, We've already had enough of you
not a cunt using my language against me hahha Joseiki ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Huh that's some japanese fawker
who is we?
you and the small handed goonies typing?
because you take fiction serious. Bitch don't come under my comment with out expecting your ass to get handed to you if you are a idiot. (︶︿︶)＝凸
Yeah poorly spelt Japanese, don't quit your day job kid. Leave Japanese to those who are native or fluent (︶︿︶)＝凸
clearly support a dysfunctional relationship, rather the a healthy relationship. Ps this story creeps out but cheers lol